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Review of chapter "Prologue" from AllenPitt
Review:
Any chance he'll recognize her as the Key?
Comments from author:
Right now, I'm going with Loki not even knowing anything about the Key existing in the first place.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Grevane
Review:
I am intrigued, no idea where this is going but it looks good so far. Also, walking armor = golem thing from Thor film + wonky trans-dimensional time dilation shenanigans?

Can't wait to see more of this one!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're liking it so far. Let's hope I don't disappoint.

Yep, the walking armor is the Destroyer and Loki is there because of the portal not working like it was supposed to (he's lucky for being alive).
Review By [Grevane] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AonGealach
Review:
So several interesting things i noticed: 1. this takes place in the Avengers Universe 2. Dawn knows that Loki is an Alien and 3. Dawn totally rocks as you've written her. I like it when authors give Dawn a backbone and make her able to stand up for herself. I like that she has at least some control over her innate magic. I would like to see her being either immortal (being able to live forever unless her body is completely destroyed) because of the Key or really long lived and slow to age. I think it would be interesting to see Loki maybe helping Dawn with her magic as well. I love the whole idea for this story and I really hope you post a new chapter soon!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you like how I'm writing Dawn, I wasn't sure about her, :)

And, yes, it takes place in the MCU, as I'm still not familiar enough with the comics. (And it's easier to deal with the Norse Gods and the myths if they're actually aliens instead of their comic version).
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Gideon
Review:
So how long passed for Loki when he was in the black hole? And what part of him was it that was ripped away? Can't wait to find out!
Comments from author:
According to the time line that I found, it has been around two months since Loki fell. What happened to him will come up later in the story.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from karmasfriend
Review:
I like it! Mostly because I just love Loki, so I'm excited to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I promise that from now on chapters will be longer.
Review By [karmasfriend] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I could have dealt with a longer prologue but you tease so nicely, I am looking forward to the next part!
Comments from author:
I must admit that the prologue is *really* short, even for me. Chapters should be around 1500-2000 words, perhaps more, it all depends on how often I plan on updating.

Most probably, I won't update until next week, I still have to take a couple of exams and then I'm free until July.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Nightscream
Review:
Oh Yay! I've been looking forward to a Loki Crossover and not just Thor or the Avengers. :)

Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Comments from author:
Next chapter should be up next. I'll finish writing/editing it after I finish this last two exams.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Very good. Looking forward to move. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks! Both for the review and the banner, :)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from NutsContract
Review:
I APPROVE!!! OH HELL YES!!!! HIDDLES-FEELZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!
Comments from author:
Are you from Tumblr by any chance? XD
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AonGealach
Review:
Oh this is gonna be gooooodddd!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, :)
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Jaylynn
Review:
Curious start and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, :)
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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