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Review of chapter "Aftermath..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath..." from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the new chapters, but why the cliffhanger?
Comments from author:
Not enough writing time.

Thank you
Raf
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath..." from AkashaDrake
Review:
There are several points where your grammar, spelling, and word choice make it hard to read.

Otherwise, a very excellent story.
Comments from author:
Thank you
It will be cleaned up. This is written on an iPod. Not much time for editing it properly.
Raf
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath..." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath..." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Stephen, Stephen you just don't understand and you are about to stick you whole hand in a meatgrinder if you don't wait and talk.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Shhh. Let that be a surprise. He doesn't know yet.

Thank you
Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from WolfWriter
Review:
Excellent!

I can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from SamDragon
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh, when Nick tells Xander and the slayers what the SHIELD Council did they are going to be sooo pissed. I think the SHIELD Council will need some new members.

I think that Peter needs to drop MJ and hook up with Julie, having a super-powered girlfriend is better for spiderman - I know he wouldn't but I think he should.

I actually feel a bit sorry for the Spear of Odin (now that you pointed out who it is - I had honestly missed that), it is used to a more ordered wielder. So no wonder it was a bit grouchy, Loki = chaotic, Faith = chaotic, Xander = chaotic, the poor thing was probably getting a headache. If that is even possible for a rune weapon. Natasha is a much better primary wielder!

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Not sure if the spear in the movie came from Thanos or if Loki fell off the Rainbow bridge with Gungnir. For this story let's go with Gungnir.

Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the new chapter, I look forward to more.

Also, Spidy's full costume name is spelled "Spider-Man"
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I was just writing it like it was his name. You know, like Superman, Batman and Spiderman.


Raf
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
The sentence before the last might have a punctuation problem, it makes it seem like Buffy and Faith switched bodies and had a threesome with Riley.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
This part was added as an after thought. Never made it to my Beta.
I'll try and fix it after work.
Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Awww Julie and Peter, how cute!

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Just testing the waters with Peter.
Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from Bobboky
Review:
Sweet
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good mix.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I try.
Raf
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Phase" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Fun seeing some more of the changes. The 'Captain Universe' Spidey powers are weird enough that it's likely Xander's influence over the cosmic energy from the cube would have. The association of Old Soldiers and those close was fun. All in all a nice chapter...looking forward to seeing the wrap up that looks like it's coming.
Comments from author:
Shouldn't be long.

Then on to Book II.

I hope you'll like the ending I have planned

Raf
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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