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Review of chapter "The story begins" from Blackfang
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great story so far. can't wait for more
Review By [Blackfang] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The story begins" from JediKnight
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Very nice job on the new story, I hope to read more of this soon.

-When will characters from "Smallville" be showing up?

-Any pairings for this story?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from midnight
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lol
update soon
good story
Review By [midnight] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from Fayari
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I'll be following this story now.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The story begins" from Morgomir
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Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from LFW
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Bat-mite is a wonderful and chaotic character; what a fun mix you have written.
Looking forward to more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from redhandgrunt
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Very good intro. I found it a little hard to read because of the variable spacing issues, but the story itself was very interesting.
Review By [redhandgrunt] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The story begins" from carmsfic
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Interesting story. Im very impressed with the start you had. Will you be bring Alfred into the story? I hope so. Thanks for posting
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from lillyb
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brilliant work! I love your spin on the do over. I saw a few small problems with grammar but nothing big and you may check your math with Xan's money in the scene with his mother Jessy and Willow after they get the call from his "stock broker". This story is very promising and I will recommending it ASAP.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from Mythological
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Pretty damn good if i do say so myself, feels a bit rushed in places but overall it looks promising
Review By [Mythological] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from RHatch
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loved it, a few typos here and there, but still a good story
Review By [RHatch] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from kizunakat
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Love this story. Just wanted to point out you need to go back and check some of the money amounts. You were off by 1000 dollers at one point. Love the idea and your writing style.Kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from Bobboky
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Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The story begins" from Cdog
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Interesting start so far. Some parts of it seemed a little forced, but they were acceptable.

I'm looking forward to seeing what effect Xander's version of the Batman will have on the Smallville-verse.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The story begins" from DarthPayne
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Hmm, it looks pretty good so far. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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