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Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from randyzoopurple
Review:
omg fucken cool doesnt even hit the radar. loved hope to get another update soon:)
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you so much! :D
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from Mcspender
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Nice to see you around again =)!!. So either Jess or Oz are Tony's son??. Interesting, veeery interesting!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yep! It's good to be back. Yep, but you'll have to read on to see which one, lol. Tx.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, no -- not Oz!
Comments from author:
Yea, Oz is in some trouble.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from (Current Donor)ElzaCBoe
Review:
more.... i want more... pleas.... pretty pleas with a cherry on the top :P
Comments from author:
Writer block, all I can say, but I haven't forgotten it. I have half a chapter written up, all I have to do is finish it...eventually. Thanks for the review. :D
Review By [(Current Donor)ElzaCBoe] • Date [20 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from bradsan
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Can't wait what will be next.
So Sineya is showing huh. Can't wait when she is totally wheelchair free. On the other hand a hell of a disguise. Who expect a girl in a wheelchair so dangerous. The blond act won't fit because she already give to much away. I think.

Hope real live will give you a break so you can update this story because it's good so far.

Good job.
Comments from author:
I am working on it, but writer's block is killing me. That's exactly my thoughts on the wheelchair. Thank you so much! :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from Kaleidofox
Review:
God, you really need to continue this!

I really want to see her meet SHIELD and find out how she is connected to Loki and Thor. Must have more!!
Comments from author:
I will, but real life is being a pain.

You'll find out eventually, lol.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from kittenpoker
Review:
Glad you're still writing on this story!! It's great to read more, even if I'm a tiny bit confused. Love it, keep writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The confusion will clear in the next chapter...hopefully. :D
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from hand
Review:
I vote for either Cap/Buffy or Hawkeye/Buffy. Really anything that isn't a threesome. Cap in a threesome just seems way too out of character for me.
Comments from author:
Thansk for the vote. Haha, that is true. 1940 thinking and threesome just don't go together, lol.
Review By [hand] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from AllenPitt
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SO.... her talent tells her which path is dangerous, which is safe, something like that? Also what someone is feeling....?
Comments from author:
So far yes. We, as people, already have a sense that tells us when danger is about, hair standing on end. Survival instinct. We also when watching someone can tell emotions. If they are upset or happy. Lizzie is more intune with her surrounding and nature than normal people are. It'll all be explain later. :D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from RevDorothyL
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So glad to see another update of this! And thanks for the clarification about the wolves (I was wondering if somehow Oz and Jesse had become sentient, armored werewolves in this alternate reality, and if so, why it was that they seemed suddenly so much more hostile to Buffy, as well as to her captors/torturers). Now, I can go back to suspecting that Jesse and Oz may instead be responsible for the computer wizardry that's been frustrating Nick Fury, 'shielding' Buffy from video surveillance, etc.. :)
Comments from author:
Sorry it's took me so long. Muse has been uncooperative. I actually had that thought myself and I was like 'uh, everyone may not know that Greki and Freki that Odin mention in the interlude were wolves' lol. You might be right, but you'll have to wait and see. *grins*
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from kelvin
Review:
really like what you have so far
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [kelvin] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from DarthPayne
Review:
What will Odin think of what happened to his wolves...
Comments from author:
You'll get to see in the next chapter. *Grins*
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from souldriven
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Yay! Update! Woohoo! An awesome update at that and- hey, did Jesse manage to date Cordelia in this universe!? Huh. Well, I could see it happening. It was almost happening after he got vamped implying that Cordelia might have been protesting too much. poor Fury and Odin though, Buffy is going to drive one-eyed men mad.

Also, I don't care for Spuffy, at all, but the 'loose.. ends... this... bitch' seemed like a reference to that one line from the show and hey, I'm all for Spike and Buffy friendship. So win.
Comments from author:
Yep, finally got it done. You got it! I thought no one would notice that, they'll be back story later. Yea, I know. I thought Jesse and Cordy had a spark, but alas getting turned into an undead minion sucks.

Aw, you found out my master plan.

I dont' either, and it was a reference to that. Glad you caught it. :D
Review By [souldriven] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Part 2 of 3" from DaBear
Review:
The only issue with Captain/Buffy is that it's just a ramped up remix of Buffy/Riley. I'd prefer Hawkeye... ehh whichever you go with will be good.

I really enjoy this story, thank you for writing it :)
Comments from author:
Yea, that's one of my worries if I go with the Cap. But still up the air, thanks for the vote.

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Review By [DaBear] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: Shake Things Up" from Davee
Review:
Lovely to read! Can't wait for more. I am voting Hawkeye and Lizzie.!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! And thanks for the vote as well. :D
Review By [Davee] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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