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Xander and Yet ANOTHER Demon

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Review of chapter "Xander and the Appetizers" from VillageOrchid
Review:
When the A-word isn't Apocalypse. Thanks for continuing. He's holding his own with her, without revealing any intelligence yet. On the plus side, it means that she may start to think more of the so called "average" Tauri.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Appetizers" from Compston
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Interesting story so far in these four chapters... It seems that so far you have caught both characters personnality and it will be interesting to see what Xander does when he learns some
more about Anise and her passanger.... More please... MORE MORE MORE MORE>>>>>>>
Review By [Compston] • Date [18 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* collision course anyone?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
The automatic must kill seems out of place for later season Scoobs.
Comments from author:
Well, it's not an automatic 'must kill' as much as an 'if she's not a harmless demon she's a threat' response. As anyone who has watched Xander's dating history ought to be thinking.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [18 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Bluejello
Review:
So... count me hooked!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [18 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very well written Andrew, not exactly annoying in small doses but irritating.
Comments from author:
But what a good researcher! :-) I couldn't resist the sci-fi refs. They just sort of popped out of the keyboard onto my screen.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
This is really fun so far. I hope he realizes that he doesn't have to kill her soon. After all they don't kill Clem, etc.
Comments from author:
Trust me on this one.
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from eset
Review:
Another great chapter, look forward to more.
Review By [eset] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from serenityselena
Review:
I`ve got to say that it`s so amusing reading through the Scoobies` theories.... though they are wrong they are using the available information so they are bound to get some things wrong...
eagerly awaiting to read more of Xander interaction with the "demon" Anise... *smirk*
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from AllenPitt
Review:
I just don't believe Anise is allowed out without an escort. So they're being discreet,parked outside & waiting for her to come out, maybe...
For that matter maybe there's a ship in orbit waiting to 'port her out if needed. Asgard tech and all that.
Tejaya the slayer helped drive the Goa'uld out. I bet she'd know that name.. Meanwhile we're all waiting for Andrew to find out "Wormhole Extreme" is real!
The best part of this story, so far, is that Anise is totally oblivious to the effect her little dinner & drinks thing is having on the new Council. I envision more and more people being called & brought in on this, more people doing research, etc etc. Kind of funny.
At some point Willow might try to get into the SGC's computers (using magic to help with that) not realizing it's got extreme levels of security probably backed by Goa'uld/Asgard tech...
Comments from author:
I also refuse to believe the SGC would let Anise loose without an escort. So what's going on? You'll find that part out in chapter 5. That's... what? Three days away? So on Sunday.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Aegis
Review:
Alright, a bit more meat on the bones now. Like others have pointed out, Xander seems a wee bit too gung-ho on the killing. So far, Anise has not really done anything to indicate that she's a threat, except a vague reference to the Goa'uld, but on the other hand, she did volunteer that information. I would've liked a more cautiously investigative approach, though sure, evaluating how dangerous she might be is not out of the question.

Don't forget about Freya though. Now that's just made for misunderstandings, what with Xander's experience with possession, vampiric and otherwise. Anise and Freya were depicted as fairly different in terms of personality on the show, so it should give him so pause if she suddenly acts more human. Would be fun to see his take on the whole split personality thing too, especially before he got to know the score. Might make him less inclined to kill her too, knowing there's a human in there.
Comments from author:
It's like you've been reading ahead! :-) Xander *will* meet Freya. Soon. Just remember that he's only spent a matter of minutes with Anise so far.
Review By [Aegis] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Gideon
Review:
Great work! Everything Anise is saying is true, but it fits into almost the opposite sense when fitted into Xander's worldview. I am wondering if it is in character for Anise to do something Heroic and challange all of Xander's assumptions? Nah, probably not. I don't think he will be able to drink her under the table though, and appreciating her rear view is already a bad sign for him sleeping alone tonight :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
can't wait for more
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from MarbleGlove
Review:
This is so very awesome. I love the premise and the character development and world building just keep getting better. You manage to show a great deal about the Scoobies while still keeping the focus on Xander and Anise. Plus, you are actually developing Anise as a character in a much more realistic way than I've read before. Well done. I very much look forward to more. Keep writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
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