Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

A Most Marvelous Adventure

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "7" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very plot filled, with a few good character close-up moments.
Comments from author:
Yes, Faith especially is struggling to truly find her feet in this new world.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from JediKnight
Review:
Godd work on the update, I'll be looking forward to more soon.

-The area was a Hellmouth wasn't it?
Comments from author:
Sorry you lost me, what area?

Right, reread the chapter, the area is something else, it's just an area where bad things occurred
nothing more or less, but it has a certain bad energy due to the events that occurred there.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the new chapter, I look forward to reading your next update.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from AllenPitt
Review:
She still has extra 'stuff'---slayer dream, 'sense vampire/demon', stuff like that. But yeah, she's not the top power any more.
And hey--next to Ghost Rider, a lot of the rest of the team is pretty low-power, too.
Comments from author:
Heh, forget Ghost Rider, what about Doctor Strange?

He's a massive power.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Yup they fit into the Defenders well. Now they just have to adjust some.
Faith needs to get her head together, but that's a common theme with Faith.
Great chapter.
Comments from author:
It'll be hard for her not being top dog anymore.

Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting complications.
Comments from author:
It's a complicated verse.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter. Glad I waited to read this until you had another chapter up.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Riniko
Review:
Have to say to Namor actions would not have inspired me to be in anyway helpful to him. He has a very strong ability to turn potential friends into enemies. Maybe if I dropped him off in the middle of the driest part of the Sahara we could call it even.
Comments from author:
Namor is and as always been an utter dick.

THanks for the review.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, interesting, very interesting. First is obviously worried about Faith and Xander or he wouldn't be trying to kill them.

which is interesting because on the surface they are not powerful enough to take him...[grin].

Great chapter, thanks!
Comments from author:
Yeah, on the surface they should be no problem...
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good work on the new chapter, looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from JediKnight
Review:
Very noce job on the update, hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
It's always fun to see Xan going up against folks bigger than him. Along with Faith's embarrassment of his comic geek tendencies. Nice entry...looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Everyone in the Marvel verse is bigger than Xander. Lol.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
start back Page: 6 of 8 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking