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Review of chapter "9" from WolfWriter
Review:
And immediately a wrong conclusion is jumped to!

Oh well, I guess it would be the same if they were in the DC universe.

I just W-I-S-H that someone would actually look for the truth, instead of taking circumstantial evidence as fact and running with it.

Not that the story isn't a good one; but it seems that there is an inordinate amount of paranoia amongst the heavy hitters in the Marvel 'verse.

All due to the sodding First Evil.

I W-I-S-H it would get locked away somewhere permanently, so that it can't bother people anymore.

And isn't there a First Good to counteract it???? That might be an interesting avenue to pursue.
Comments from author:
I don't think it would be the same if the story was in the DC verse, Batman aside, the heroes seem more wholesome less suspicious than the Marvel verse, Marvel's grittier.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Holy frame -up! Guys let's try some logical thinking - well good clue regarding the fact that maybe Xander would be able to decode the demonic language if anyone asked him and he had access to the right library.
Comments from author:
Maybe. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9" from Vilkath
Review:
I have to say this story is becoming a little less enjoyable with every chapter. The writing is still good, but the plot could use some work. I have never really liked the First Evil, it just always seemed like the 'ultra hax' bad guy of the buffy series. It wasn't really that smart, powerful or cunning, it just couldn't be hurt with it not having a body and all that. It could be any where and taunt people with impunity, spy on them etc. Frankly it's plans were so badly thought out most of the time despite it's uber hax skillz I felt a vampire fledgling would blush with shame.

So far in this story the same ubber skills seem to be in play and everything is going perfectly right for the first evil. Every evil being in the marvel universe is swayed to it's side with little to no effort or infighting. No ego's were hurt, no rivalries sparked, every bad guy is working perfectly well and getting all their evil deeds acomplished with little to no real effort.

Worse yet against all this supernatural awesomeness Faith and Xander are supposed to play some critical role? Lets be honest nothing really did squat to the first even in the Buffy Universe, the thing's still around and all those good people died for almost no reason. Especially in this story where it could just hop a ride with Xander not even a decade later.

Over all I am just starting to lose faith in the good guys and having trouble feeling any kind of connection to them. The marvel universe hero's are moron's so far and suddenly the bad guys are all not.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Ah so it is getting the Heroes to take out Xander and Faith for it now.
That is actually a good strategy, somewhat.

Interesting chapter.
Comments from author:
Well XF are severely outclassed by the heroes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from ianquest
Review:
Interesting so far, and I look forward to seeing more. I do want to ask, however; 'Squashtachs'? Do you perhaps mean 'Sasquatches' (singular Sasquatch), or are these meant to be a new species?
Comments from author:
Tbh, I couldn't get the spell-checker to recognise ANY spelling of anything but Sasquatch.

Thanks for your review.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the update, I hope to read more of your wok soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from grd
Review:
I hope you have Xan comment about how much the heroes are easily suckered into false leads by villains. Detectives they are not.
Comments from author:
They're not going to be happy for sure.
Review By [grd] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work, hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice chapter.
Raf
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from AllenPitt
Review:
The greatest danger from Bullseye isn't hand to hand--he won't make that mistake again--it's distant weapons. Rifle. Etc.... he's very dangerous.
She should have checked out the family. Who knows maybe here her mother became a nun or something.
Comments from author:
Yeah, hand to hand he's got no chance, but a rifle from 800 metres....

Game over.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, good to see that a Slayer is up to dodging Bullseye. He did keep her busy enough to not let her beat the stuffing out of him but that's to be expected.

Not good that someone has noticed Doc Strange looking into the problem, does not bode well for the good doctor.

And now Water Dragons, oh, bad news that.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Well Bullseye is well within a Slayer's capabilities, he's peak-human at best, probably one Slayer makes four of him.

Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good, SHIELD is seeing patterns, now if they can see them in time - which I doubt.

Faith seems to be healing a bit. Xander is fitting into the Defenders well.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
SHIELD have a lot of problems to watch out for.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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