Stephen, Stephen you just don't understand and you are about to stick you whole hand in a meatgrinder if you don't wait and talk.
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Shhh. Let that be a surprise. He doesn't know yet.
Thank you Raf
Review By [tchizek] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Comments from author:
Thank you Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from WolfWriter
Review:
Excellent!
I can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you Raf
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from SamDragon
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thank you Raf
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Turned up the Heat..." from tchizek
Review:
Oh, when Nick tells Xander and the slayers what the SHIELD Council did they are going to be sooo pissed. I think the SHIELD Council will need some new members.
I think that Peter needs to drop MJ and hook up with Julie, having a super-powered girlfriend is better for spiderman - I know he wouldn't but I think he should.
I actually feel a bit sorry for the Spear of Odin (now that you pointed out who it is - I had honestly missed that), it is used to a more ordered wielder. So no wonder it was a bit grouchy, Loki = chaotic, Faith = chaotic, Xander = chaotic, the poor thing was probably getting a headache. If that is even possible for a rune weapon. Natasha is a much better primary wielder!
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Not sure if the spear in the movie came from Thanos or if Loki fell off the Rainbow bridge with Gungnir. For this story let's go with Gungnir.
Raf
Review By [tchizek] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Fun seeing some more of the changes. The 'Captain Universe' Spidey powers are weird enough that it's likely Xander's influence over the cosmic energy from the cube would have. The association of Old Soldiers and those close was fun. All in all a nice chapter...looking forward to seeing the wrap up that looks like it's coming.
Comments from author:
Shouldn't be long.
Then on to Book II.
I hope you'll like the ending I have planned
Raf
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]