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A Most Marvelous Adventure

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Review of chapter "20" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the update, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from SamTurner
Review:
Love it,nuff said. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good setup for the battle in Baghdad.
Good layout that it is a world wide war.
Interesting tidbit that Doc Strange will not be able to send X/F home after the battle...
Comments from author:
Do I smell Sequel? Cough.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MultiverseBeliever
Review:
you missed my point ... its a good piece of writing but it puts buffverse
characters in a too bad ah' light...
Comments from author:
Sorry, but you missed MY point.

Read a Marvel comic. Powerwise, a Slayer's nothing compared to 95% of the gods, mutants, and metas in the Marvel verse, even relative lightweights like Spiderman or Luke Cage. I could give examples, but at that point I'd just be repeating myself.
Review By [MultiverseBeliever] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Letomo
Review:
Just a thought - I don't know if you want to continue it, but Cannon-Ball was at one time considered a potential Immortal, and his powers are actually fairly impressive [on his own, he stopped Vanguard, the Superman expy]. Just for a little ace in the hole.

Otherwise, interesting story, and I am following along nicely!
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh good, Xander finally told Faith, and Faith finally reacted to Xander.

Now they just need to save the world...

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Not everything at once.

THanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the new chapter you posted, I just wish you didn't kill several of the good guys. Hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
I tried to avoid killing anyone I liked. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters (17-18). Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on this, but you have a few spelling/grammar mistakes that I noticed. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Physic - old name for a doctor
Psychic - one with ESP
Normally you edit better than this! ;)
Comments from author:
Spell checker only goes so far, lol.

Thanks for the spot, I'll change it.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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