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Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Three" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Three" from Mcspender
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Green died stabbed by ADAM's bone... somehow, that's a fitting end, being boned like that :P (Yeah, the pun was intentional ;) :P).

I hope Buffy uses some form of body armor for this op. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Two" from CageFire
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Great new chapter. Keep up the awesome work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Two" from slatergirl
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Ok I'm in favor of Buffy going down and kicking ass and can someone please slap Riley.
Comments from author:
Who do you want? Cuz Donna slaps him, next year. And then chews him out. And basically needs the Doctor to physically drag her away from Riley, because she's so pissed off.

And as for Buffy... she's working on it.
Review By [slatergirl] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Two" from Mcspender
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The Brigadier is awesome =D!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Two" from ShalaDakiri
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Go Brigadier!

Good to see the good guys pooling intel and resources.

Out of curiousity, are you going to have Liz Shaw still around to help out?"
Comments from author:
No, sorry. Just the Brigadier.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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I'd still emasculate him. Hard. With two bricks. There are no redeeming features to any of the Initiative personnel as you have written them, including Föhrlich and Finn. They are Speer saying they are very sorry to get out of prison time.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty One" from potterinu
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Talking. They talked. I can't believe Buffy found out and Riley did not get the every luving crap kicked out of him. I HATE him. Hes worse than Green. Selfish jealous selfrightous bastard.
Comments from author:
Um... she hits him later. And... take my word for it, because I haven't written this yet, but... in the way future (2005)... the one person who gets the best poetic justice for all of this... winds up being Riley Finn.

Muahahahahaha!
Review By [potterinu] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty One" from Mcspender
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"We've got to get the Doctor out of there," said Buffy. "Adam's just had two months of tests from your Initiative scientists to learn exactly how the Doctor's biology works. Now he's cashing in. Big time. And every single person in the universe is going to suffer."

Yep, you wanted the girl, you can get her Riley, bad thing you basically screwed over the entire freaking Universe, but that's what you get for being a petty jealous coward.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty One" from CageFire
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Yet another great chapter. It seems like things are finally coming to a head. At least I think so. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty" from Nummy
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Oh my goodness, Finally! I hope Riley gets what he deserves. Im gonna be honest and say that I really disliked the guy on the show.
So I'm really glad Buffy finally knows. And goodness gracious I really hope the doctor gets a little relief now. There is just an extreme amount of whump! Glad the women scientist finally saw reason. And I really hope Green gets impaled by a demon.

Great writing as always. Feel free to make things a little easier on the Doctor. ;)
Review By [Nummy] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty" from seacheldymoo
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I wish I had a time machine to transport myself to tomorrow, so I could read the next chapter asap! But not the Doctors.. oh no.. then I'd never get where I originally wanted to go (and I probably wouldn't care;) )
Review By [seacheldymoo] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the awesome work. Well, it's finally going to come out. About time too.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty" from MarcusSLazarus
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Nice to see the Brigadier showing up at last; I just hope that the Doctor returns to full mental stability in time to talk with his oldest friend...

Oh, and Riley REALLY needs a pummelling at some point soon for what he's done.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty" from Letomo
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Heh, heh, heh. Last line definitely got a chuckle.

Glad to see the Brig has shown up to clear things up, and nicely played with how well he knows the Doctor, with the line about how the Doctor occasionally does rely on those guns he seems to despise.

The Doctor is an odd sort of pacifist, after all. Actually, if you watch his early shows, he really isn't a pacifist; he almost killed a man once. He has only grown more pacafistic as time passed, though much of it was probably from how he felt superior for outsmarting enemies, and part from his part in the Time War.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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