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Xander and Yet ANOTHER Demon

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Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, well at least Xander is being guided towards, don't kill, if there's a big thing going on killing your only source of information would not be good. Didn't quite follow the whole Giles this, Buffy that, Dawn that except for your anecdote about the prank. Not quite sure if you meant that Xander and Andrew share a bed or just share an apartment.
Comments from author:
Xander and Andrew share a city. That's it. In this story, Andrew is straight and has a girlfriend. There's a lot less Andrew-bashing in this story than in a lot of material.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Addlcove
Review:
looking promising so far, eagerly waiting for more.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from cannonfly
Review:
The title of the story made me skip over it a couple of times (not a big fan of caps lock, AT ALL ;)). But other than that, I'm loving this story so much. I know you just updated, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep doin' what you do.
Comments from author:
I have to agree on the capslock. But I wanted to emphasize that particular word, and I didn't think I could use HTML or FUDcode to do it.
Review By [cannonfly] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from DarthPayne
Review:
More chapters are needed. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Sunhawk
Review:
This is really coming along nicely! And I wonder if the SGC people will be watching for folks pinging their senior people like Carter and Jackson, most likely those records are 'tagged' so if somebody looks them up they in turn get checked out... which could lead to some amusement I think.
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Potty Break" from Oxnate
Review:
I'll be honest. I wasn't a huge fan of the first chapter. Too much exposition crammed into too small a space. (show. don't tell)

But the story is certainly getting better and better. Last two chapters have been very good. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
There's a reason they call me Ms. Exposition. :-)

That, and I find that when I write Xander or Willow, they babble. Not as bad as a couple of my own characters (like Aquerna), but a lot.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written Xander and his tentative first steps with Anise.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from Zyanadryn
Review:
ooohh....good begining! looking forward to your next update! and how long is it going to be that Xander finds out that there are aliens? looking forward to his BIG surprise!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from eset
Review:
Great story so far!

I can't wait to see the reactions from Slayer HQ (Is Andrew listening in live at the call center? Have the mini's started a betting pool?). How did Anise get off the base? Will SG-1 come looking for her? What lore does the Council have on the Goa-uld?

Keep up the good work, can't wait for more!
Review By [eset] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Interesting!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from uten
Review:
I like the story so far, but I'm a little confused about the base assumption. Why is Xander assuming he will have to kill her? Xander plays kitten poker regularly and has quite a few demon friends at the end of the series, as well as being aware of many non-hostile breeds. So, I can understand wariness, intel gathering, and even threats to keep her from attacking the "poor defenseless humans", but unless she attacks, why would he assume evil?

And given some of her comments, I could see him thinking alien at some point, as she has mentioned other planets, rather than dimensions, and Xander has always been a bit nerdy.

So basically, I really like the story so far, but a little more clarification on the assumptions might help. And given the conversation is being sent back to Slayer HQ, seeing their reaction eventually might be nice.

I also can't wait until SGC hear about the conversation Anise and Xander are having.. Not including all the 'Top Secret' info she is dropping, the fact that her dinner partner thinks the conversation ordinary will have them racing to track Xander down - assuming they have separated, or that Anise even explains what happened while she was wandering the Tau'ri homeworld.
Comments from author:
Well, you'll just have to read some future chapters to have all those things explained, because (as we know) nothing goes simply in Xander's life.
Review By [uten] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from silasd
Review:
It's promising so far. At 5K words, it's too soon to really say, though.

I hope you're not going to do a meet-and-greet with both sides spilling all their secrets five minutes after they get together. Gah!

I like how Xander's playing it cool, secret agent style. And I like your choice of Freya/Anise as the character to begin the crossover. It/she is certainly the SG character that's not particularly concerned with keeping a secret from the Earth monkeys.

How quickly will gorgets (throat armor) become standard work attire for the NSWC? Or will the existing gorgets just be modified to protect the back of the neck?
Review By [silasd] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Great scooby epilogue.

Yep, if Anise is traveling without hand devices, cloaking or related tech Xander can take her out.

Post Season 10? Guess that means if there's any teleporting saves to be done it will be by Earth ships.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
This has real potential! Tracking this one now.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from ScreamingFlamingos
Review:
Sneaky Xander!!! More More More!!!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
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