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Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from dcarson
Review:
Lots of typos and wrong words in this chapter. Barmey for Barney etc.
Comments from author:
thanks for the heads up on Barmy, my spell-check over spell-checked.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from Narf
Review:
Dam fine story. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
thanks, hope you keep reading:)
Review By [Narf] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from wjenks
Review:
Are you going to bring in Fea cause that would rock.Great story
Review By [wjenks] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the new chapter, I hope to read more soon.

-You're going to bring in Fiona Glenanne(sp?) from "Burn Notice" aren't you?
Comments from author:
thanks for the review, i always look forward to hearing you thoughts:) i am adding Feiona Glenanne, it will be a short cameo at first but i have plans for a longer story to come.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from DarthPayne
Review:
You're adding Burn Notice too?

Thats a rare x-over... :)
Comments from author:
yeah i'm adding burn notice. its one of my favorite shows I've never really understood why there are so few stories using it here.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from michaelangelo
Review:
Effin awesome tale ya tell, btw Harris? Irish? you been sippin the Poteen man? it's a Brit name. Which I.R.A is Xander's cousin a member of? Continuity, Real, Provo's or Official? one of their splinter groups? or maybe one of the INLA? you might not think it's important but it is. Xander boasting a member of his family is a member of a terrorist organization is uncool, it's kinda like boasting his cousin is a member of the Taliban.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review.
first,Harris, can be Irish and English but being an Irishman myself i choose to believe hes Irish:)
i terms of the IRA bit. first xander knows that the sort of people the Fitzpatricks are they would trust him knowing that he has links to a group like that, secondly i actually haven't decided which group the relative is, i do realize the big differences between the various incarnations of the IRA so i don't want to rush into saying one. i don't know if i will be doing much with the concept in the future though. i also figured that if it is true, xander wouldn't have revealed it to the scoobies due to the fact of Giles English origins.

ps. assume for the time being that IRA group alluded to are the officials.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle Boston" from Compston
Review:
Thus ends TRICK now where's the Treat?
Comments from author:
i think the treat is coming;)
Review By [Compston] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Compston
Review:
I read this chapter a while ago and found it interesting then forgot it because I did not have an account. Just found it again and must say it is still a good story with an interesting consept... Keep writing...
Comments from author:
thank you so much. i really appreciated the review, hope you like the rest of the story:)
Review By [Compston] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the battle for San Francisco: Prophet" from Rob
Review:
Hope Willow doesn't show up at the wrong time, but I hope she finds Xander.
Comments from author:
shell find them but it will take a little while for v to track them down. hope you like the meeting when it happens
Review By [Rob] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "hemry" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
thank you. hope you like what comes next.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "hemry" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
thank you for the fine read. hope your challenge is answer soon.
Comments from author:
thanks, and feel free to give the challenge a try yourself:)
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "hemry" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on the chapter, though you have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Also, in the movie; I think Pike did survive. Hope to read more soon.

-Are you familiar with the "Percy Jackson and the Olympians"/"Heroes of Olympus" book series?
Comments from author:
thanks for the review. always love hearing what you think:)
pike did survive in the movie, but i always thought it was strange that Buffy never talked about him in the series, so i decided to retcon a bit.
i know of Percy Jackson, I've been considering doing something with him.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "hemry" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "hemry" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great to see this chapter. I liked the meet up both with Dracula and with Buffy. It'll be interesting to see of Pike survivng makes any difference in Buffy.
Comments from author:
thanks. i am debating pike coming to sunnyd and kind of being the xander of the scoobies (cant quite see the xander presented here falling back into his old role)
hope you like future chapters.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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