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The Key, the Sorcerer and the Gate

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Review of chapter "Part 2 of 3" from Zyanadryn
Review:
really food updTE!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 of 3" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic

And I'm going for just generally evil
Comments from author:
Lol, why thank you.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 of 3" from aveave
Review:
Great chapter. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 of 3" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Coffee addiction, portals to other worlds... weee :)

That being said, it's really nice to see an update to this series. Interesting effect Dawn has on the gate if it's her fault. The smiley face was amusing. It's nice to see Daniel trying to play nice.
Comments from author:
I know, coffee and portals to other worlds: what more could a girl want? Except for a Daniel to go along with the coffee... Glad you liked the smiley face. :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from aveave
Review:
Great chapter. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'll try to get the next one out soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting start, and the implications of a jar being written in the language that Dawn knows as Fyarl are definitely intriguing as far as the cross-dimensional implications go; I look forward to seeing what's coming up for this particular chain of events.
Comments from author:
You know, the whole Fyarl jar has actually taken a life of its own that I hadn't intended it to. I mean, I'd had a vague idea when I first wrote it in, but now I'm actually quite excited by what I've done with it, so I'll be looking forward to reading your comments on where I take it. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from Alkeni
Review:
Update soon please! This fic is excellent!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Will do my best to update soon!
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from borgrabbit
Review:
'Belaboring the obvious' haiku:

Dawn's great advantage
Non-noticeability
Gift from Merlin's spell

Crappy haiku, but great chapter!
Comments from author:
Lol! Don't go forgetting the time-freezing now.

I think it's an awesome haiku, btw. Thanks!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from Bluejello
Review:
So, yeah... I'm hooked. Loved the descriptions of Dawn and Merlin trying to sneak around the SGC.
Comments from author:
Yay for my first addict! Lol, I had fun describing Dawn and Merlin sneaking around. They both have lots of experience at it, especially Merlin. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from Jazzibear
Review:
“Well, so how's that for a start, huh?” you ask. And I say “That does very well indeed.”


It’s very well done, and very promising.

More soon, please?
Comments from author:
So glad it's a good start. I'll try to have more soon. Thanks for dropping a line!
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from Zyanadryn
Review:
OOhhh! Very Very good start! really looking forward to your next update!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'll try to update soon.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Drinking the coffee addict's coffee is always a good start. :) I'm glad to see a continuation of your other story.
Comments from author:
Lol, well, if nothing else, at least you're guaranteed the good stuff. And they DID do his dishes for him. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 of 3" from winchestersgirl
Review:
Interesting, I'm intrigued. I wonder what Daniel will say when he meets Merlin?
Comments from author:
Intrigued? I'll take intrigued, it's a good word. As for Daniel... all in good time...

Btw, thanks for being my first reviewer for this story!
Review By [winchestersgirl] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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