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Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
OK you said you would update in a month, several months ago. : ) Sorry I get that you have a real life but I wanna read more. wishing for more except not using the w word. because then something bad would happen. Still cant help my silent wishing though.
Comments from author:
I have been trying, but the chapters just won't write. I've hit writers block bad. I hoping my little trip to Florida will reawaken my muse, and I will be able to continue this. If not, I am tempt to allow someone to adopt it and take it on since I seem to be getting nowhere with it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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I just found this and read it and longed for more. It hasn't been updated in a long time though and I was wondering if you had abandoned it. I hope you haven't. Please you have to come back to this one and finish it. : ) more please?
Comments from author:
I haven't abandoned it. I just haven't found the time to finish up the latest chapter. I will update it the next month though, maybe even this weekend. Thanks for your review.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from Zarthrax
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This is an interesting take on things. I hope it updates soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :D
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from stonewar
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oh boy I love secret Stark love-children
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [stonewar] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from Chaoskitten
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So.......Jesse/Loki (if you write slash) a) to annoy Tony buy mostly b) to have someone actually choose Loki first.


Extra love if Jesse has a Hate!Thor on first sight thing going.
Comments from author:
I've actually toyed with idea of Jesse being gay. For some reason it hit me the other day. Loki/Jesse would be a fun pairing, but we'll see where the keyboard takes me. Thank you for the review.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from purrfus
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Found this today. So many chapters all at once was great.

Did Hank get away or is he face down in a watery ditch somewhere?
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. Hank will gets his, and it will be see soon. :D
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from Nightscream
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It's been so long! Good to see you updating again. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
I know. I hope to update again soon. Thank you! :D
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from souldriven
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w[ovblxcmn s'PVBNspcknm'l, you went and made Jesse's dad Tony. I CALLED IT! :-D Also, yaaaaay and update! awesome! I love this story. I wish you had the free time to work on your stories more.

man, I wish I had the time to work on my stuff more. So, so, busy. I've also concluded I can't write Loki without making him OOC and that frustrates me to no end. And all my rotg stuff is on hold because, again, so so very busy. RL is evil.
Comments from author:
I was tossing between Oz and Jesse, but Jesse just felt right. Thank you! I know, I'm estastic I've gotten my muse to cooperate. :D

Well I hope RL stops being a pain, and your muse starts cooperate with you. Hmm, I don't know if I can help with Loki, but perhaps think of other characters who have a similiar character to him? Maybe from another show, perhaps from them you can draw inspiration to make Loki in charater. Hope everything goes well for you.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from randyzoopurple
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omg loved it
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing twice. :D
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from randyzoopurple
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omg loved it
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from bradsan
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"lol" she found it.

Jesse is Tony's son. Well didn't see that coming and the All Father is trying to kill Buffy. He doesn't understand with whom he is dealing. Buffy never follows the rules and always did something you never expect her to do. Darn I love it when they think they can beat her or kill her. His biggest mistake is hurting Oz.

You know putting Tony and Buffy together that they will cause havoc. you do know that, don't yeah. Don't know about Jesse but when he is Tony's son well and looks like him. He can act like a child but underneath. Never mess with something or somebody he cares about. I like your Jesse.

for now we have two computer nerds, one hell of fighter whom is also a great strategists, who can also think on her feet and is smart of her own, people in the picture. Those three together and plotting. They will give the ones after them a hard time.

Can't wait what will come next.
Comments from author:
Uh-huh. :D

I know. I actually was just staring at Eric Balfour picture then noticed he had similar features to Tony and I was like...'hmmm', I could work that. :D Yep, we fear what we don't understand and that it what the All-Father is currently experiencing which isn't something he is used to. Yep, he's going to pay for that, but not through Buffy...but someone else. :D

Oh, I am looking forward to it. Tony and Buffy, the sarcastic duo, is going to be very, very fun. I'm glad you like him, I enjoy fleshig that character out. The group of three is definitely going to be a powerful force to be reckon with. Thank you for the review.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Though We Stumble" from RevDorothyL
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Jesse's bio-dad is Tony Stark!?! Very cool. No wonder he's so good with technology.
Comments from author:
Yep. I thought I would add a twist. :D
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from bradsan
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Darn Oz will become a wolf again. I only hope he will be one who can control his beast and help Buffy fight. She will need some back up and Oz is loyal and trustworthy. Don't know about Jesse. I hope that Jesse won't be a second Xander because for once she deserves friends who don't ask things but except her of who and whom she is. Buffy a 'normal' human and Buffy the Slayer a protector.

Wonder if Barton triggered them with something so they can follow them without them knowing it. Wouldn't surprise if he did but it wouldn't surprise me either if he couldn't.

Great update. Can't wait what will be next. Great job.

Almost forgot. Great fighting scenes they are hard to write and you did good. Compliments.
Comments from author:
Something like that, you'll have to read to see. Buffy does need people who will have her back, and she will have them, eventually. An interesting idea, I had something similar plotted but I kinda like your 'Barton' thing better. lol

Thank you so much! I'll update as soon as I can.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from randyzoopurple
Review:
update please
Comments from author:
I will as soon as I can. Thanks for the review. :D
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 3 of 3" from randyzoopurple
Review:
update please
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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