Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's not what I had in mind..." from nerfherder
Review:
Just the right note of "oops". X is gonna be miffed when he finds out. Oh well, not like there aren't enough Shiar to replace the idiots. Wonder how much indemnity he is gonna hit em for the insult. Hmm, maybe he can take it out in slaves/servitors? It's a thought... Ah well, Happy New Year, glad you are back!
Comments from author:
I don't think he'll be keeping slaves, but you never know what he'll wind-up with.
Raf
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's not what I had in mind..." from Bobboky
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Shi'ar Galaxy..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Shi'ar Galaxy..." from dogbertcarroll
Review:
*snicker*
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Raf.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Shi'ar Galaxy..." from nerfherder
Review:
Toot Sweet! I have always been of the opinion that Lilandra was way to good for Q-ball! His never kill policy hamstrung her defense of her homeworld. It might be fine for police to attempt that sort of crap with underage hoodlums, sometimes, but it doesn't fly in the real world. One doesn't spend the lives of the good simply to try to redeem the evil. At some point you have to cut your losses and excise the cancer. You gonna get the phoenix sword out and about too? Should be a lot of fun when her sister puts in an appearance, especially if Xander runs into her first before they meet up with Dawn. Give em time to simmer to a boil and then throw a rescue into it! Great fun!
Comments from author:
Lilandra is in the hands of Dawn and the kids. I really think she imprinted on her. I'm not sure how to play out.
The phoenix sword is a great story line. I'd like to save that up for future stories down the road.
Raf.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Shi'ar Galaxy..." from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated