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Xander and Yet ANOTHER Demon

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Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very well written Andrew, not exactly annoying in small doses but irritating.
Comments from author:
But what a good researcher! :-) I couldn't resist the sci-fi refs. They just sort of popped out of the keyboard onto my screen.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
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This is really fun so far. I hope he realizes that he doesn't have to kill her soon. After all they don't kill Clem, etc.
Comments from author:
Trust me on this one.
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from eset
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Another great chapter, look forward to more.
Review By [eset] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from serenityselena
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I`ve got to say that it`s so amusing reading through the Scoobies` theories.... though they are wrong they are using the available information so they are bound to get some things wrong...
eagerly awaiting to read more of Xander interaction with the "demon" Anise... *smirk*
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from AllenPitt
Review:
I just don't believe Anise is allowed out without an escort. So they're being discreet,parked outside & waiting for her to come out, maybe...
For that matter maybe there's a ship in orbit waiting to 'port her out if needed. Asgard tech and all that.
Tejaya the slayer helped drive the Goa'uld out. I bet she'd know that name.. Meanwhile we're all waiting for Andrew to find out "Wormhole Extreme" is real!
The best part of this story, so far, is that Anise is totally oblivious to the effect her little dinner & drinks thing is having on the new Council. I envision more and more people being called & brought in on this, more people doing research, etc etc. Kind of funny.
At some point Willow might try to get into the SGC's computers (using magic to help with that) not realizing it's got extreme levels of security probably backed by Goa'uld/Asgard tech...
Comments from author:
I also refuse to believe the SGC would let Anise loose without an escort. So what's going on? You'll find that part out in chapter 5. That's... what? Three days away? So on Sunday.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Aegis
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Alright, a bit more meat on the bones now. Like others have pointed out, Xander seems a wee bit too gung-ho on the killing. So far, Anise has not really done anything to indicate that she's a threat, except a vague reference to the Goa'uld, but on the other hand, she did volunteer that information. I would've liked a more cautiously investigative approach, though sure, evaluating how dangerous she might be is not out of the question.

Don't forget about Freya though. Now that's just made for misunderstandings, what with Xander's experience with possession, vampiric and otherwise. Anise and Freya were depicted as fairly different in terms of personality on the show, so it should give him so pause if she suddenly acts more human. Would be fun to see his take on the whole split personality thing too, especially before he got to know the score. Might make him less inclined to kill her too, knowing there's a human in there.
Comments from author:
It's like you've been reading ahead! :-) Xander *will* meet Freya. Soon. Just remember that he's only spent a matter of minutes with Anise so far.
Review By [Aegis] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Gideon
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Great work! Everything Anise is saying is true, but it fits into almost the opposite sense when fitted into Xander's worldview. I am wondering if it is in character for Anise to do something Heroic and challange all of Xander's assumptions? Nah, probably not. I don't think he will be able to drink her under the table though, and appreciating her rear view is already a bad sign for him sleeping alone tonight :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
can't wait for more
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from MarbleGlove
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This is so very awesome. I love the premise and the character development and world building just keep getting better. You manage to show a great deal about the Scoobies while still keeping the focus on Xander and Anise. Plus, you are actually developing Anise as a character in a much more realistic way than I've read before. Well done. I very much look forward to more. Keep writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, well at least Xander is being guided towards, don't kill, if there's a big thing going on killing your only source of information would not be good. Didn't quite follow the whole Giles this, Buffy that, Dawn that except for your anecdote about the prank. Not quite sure if you meant that Xander and Andrew share a bed or just share an apartment.
Comments from author:
Xander and Andrew share a city. That's it. In this story, Andrew is straight and has a girlfriend. There's a lot less Andrew-bashing in this story than in a lot of material.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Addlcove
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looking promising so far, eagerly waiting for more.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from cannonfly
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The title of the story made me skip over it a couple of times (not a big fan of caps lock, AT ALL ;)). But other than that, I'm loving this story so much. I know you just updated, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep doin' what you do.
Comments from author:
I have to agree on the capslock. But I wanted to emphasize that particular word, and I didn't think I could use HTML or FUDcode to do it.
Review By [cannonfly] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from DarthPayne
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More chapters are needed. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Sunhawk
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This is really coming along nicely! And I wonder if the SGC people will be watching for folks pinging their senior people like Carter and Jackson, most likely those records are 'tagged' so if somebody looks them up they in turn get checked out... which could lead to some amusement I think.
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
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