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Review of chapter "Going on a Lion Hunt" from Hecatonchires
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Just picturing her launching up into the tree, drawing a sword and slicing his skull. Wow.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliance" from (Current Donor)vladt
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fun read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliance" from JoeB
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Okay, assuming these are Preditors, then I bet they killed the cows to pull in Buffy, or some other high risk target. I still think they are something else though, maybe Critters?
Review By [JoeB] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliance" from AllenPitt
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So this group is just doing it for fun, not status, probably? Civilians. Still, this means they're less likely to follow other rules like self destruct with nukes. Some nice salvage possibilities here.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliance" from DrDamage
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This is good fic
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliance" from alynambered
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Yay, it's continuing. Poor Bobby. LMAO

Just one glitch:
spears and and brute strength - just one 'and'
Review By [alynambered] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Poachers? Oh dear... the images that calls forth...
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from Rich
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I'm glad you're back, I was starting to worry.

This chapter moves things along pretty well, but ... Predator poachers ?? I'm a little skeptical about that one. The whole point of the Hunt is to gain status, and killing cows doesn't do that. I once wrote on a different forum, in a different context, "nobody hangs squirrel heads on their wall". Even "redneck" Hunters aren't going to cross the galaxy just to butcher a whole herd for fun. I wouldn't be surprised if this turned out to be something completely different.

I look forward to finding out.

PS. the alternating POV isn't a problem at all.
Review By [Rich] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from AllenPitt
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He...came up with a great theory that fit the facts! Nice. So they won't follow the usual patterns of behavior, ouchie. They'll be willing to act as a group instead of that one on one stuff. On the other hand, they're facing a brassed off slayer with heavy weapons.
More high tech toys for Samantha Carter to play with! Weird to think SG-1 might be going invisible in near future....
Comments from author:
There is no Stargate in this version. At least none that Buffy and company know about.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from Jazzibear
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This is a splendid story, and these chapters work just fine for me. I had no difficulty with the shifting POVs: I think they work better in first person. I find shifting third-person POVs tiresome: like, Para 1, Bill thought such-and-such, then Para 2, Ben thought thus-and-so, That's so obvious and unsubtle and boring. Your approach is much subtler, and if the reader has to think a bit harder, so what? I think that that’s all to the good.

That apart, The Military Option is a consistently first-rate series, one of the comparatively few that I read immediately an episode is posted, and that is no more than the stories deserve.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from texaswookie
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redneck predators? please that hurts to think about the laughing hurts. are they going to be drunk and shoot at their version of beer cans as well?
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rules of Engagement" from annararen
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Holly hell... there are xenomorphs around, aren't there?
Buffy's going to have a blast :)
Review By [annararen] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Question Time" from maxthehobbit
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Switching the POV worked for me, think I only got a little lost once, but picked up in a short amount of time. Story is good so far, never heard of this invisible man guy, but it's interesting.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Question Time" from robertlisle
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This chapter would have probably worked better if you would have stuck to one viewpoint. Otherwise, interesting chapter, though I noticed neither gave away more information than necessary.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Question Time" from PATM
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Very good chapter reading experience. More soon please.
Review By [PATM] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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