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Review of chapter "To Fall and Bleed Pt 1 of 3" from Cherokeefox
Review:
very good story. very unique. love it! personally I'm a fan of a Thor pairing, there aren't enough of those.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :D I do love Thor too, but we'll have to see how the pole goes.
Review By [Cherokeefox] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
good Liz got away from Hydra for now and I wonder what will happens next.
Comments from author:
Yep. A lot of chaos will happen.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohaaa poor Joyce hit by a sniper.....not good
nice seeing OZ in this world :)
Comments from author:
It was a tough decision to kill of joyce, :(. Well, then you'll be really happy cuz he might show up more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tainted EDITED" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ok so it seems Hank is somehow working for Hydra and Liz is on her way to find it all out...curios what you have
planned for this fic.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At First Light" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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hmm strange start so far, but knowing your fanarts and the AC story I'll see what you come up with next :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from Jorrie
Review:
Great chapter! I love the fast pace and it had just the right about of information at the same time. I'm glad we were able to see so much action in one chapter and such a big turn in the story. There were a few spelling errors/word replacement issues, but it wasn't too difficult to figure out what you meant to say. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is really quite an exciting story. I liked the overall introduction to this parallel universe and the connection to Buffy. In conclusion, a great plot. Can't wait. I'll be the on the look out for new chapters. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you and yep, it's going to stay pretty faced paced. I was happy to finally write some action scenes and seem to be writing more and more of them in the story. I am talking to someone to beta the story for me, so errors will be taken care of. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from stonewar
Review:
this is good, it could be very dark.
lowered rating due to serious need of the editing. (skipped words and wrong words mostly. reading out loud should help you catch most of those)
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Yea, I'm getting it beta'd now and will probably go back and edited soon.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from alexceasar
Review:
oh, can't wait to see where this is going to lead. good job so far.
Comments from author:
thanks! :D
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from Greywizard
Review:
I'm enjoying this more with each new chapter.

And as far as motivation is concerned, Buffy never saw Joyce murdered before her eyes. I don't think that Lizzie is going to have any difficulty whatsoever taking down every HYDRA minion she finds.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much.

Too true, but Lizzie going to have miles to go to take down Hydra, lol.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from Jezzibel
Review:
Mind-blowing. What a way to begin and end a chapter, especially after all the nice, gentle stuff with shopping anc Oz in the previous one! I applaud you.
Comments from author:
Aw, you're making me blush. Thank you!
Review By [Jezzibel] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Exciting and well executed.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Joyce!! Lots of powerful stuff going on in this one.
Comments from author:
Yep, poor Joyce. And thanks.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from starshinedown
Review:
I like how Lizzie alike, and not alike, Buffy--they were connected, and there's not doubt some things bled over, but she's her own woman. And wow. Poor Lizzie. "Lucky" indeed.

Looking forward to (eventually) finding out how Hank got caught up in Hydra.
Comments from author:
Yep. The more the story goes, you'll see more of that. Don't worry that will be explained soon.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tainted EDITED" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, as expected the scenes where Lizzie is conscious make more sense. I'm wondering how much intel she got about her own world while being in Buffy's world and of course what her powers will be. Enjoying the drama more so than the angst, and hoping this will go somewhere.
Comments from author:
Yep, it's comes together. Wow, that's the second time someone guessed something that may happen in next chapter...:D The angst will have its moments, but with purpose Lizzie will not be as bad. Thanks!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from (Recent Donor)TheDivineDemon
Review:
Liking this, not only because this is the first Buffy centered I've seen in a while where every other Scooby is bashed but because its pretty deep and I keep wondering what's going to happen. I really hope she runs into more alternate versions of her friends, I'm really wondering what they're like.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you like it. And she will run into more alters, you actually get to see them next chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)TheDivineDemon] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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