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Review of chapter "Special Lessons" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
You ever notice how they talk about happy memories for the patronus then seem to stumble over themselves in an effort to make sure he doesn't GET any?

And, my big question, WHY ON EARTH doesn't Harry point out he needs more happy memories and time away from the damned dementors?
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Lessons" from starwolf
Review:
great to see you back. can Buffy feel wormtail in the rat?
keep up the great work.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quick Thinking" from AtotheM
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I like that Buffy isn't able to instantly save the day, so many fic writers sort of go over and above with that. Neat story so far, look forward to more :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quick Thinking" from Rich
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Personally, I would have made Buffy's patronus a cougar, like her spirit guide on the show. But the image of the wolf howling before disappearing was good, it's like she was marking her territory. More generally, I like this story. You've got the characters right; they all act and sound like the originals. I think the idea of Buffy and Lupin being related works well.
Review By [Rich] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quick Thinking" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Very cool about the patronus spell. First, that Buffy's would be a wolf like her brother and second, that Remus thinks Harry should know it instead of waiting for Harry to ask.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Found Again" from AtotheM
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Ooo

Great start!

Hope you keep posting, I'm really liking her relationship with Lupin and even her sorta-friendship with Snape.

Can't wait for more :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Found Again" from Misty
Review:
Beautifully done. thank you
Review By [Misty] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Half Truth" from bradsan
Review:
You know Hermione has to learn that she don't have to know everything and that sometimes knowing something isn't always good thing. Ron and Hermione are the same as Xander and Willow only Hermione is a degree worse. They has to learn curiosity kills the cat. When she asks questions like Harry did they could get more answers than snooping around and do harm with what they could discover. They never think things through when they are curious and I don't agree completely that it is to protect Harry.
Ron and Hermione wants to know everything even when it is none of their business. Look how they treated Harry when he didn't tell them everything or was asked to keep things quiet. They did the same but that was alloud in their eyes. So I don't think that it is only to protect Harry.

I think a lesson needs to be learn. I don't know if you agree with me but it would be cool if they were shown what could happen when you don't ask questions first before you go for researche.

Again a good chapter. Love it, keep writing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Half Truth" from WolfWriter
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One thing that bugs me about Hermione is that she can be a very Negative Nancy, not just in fanfic, but also in canon.

She simply HAS to disparage and try to disprove things that Harry tells her, and go snooping where it's none of her business.

I can almost guarantee that if she finds out about Buffy being Isabella, she will open her big mouth and tell people, who will tell the Ministry, who will put out a kill on sight order on her.

And if Buffy dies, or kills members of the Ministry, it will be Hermione's fault. Something she will never admit to or be punished for.

Don't get me wrong, this is a great story. I really like how she gets back into sync with her brother so quickly. Maybe she can recommend some meditation exercises for him to deal with Mooney?

But Hermione's need to ALWAYS be right about people, and her impressions of them, even when she's clearly in the wrong; that just irks me.

I know that she's simply concerned for Harry; but he's had the album for TWO whole years, and the pictures were sent by people who knew his parents. How in the heck could any of them been forged by Buffy if she wasn't in England for a number of years, just for the off chance that Harry would get them?
Comments from author:
This is all very true and I agree that Hermione is a bit stuck in her ways. This did annoy me a bit in the books, although half of the time she is right about some things or manages to find out stuff that no one else could.

I purposefully put her in this position in the story so that the boys would look into it more. Who knows, maybe when they find out Buffy was telling the truth she will be a bit less vocal with her opinions in the future. And the photos, to be honest I have no idea if wizard photos can actually be forged or not, I just thought I would add it as an argument for Hermione.

As for the Buffy and Remus thing, this is actually something I'm unsure about so I'm glad that you like it. I wanted them to get along well, to get back to the kind of relationship they had before Buffy left, but I kinda feel as if it's happened a bit too quickly. I guess I just don't want it to look like Buffy has moved on and all but forgotten the world (and all the people) she has just left behind.

Anyway, I'll stop rambling on now. Thank you so much for your review :)
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Half Truth" from starwolf
Review:
looking forward to more. nice flow blends in very well so far.
keep up the great work, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Attack" from bradsan
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Oh like it already. It's totally a different story from all the stories a read before.

Can't wait when Buffy meets Ron's rat her Slayer sense would go in high alert because the evil and darkness it spreads and not being a real rat. The same will be with Sirius when she meets him only she won't sense any evil or darkness only that he isn't a real doggie.

If Remus always kept her wand with him believing that Buffy isn't dead. I believe he won't take anything out off her vault believing she will come back some day. Could you imagine how much is in there, even when you aren't rich 15 years is long time to gain interest. She will be rich by now and lets face it share it with her brother so he is going to get it easier to.

Hoping for a quick update.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review :). To be honest I hadn't even thought about her vault, but you make a good point. I might just have to include that in somewhere :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Starting Over" from AstridWinchester
Review:
very original, I love it! It would be cool if you wrote a prologue too, about Isabella Lupin.
Comments from author:
Wow, I've actually been working on something like that, will hopefully be up soon. Thanks for your review and recomendation :D
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Starting Over" from Misty
Review:
Just found it, really like it. Thank you very much. (love the fact she's Remus's -My joint fave character along with Luna & Hermione :)- little sister)
Review By [Misty] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Starting Over" from (Moderator)Ava
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It's refreshing to see a Buffy'centric Harry Potter crossover that doesn't take place right after season two. You've got an interesting concept here and I'm curious to see where you take it.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Starting Over" from AllenPitt
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Hm.. so the world has been slayer-free since she was called, and in this world it's been a long time. One would think the council on this world would be pretty desperate; not to mention, vampires & the like would be running wild. Would the council 'here' detect her presence? Who knows, maybe Spike will appear here from the amulet or something?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 May 12] • Not Rated
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