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Review of chapter "3" from cmdruhura
Review:
I'm surprised Alfred didn't postulate that magic might be the cause of Oracle's minor embarassment. It would take some of the sting to her ego.
Comments from author:
Yes, that is a very good point.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Like the story. Not so sure on a choice of words with Alfred. He's like a father figure to Wayne, for all his interest in being a good employee of his own code. Not sure if he'd think of Wayne as his "master" in private thoughts... maybe more like "that young idiot."
Comments from author:
You could have a point there.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
I always appreciate the quality effort you make into making the characters in your stories sound genuine. In this case the Bat-clan was pretty dead on... though I don't think I've ever read Tim Drake referring to anyone as a 'babe' unless he was playing one of his roles as Alvin Draper or 'Mr. Sarcastic' (seriously..Young Justice...Peter David writes fantastic superhero comedy...see current runs of X-Factor for further evidence), though taking his characterizations from B:TAS would lean more in that direction, in that series they merged the Tim with Jason Todd for his background. Just an observation. It's hard to tell weather a writer is taking from the comics or the animated series these days... at least when it comes to the comic book ones. Still.. didn't deter from my enjoyment of the infodump. REALLY looking forward to the rest. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Comments from author:
I have to admit to not being totally immersed in the DC verse, hence any errors being due to my lack of reading in the verse.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
Good story so far!
Looking forward to updates.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you like.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting. Glad to see a turn around of some fannon... batman knows about vampires... Alfred is aware of the slayer-watcher organization but doesn't know its day to day.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Alfred's knowledge comes from decades ago before the recent shake-up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nice set up.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Of all of your stories that I've found.. Faith Wayne is likely my favorite... Faith the series is fantastic in just about EVERY way as well... but I love a good comic crossover... and you've done a fantastic job blending the DC'verse with the Whedon'verse. Chapter 2 is a great instigating point. The characters meet, have minor conflict, discuss...there's some action, but it doesn't dominate the chapter, and we get a bit more of an idea of what's going on with our primary Scoobies. Just a well constructed follow up to a strong first chapter. Great work.
Comments from author:
I find it's best not to throw all the story out there at once, just gradually introduce plot points and twists.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Don't you have any life? Just how many stories are you writing at one time? This ones seems to be as interesting as your other ones posted on TtH so I will shut up and enjoy reading them all.
Comments from author:
No I don't. Lol. These have all been written over a span of 6 - 8 years...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkcarnage
Review:
Glad you're posting here. Still think this is a great story.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Huzzah! You're bringing your material over here... this is fantastic. Looking forward to rereading all of it and getting new reviews up for you. I've been reading your material over on FicSite, and kept hoping you'd bring some of it over here. Thrilled to see you doing so and looking forward to all the responses that you'll see.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from vatisay
Review:
i like the concept and not a bad start think, just worry about all the plot lines you are trying to work with at same time.
Comments from author:
I love multi-plot lines! Don't worry, they'll all sorta join together eventually.
Review By [vatisay] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Faith as Batman's daughter curiouser and curiouser
Comments from author:
Just hope you're curious enough to keep on reading!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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