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Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from MarcusSLazarus
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The exact nature of the Never was a bit confusing at first, but the circumstances of Sam arriving in it when Castiel took his body from the cage seemed to make sense- in a nutshell, Sam tried to follow his body but W&H ‘grabbed’ him when they tried to catch Castiel, right?-, and the events that led to him being trapped in the Orb of Thesulah made perfect sense, to say nothing of his ability to communicate with Dawn due to her unique origins.

Their return to Sam’s world was a bit abrupt, but it certainly gave Dawn an interesting opportunity to put Sam’s soul back after dealing with his body, and Dean and Castiel’s reaction to the transformation was excellent (I would have liked to have seen a scene where Dawn had to convince Dean that Sam was in the Orb, but what was here instead was still pretty good).

Plus, of course, the final confrontation with Dawn and the angels was excellent; an independent perspective to remind Castiel of what he sacrificed to stand by the Winchesters in the past, followed by an EXCELLENT moment as he gives everything he has to atone for his mistake (Although I hope you’ll write that sequel soon; people DO still need to get back in touch with their homes, after all).

Keep up the great work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Dream of Sammy" from grouchie
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I was just reading what you wrote at the start of your fifth chapter I say you keep going the story is good and if someone does not like it fine they don't have to read it but to say things like that just shows how Dumb they are just keep writing and have in yourself you are doing great
Review By [grouchie] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from maxthehobbit
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Good characterization of Dawn, my favorite Buffy character. In the sequel ... a naughty Buffy with an angel, that's rich!
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from DebraN
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I enjoyed the way you wove your story through both dimensions. You did a great job with everyones characterizations. I loved the way Sam and Dawn interacted. I hope you will follow this up with another story. I'd like to see what happens with Cas. Watching how Dawn settles in with Bobby and the Winchester would be fun too. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from Xayian
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Very, very, very good! And I'm so glad you're doing a sequel. I think as far as originality goes, you've got it covered. Not to say that someone else hasn't done the Key to purgatory bit, yours is just what caught my attention.

Now as to Cas and Buffy? I'm thinking that since Dean was basically Cas's mentor on the opposite sex, Cas should act accordingly. (Please see "Free to be You and Me". And then there was that time Cas watched porn. Lol) In other words, that pairing would be awesome!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from airythia
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I loved this story so much. I really hope you do the sequel. Personally i like the idea of buffy/cas esp since he's now in the never. Besides, dean still tentatively has lisa at this point (i think). I need to know what happened to Raphael and if cas is now the angel that w&h needed for whatever nefarious plans they have!

Thank you so much for continuing and finishing this story. :)
Review By [airythia] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from RHatch
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awesome
Review By [RHatch] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paved with Good Intentions" from airythia
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I just started reading this and it's awesome! I can't tell you how many times I actually laughed out loud due to something that happened in the story. Dawn is hilarious. I'm totally with Dawn's line of thinking though. Only one morning with Sam? That sucks!

Can't wait for another update!
Review By [airythia] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paved with Good Intentions" from RHatch
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awesomeness
Review By [RHatch] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Opportunity Kicks in a Door" from Bunney
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Yikes! Is it wrong that I'd pay to watch that as well as see deans face later? Lol :). Great job! I wanna see the rest now ;)

Later and love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Opportunity Kicks in a Door" from Xayian
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Well damn. I wanna love every second of it to. ;0)

Another good one. I was wondering if those two would get some quality time in before Cas screwed it up.
Review By [Xayian] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Opportunity Kicks in a Door" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Opportunity Kicks in a Door" from AbigaelRose
Review:
great new chapter!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Good Deed" from AbigaelRose
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Great update hon! I hope to hear more!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Good Deed" from Xayian
Review:
Again, nice. Very nice. I love how you wrote the so-Winchester reunion. Short and sweet and "soul-ful" ;0). I was expecting Dawn to have to work more towards getting Sam back together again but your way was way less complicated and kept the story moving.

Til next chapter! Happy writing!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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