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Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from JimmX
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Very touching, thanks for sharing it with us.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from sunnyhellthree
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Up until this story I have never cried while reading a fanfic. This is a beautiful tale and I have passed the link to several friends so that they can also ball their eyes out while reading.
Review By [sunnyhellthree] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from RevDorothyL
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I enjoyed all the father stories, but the Tony Stark non-father story reduced me to tears. Well done.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Kalliza
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The last story was incredibly well done. All of them were, of course. but that was the perfect one to end it on. I'd love to see a continuation of the west wing one, the Stargate one, or even the Avengers one, if the Muse gives you something.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from LMiC
Review:
funny and sad. I liked.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from starshinedown
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Oh, that last part. I'm a bawling mess right now, thankyouverymuch.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from AonGealach
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It might be a good idea to make a story where Tony is her father and they get to her in time to save her and have her get to know her father and the avengers. Maybe have the key come out in her and make her help the avengers out a bit.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Angelskuuipo
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Oh holy crap. That last chapter broke my heart. That and Neal's chapter are my favourites. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from IronBaron
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The stories were in character. The Tony one had to be the best one though since it really examined Tony's thoughts and feelings through his actions making it a great example of the "show, don't tell" school of writing.


Bit of fridge logic though: considering the resources Tony has at his disposal, would it have been that hard to find a non-family bone marrow match? You see campaigns to find bone marrow matches with strangers all that time on the news.

On the other hand, trying to find a real disease that would be recognizable by the average person yet incurable by anything other than a donation from a family member would be hard to find. Focusing on writing a good story was probably a good idea.
Review By [IronBaron] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very moving piece of wording!! Why, my eyes seemed to gather in a bit of moisture!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Tjack
Review:
Wow.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Misty
Review:
Beautiful story.. Thank you.
Review By [Misty] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Lyd
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Well that was emotional. I could barely read the end of the Tony's segment I was crying so hard. So now I kinda want to read continuations of the more positive ficlets. Please? To make up for the fact that I went through about a half a box of tissues.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from shelli
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It was perfect! I'm a little teary now :)
Review By [shelli] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from mendenbar
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I don't usually read these things but something drew me to this one. I am very glad I did. The 5 were interesting but the last one was perfect.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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