Review of chapter "We're Not In Kansas Anymore..." from
erikthevikingReview:
A great Jack and Sam trying not to go there and a classic Teal'c.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it so far; thanks for reading.
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eriktheviking] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're Not In Kansas Anymore..." from
SaiyaSithReview:
Nice chappy! I liked the ending...Jaffa do not bluff, lol! Carter's thoughts in the beginning were also amusing. Wondering about the food situation, though, as it wasn't quite clear, but overall good. Great work! (again) ;-)
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SaiyaSith] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
SaiyaSithReview:
Very nice start. Looking forward to see what's coming next. Good and descriptive, nice characterizations, excellent grammar as well. Happy writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [
SaiyaSith] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
OxnateReview:
Interesting. Tracked.
Comments from author:
Glad you think so, and thanks.
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Oxnate] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated