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Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from Mcspender
Review:
Nice to see Lizzie is willing to do whatever is necessary to fight Hydra. Congratulations, herr Baron Von Struker, you have a very dangerous new enemy.
Cool actions scenes, congratulations. One question, Lizzie has the fragment of the Slayer in herself?.
See ya!.
Comments from author:
Yep, she is and yes he has. :D Thank you. Yea, she does, how that will play out...well, you have to see.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from souldriven
Review:
Gurl, darling, the majority of the chapter is in bold.
Comments from author:
yea, I saw that. Oh, well, I might fix it, but I still have to post a new chapter of AC fic up...so later. lol
Review By [souldriven] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A House Aflame" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
Interesting...
question did you mean to have everything bolded though?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

No, but I'll fix it...eventually, lol.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from Mcspender
Review:
Damn, Hydra does really plays for keeps, and they have both the natural & the supernatural power to back up their threats :S.
Lizzie is in for the fight of her life.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Too true, Hydra is gunning for Lizzie, but she's going to give as good as she gets. Thanks!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from dreameralways
Review:
Poor Lizzie. That really sucks.
Comments from author:
Yep, it does. Thanks for the review!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from souldriven
Review:
.... !!! ..... !!!! .... Okay, okay, I think I can write now. Tell me you did NOT just kill Joyce ala Tara season 6. Please? Not right after we got awesome mom Joyce entering the story. Cause if this does turn out StevexBuffy, Steve and Joyce would get along like... too awesome to describe. Also, for a moment I was feeling the OzxBuffy vibes and thought it was cute. Friendship is okay too. Man, I hope Oz makes it out of this 'arc' okay. I like Oz and its a shame Joss did not want the character around.

Aw, such a shame you killed Joyce. Oh well, the show must go on. I'm curious to see who Oz is paired with as well as what other bad things happened to poor Lizzie.
Comments from author:
I...kinda...maybe did. It was a tough desicion, but it sets Lizzie on a certain path. I honestly don't know what pairing this is going to turn out to be yet, but Joyce and Steve would have gotten along great. In the Buffyverse I always thought there were OzBuffy vibes, but it will only stay friendship in this fic. I have Oz paired with someone else. You'll see in story two. I agree, I think Joss lost out on a good chracter should have kept him more than two seasons.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from Runewolf
Review:
Really interesting so far. I don't think I've seen a "wake up" fic where the Buffy analogue really wasn't Buffy, or Buffy in all but name.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad it's original then. :D
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from dragondawn
Review:
Awesome Chapter, although i hate cliffhangers!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. And don't worry, I'll update soon. :D
Review By [dragondawn] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from SlowMercury
Review:
Very good so far -- I really like your Lizzie. Good for her for trying to become a separate person from Buffy, too. Buffy's goodbye to her was perfect. And the way that Lizzie stood up to the Powers for the sake of the slayer fragment was also very admirable.

I'm assuming that Joyce is dead or dying -- how awful for Lizzie to be sucked into violence in this world as well, although I'm guessing here it's Hank's fault. At least having a connection to the First Slayer, however injured, can help Lizzie cope with that.

I also always love Buffy and Oz, and it's great to see the two as (future?) friends. I hope to see more of Lizzie and Oz. Please keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you like it and Lizzie. I was hoping the goodbye turned out okay, I was worried it was too abrupt. And Lizzie is a firecracker, lol.

That is a good assumption. Yes, it is sad and you'll find out in the next chapter. Too true.

Oz will be staring in the rest of the story, have no fear. :D Thanks again.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from Chan
Review:
Well the first apprent ally maybe near go go oz power ;) Huh Hydra merely erasing rather than destroying any loose comp? This doesn't bode well for Lizzie's laptop Ie: possible tracking etc...

As for slogan The battle for the future begins today.
Comments from author:
Oz may be more in the story, you just have to read to find out. Mwahaha. Nope that certainly doesn't bode well for anyone. :D And I will be making to manips, one for your and the other guy's slogans.
Review By [Chan] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from cmdruhura
Review:
TronTalk Café
Jefferson and Boulavard
Los Angeles, CA
555-5555

The next best thing to being digitized.
or
Get IN to the Internet.
or
Surf the Information Highway.
or
Ahead Warp Factor 10.
Comments from author:
Oooh, those are some good ones. I will definitely throw one in the manip.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and complicated storyline.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And All Was Well" from AllenPitt
Review:
Shades of Tara's last words. So Hank works for Hydra and lost the computer with its files...and Hydra just found out and is sanitizing the connection. i.e. anybody who might have it? Meanwhile...just maybe El. can use the remnants of the First Slayer to get a little slayer power eventually? She's going to need it.
Comments from author:
Glad somebody caught that. Something like, but Hydra is definitely here and that's never good. As for the slayer powers, you just going to have to see.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tainted EDITED" from souldriven
Review:
Oh hey, an update! And lol, using footnotes as well I see? ;-P. I'm starting to see why Lizzie needs the wheelchair but you said it was temporary? Huh. Hank is working with Hydra? That- that- is just this: http://youtu.be/bXEehZOCPFU or at least it does a good job of describing my feelings about Hank. Living four years in an asylum I can see why Buffy would find the internet convenient for catching up with the world.

REPLY - it's just a funny little thing that reminds me of the marvel movieverse version of Hydra.

REPLY 2 - Reread chapter, uh Dawn's there? Or was Lizzie having a 'Buffy' moment. Lol, Joyce is once more dating Ted. Maybe he's a LMD? I'm not sure how I feel about this version of Joyce - less awesome mom. Or not awesome mom yet.
Comments from author:
Yep, footnotes make the world go round. It's temporary and next chapter will start the changes. I will look that up. Yep, the interweb shows good things, but some other things that makes Buffy go looking for something and run into a familiar face.

Edit: It was pretty, though I only just got it now that you explained it, lol. Also to tell you and the other reviewers, I edited the second chapter, so please check it out!

Edit: Yikes, type. No, Dawn's not there...yet or maybe not. You'll have to read to find out, mwhahah! Joyce will get to be a more awesome person, you'll see in next chapter and there's a good explanation.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tainted EDITED" from Chan
Review:
Super soldier never did work out very well wonders if any BTVS chars. might find themselves there or their alternatess.
Comments from author:
Too true. And yes, they will. :D Thanks for the review!
Review By [Chan] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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