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Xander and Yet ANOTHER Demon

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Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from ScreamingFlamingos
Review:
Sneaky Xander!!! More More More!!!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from serenityselena
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oh my.... Xander just had to meet Anise.... hm, I wonder if anyone knows where she is...
things will surely be very entertaining....
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Comments from author:
In a couple chapters you'll find out just what the SGC knows about Anise's whereabouts.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from Bobboky
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Very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from mithrilandtj
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So when is Xander going to clue in that she's an alien, not a demon?
Comments from author:
Unless she tells him, why would he ever suspect? The Scoobies have seen tons of weird-looking demons and weird demon devices. And Giles' books state that the astria porta is a demon device that opens into demon dimensions. There's no way a dedicated demon hunter would fall for some lame 'I am an alien form outer space' routine.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from michaelangelo
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Well that was a surprisingly pleasing read, I have only ever read one other Xander/Anise story. I pretty much thought it may have been Teal'c who was the "Demon", then thought it was Vala with the description, I like how you played that. A pleasant story combining a lesser used SG-1 character.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from AnFan
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I like the chapter. Xander is only getting himself into more trouble :)

I can't wait till you have her partner speak up (can't remember names). That is going to blow Xander's mind. Also, even with the whole Tok'ra being symbiots and not being the "good guys" in at least Jack's eyes, they will definitely be counted as tolerable at least by the new watchers once they learn the whole story. Wonder if this would cut into the possibility that she will attach herself to Xander?

You know (well, now you will) I just read a story about Xander plying the Goh'auld (hate looking up spelling on story specific items, sorry) specifically Anis, with alcohol so that he could chat with the host more. Even got her to demand from Anis that they get "Death by Chocolate" as a necessary trade item in agreements from Earth :)

This works well as a story even without Xander becoming a love interest. Hope to see more soon. I love the interactions so far and can't WAIT to her Andrew call in Willow and Buffy from the call center saying that Xander was about to be eaten by a new demon. All the while implying that Xander is encouraging the behavior! hehehe Andrew will have to avoid being killed by Xander and Xander will have to start talking quickly trying to defend himself and say it isn't so. :D
Review By [AnFan] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Problem" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
This is fun. Lets see where it goes!
Comments from author:
Next chapter on Wednesday.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from tosca
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Very entertaining! :-D
Review By [tosca] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from AllenPitt
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If he does go ahead and kill her, I have the feeling that would open a world of trouble for him. Heh. Also... the SGC is a hugely important program for the US. Way above "Initiative" level. The gov. would never agree to shut it down no matter who asked them to.
If the people listening are smart, and look up "Daniel Jackson" that alone might lead them somewhere interesting, i.e. his 'weird theories' and all that.
If so, they might realize it's aliens not demons and have someone racing to the site, to try and keep him from attacking her. And damn. He's cold. She's a demon, so that means death? Good thing he never met Lorne.
For that matter--attack & kill her, the Goa'uld leaves her & enters him? Ouch.
Wouldn't she have an escort? I can't imagine the SGC letting her go wander the streets at night alone. Major diplomatic incident if anything happened to her. She's got to have bodyguards/minders maybe staying outside, but watching?
Comments from author:
The real problem is that if you look up 'Daniel Jackson' you will find *thousands* of hits. That will make their searches harder. Jackson is an incredibly common name (in America at least), nearly up there with Johnson and Smith. As for Anise's escort... you'll find out about that in chapter 5.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from VillageOrchid
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Taking it slow, but good to see more so soon. I'm curious about Xander's open line on his phone. It is able to filter through clothing? At least they'd have gotten a hit from "Samantha Carter" and "Daniel Jackson" by now, even if they couldn't quite make out Goaould. The good part was that she seemed aware of but against them. So he may get a reply that she's a neutral, but they still want to see what the government is up to. I guess Xander would be relieved that he doesn't have to kill her. However, if I recall, "snakey" will be able to metabolize the alochol content better than a normal human.
Comments from author:
Yes, the phone is magically enhanced, so the call center is hearing everything. And you will soon find out just what they have been able to pull up in what really amounts to minutes.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from Yeffaros
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Interesting story,, makes me wonder why her host hasn't entered the conversation though.
Comments from author:
Well, you might have to give it an hour or so.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from link
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I hope with Xander's influence, Anise do not end up being such a bitch. I kind of like how you write Anise here. It really remind me of Anya. Hope to see new chapter soon :)
Review By [link] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from Angbard
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I approve of your characterization of Xander as a potentially murderous xenophobic buffoon.

Since the symbiote neutralizes most all toxins from the host-body- Anise should drink him under the table.

I hopes she breaks his arm when he tries to kill her.

kudos!
Comments from author:
Heh. They're both more complex characters than shown so far. And things will get more complex.
Review By [Angbard] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from Hecatonchires
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Anise = haughty from memory.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander and the Dinner Order" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Excellent story so far. Xander and Anise make for a funny "date". I look forward to events escalating.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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