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Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
A good read with a lot of crossings. Keep it up!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the late review (exams).
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'm sorry it's taken so long to get the battle up. Between work and college times been anything but generous to my writing. It will be coming soon.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Manny thanks:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
XDD I'm reading and writing, this, on two days of no sleep so sorry! But, this is awesome! Xander and Faith arw badass and i'm exited about the battle.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it:) I hope to get the battle up before too long
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from CageFire
Review:
Good chapters. Keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
thank you:)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Another great chapter plot wise. Nice to see this story is moving forward. Looking forward to the fight though....
Comments from author:
thanks. i'm just starting to write the battle now, I've had a few problems getting it off the ground. it will include the revelation of the unnamed woman.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from VillageOrchid
Review:
As per usual, I don't know who half of your supporting characters are but you have some good storytelling (and capitalization errors).
Comments from author:
thanks, most of the characters can be found with a quick wiki-search:) if not it means i made them up.
i'll try to get the cap errors fixed thanks for the heads up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "hemry" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well done. No burned down gym and maybe no time in a mental institution. Also maybe no move to Sunnydale. Looking forward to seeing how au-ey the future might be.
Comments from author:
ill be interested in your reactions to said changes, one of the main differences is that Pike will be coming to sunnyD
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dracula vs. Wolfram & heart" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well done. Also weakening WRH will effect Angel's future or Spike's or Drusilla's if they have one after interacting with Xander and Faith.
Comments from author:
i have a few things which will come from this in the future.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good mixing in of the HP elements, but still using words like "mage" to show that the worlds are blended not exclusive.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle Boston" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hi, Buffalo. I find this chapter improved as well. I "see" a little more of where you're going with the mood and the feel this time as well... and am not trying to track the additional crossovers - just seeing it as the weird world that that Faith and Xander are in (background).
Comments from author:
thanks, thats exactly what i was going for
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the latest chapter, hope to be reading more soon.
After the fight Xander really needs a hair cut and shave.
Comments from author:
thank you, maybe he'll find his way to a barber in the near future.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle for San Francisco: Gathering Forces" from michaelangelo
Review:
Things are heating up, and Voldemort? never expected him. Did somebody dress as him during Halloween too? anyway, thanks for the fast new chapter, it's fantastic!. Funny fact for you Vol de Mort as you no doubt know can mean 'Flight of Death', but did you know it can also mean 'Theft of dead man' in other words body thief. Just goes to prove that boredom, alcohol and Google translate should never be mixed.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review. you actually gave me an idea which will fix a huge problem i was having with the next chapter, thanks.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This appears to be a newer draft of a story you posted here before?

EDIT: Sorry I didn't realize this was a continuation of something you had posted earlier in the year. I was re-reading the first chapter and it seemed -- improved or edited from the last time I read it? Maybe just my mind set.
Comments from author:
im not sure what you mean?

edit: thanks, i actually have done some editing. i'm glad you like it:)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle Boston" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
Review:
who is this Trip guy? Never heard of him.
Comments from author:
guess i still missed a few typos sorry, its supposed to be trick from season three
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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