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A Most Marvelous Adventure

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Review of chapter "4" from Tjack
Review:
Color me impatient, but I blasted thru all of this and "God Wars" on FicSite. Fantastic stuff.
Comments from author:
Lol. Glad you enjoyed it.

I love the Marvel universe, it's such a varied sandbox to play in cosmic, espionage, supernatural, super-heroes, just so many great chars.

If I was you, I'd try my other Marvel story 'Darker Reign', which is taken from
actual Marvel canon.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from AllenPitt
Review:
Wow, she took a punch like that and survived? I'm impressed! And X's reaction was just right, that's how DD won Namor's respect as well.
Not sure what they're going to do next. Together they're about at Power Man/Iron Fist level (on a good day) or slightly below.... I suppose they could join up with them or some other little group? Maybe hunt down vampires? Blade might accept the help. van Helsing?
Next up, any chance they have doppelgängers in this dimension? A Faith Lehane who had a good family & lives a happy respectable life?
Comments from author:
That DD and Namor fight was a great one.

Faith's not even close to Power Man....

Working with Blade could work, or maybe SHIELD doing supernatural work.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Yea Namor's a bit of a dick, understandably because of his history but still...

Interesting chapter, defiantly tracking this one.
Comments from author:
Yeah, can't really blame him considering the number of times he's been betrayed either by the surface-dwellers, his people, or even his own family.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from RafMereC
Review:
Loved the Namor scene.

Raf
Comments from author:
He really is a dick isn't he?
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from RafMereC
Review:
Very interesting.
Love to see more.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thanks.

You will.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope to read more soon.

-When in the Marvel universe does this take place?
Comments from author:
Huh, unlike Darker Reign that takes place in the actual Marvel verse, this is more of an AU where most of the recognisible characters but few of the recognisible events occurred...
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Bobboky
Review:
Awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Xander and Faith playing in the Marvel sandbox is always fun. I really enjoyed the Illuminati scene as well...haven't seen it addressed in a long time, though in Marvel canon you have to admit the boys at that table did a pretty bang up job of messing up by sending Hulk to Skaar. Still, made for an AWSOME series by Greg Pak...anyhow, looking forward to more. Hope you've still got some plans for God Wars once you're finished getting this one up over here. Great job.
Comments from author:
Yes, both Planet Hulk and World War Hulk were great, plus Skaar is one of the few legacy characters that actually works!

Yeah, God Wars will be going up once I've finished this story.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A highlight reel but fun. I hope Xander isn't seeing everything through rose glasses. He may have to pick a side soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Xander can't get too caught up in the world he's in, it's a very dangerous world.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from burn
Review:
Excellent story so far. I would tone down Faith's attitude though, I mean Xander is essentially experiencing a dream come to life. While I do like Faith, it'd be pretty cool for her to see just how low on the totem pole she really is in the Marvelverse. For example, Spiderman would WASTE any slayer. Please, have Xander beg for autographs from Stephen, Reed and Xavier.

Thanks.

I should have explain better about Faith. To me at least, her comments didn't come off like someone who has worked with Xander for a couple of years. I just think she would have taken his reaction with a little more humor, all the while of course, totally giving him a rash of shit about it. Thanks.
Comments from author:
I won't be toning Faith's attiude, but you are right about it, and you are right about how low
on the power totem Faith is. We'll be getting graphic evidence of this.
Review By [burn] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from ivanjedi
Review:
A comic geek in the marvel-verse. Um. No. No trouble at all.
Comments from author:
Lol.

You don't have to be Nostradumus to make that comment!
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Xander seems to be having a fan boy wet dream. Good for him. So far so good. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Oh Xander's in heaven.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
First evil or something else, I wonder. Looking forward to discovering if Faith and Xander know of the Marvel universe or some version of it.
Comments from author:
Lol. Considering Xander's past nerdiness I'm guessing there's a good chance. :D
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
It's fun looking at the variety of interactions that you've got going with Faith and Xan in your fics. Makes each one feel very different from all the others. Looking forward to reading and commenting on more chapters as you post more here.
Comments from author:
Well it all depends on the state of their relationship of course. In Faith Wayne, they're lovers, in this fic they're just Watcher & Slayer, so of course you have different levels of intimacy which result in different interactions, less trust etc.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice start. No idea of where your story is going, but so far it looks interesting. Was that The First shooting its mouth off again? If it was, I hope it doesn't have another nutty preacher in this dimension to poke Xander's other eye out.
Comments from author:
He could always get a cool visor off some fellow called Scott Summers.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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