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Review of chapter "Free for all" from eriktheviking
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And the circle of people in the know keeps on growing. Great story, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Free for all" from (Current Donor)cameocat
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Very fun, very good story and series. As I am not military, I can't speak to the accuracy of the depiction, but it sure seems real to me. I really like the characters you have added in the cross-overs. Doesn't hurt that you put in a couple of my faves - It Takes a Thief and The Invisible Man, especially. Got to admit though, at first when the couple showed up in the last story I was sort of hoping for Burt and Heather Gummer from Tremors... Still, Austin and Sommers were pretty cool.
Comments from author:
I have plans for the Tremors crew including El Blanco and Cletus.
Review By [(Current Donor)cameocat] • Date [6 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from bradsan
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Hope you are planning for some more because I really like the series. Very good writing again.
Only one thing I agree with some reviewers. You underestimate Buffy's strength, she is much stronger than she tells Jaime. She becomes stronger with age but also after her dead's, eighteen birthday and foes she defeated etc. It's a small thing.

Hope you'll write another great story. Well done
Review By [bradsan] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from (Current Donor)vladt
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fine adventure. loved the "most importantly."
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from alynambered
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Another fun ride in this series concludes. Looking forward to more answers than questions in the next installment.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
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Great story, just like everything else in this series. It took me a while to realise what the aliens were, but you've also left a few hooks for future instalments. I look forward to the next part.

Thanks for writing this.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Free for all" from (Current Donor)Listener
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Another fairly good story in this series. At this point, though, you're treading dangerously close to Anita Blake territory, where Buffy is good enough or strong enough to defeat basically anything. Where you differ is that you have Buffy come by it honestly, which I like -- she's leveled up over e previous tales, and deserves to be this good. Thing is, I'm not sure that's best for the storytelling.

I do like how you casually add in characters from various fandoms without over explaining. I don't think many people have seen Invisible Man (that's what it was, right?) so it made it hard to get behind those characters. The Bionic Couple at least are part of the cultural unconscious in such a way that more people know who they are.

Your storytelling is as good as usual, with plenty of realistic military jargon and action. I would have preferred not switching POVs, but it's your story, not mine.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Free for all" from CPTSkip
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Bad me! I almost missed your "wrap-up". Another great story, but the number of "What the frak?" questions are sure adding up. Please keep writing this lovely series as it is a lot of fun and I really would love to find out what is really going on. I would also love to see Faith and Giles come back to help out. Especially if Faith gives Buffy tons of s**t about her dating the Invisible Man.

Edit: I sure felt like you were adding a crossover with XCOM Enemy Unknown what with the alien tech collection. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from AllenPitt
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Hopefully they got a lot of nice tech stuff and will be able to deploy better weapons and sensors to their troops for next time?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from EnchanterTim
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I thought I recognized the 'hounds' when they showed up last chapter. The critters from Pitch Black, right?
(and if I had checked out the other reviews first, I'd have seen you already confirmed this. 8P )
Review By [EnchanterTim] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from slmncpm
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yay! i love happy endings. *smiles*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from burmafrdnow
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have to agree the ending was not that great. Rushed and incomplete.

Think you dealt Buffy a light hand when talking with Jamie. Buffy is stronger than she said; was she understating her strength? Because when using the Troll Hammer she would need to be able to lift fairly easily a half ton to wield it like she did.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Sorry, the ending felt a little rushed there and I didn't get that sort of satisfied feeling I normally get at the end of one of Captain Summers' adventures.

However, I'll still be looking out for the next tale of alien inspired death and destruction.

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from DianeCastle
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Nicely done! I believe I know what the things were, so I'm hoping you decide not to grace us with Riddick; I'd rather see Carolyn Fry.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free for all" from tomfo
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Once again you have given us a wonderfully entertaining read, thank you. I really like this series and hope to see more from you soon.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
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