Review By [debio] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Research and other Activities." from debio
Review:
I'm sorry for your loss.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Raf
Review By [debio] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from Bobboky
Review:
So many gentlemen (and a few females) in the group and no and no one offers her a cover when the new girl appears naked. That strikes me as odd. Also, I must have missed something as I cannot figure out why Dawn is so mad at her.
Comments from author:
Thank you for pointing that one out. No one else did. You get a special thank you for spotting that hole in the story.
Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from SamDragon
Review:
More big time players in the house.
Comments from author:
They wanted to come. I said sure.
Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from texaswookie
Review:
okay that was a surprise while I was reading this I was honestly expecting for it to be Thor Girl who is supposed to be some super mystical being or other. A very nice twist.
Of course now Strange went and cried to the Ancient One that they didn't do what he said. Hopefully AO will be able to explain to his student that sometimes you have to accept the freedom of choice. What is it with strong magic users thinking only they can know what's right. Strange, Dumbledore, Gandalf at their core they're all manipulators.
Comments from author:
Thor girl wouldn't make sense at this early stage. Plus I'm taking liberties with how things were done in marvel 616 canon.
This makes more sense for the movie verse Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from tchizek
Review:
hahaha yet another cosmic powered young lady, oh that's great! Plus she has a crush on Steve, oh man this is great.
Now they just have to deal with Strange and his Mentor who are going to get prissy about this.
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
The cube when it hatched in the marvel earth 616 time line was male. It had a crush on Zcsptain America. This made more sense for the marvel movie verse
Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [tchizek] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath Still..." from WildMartin
Review:
Still liking the story. One question though, I was pretty sure the spear Loki had in Avengers was a weapon from Thanos. Gungir is Odin's spear.
Comments from author:
Wasn't sure if it was from Thanos or if he kept Gungnir when he fell off the Rainbow bridge.
For this and the next story arch Gungnir made more sense.
Thank you for the review. Raf
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]