Woow, Castle is in the fight, I pity those fools Chitauri xD.
Comments from author:
He may not be the most powerful, but he sure can make his presence felt.
Raf
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Journal..." from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Ah...Frank makes an appearance. Along with Mark Spector...I don't know why I should be surprised you included him...but kudos on the implementation. The inclusion of the War Journal entry at the beginning was a nice touch. It's one of the things I wish the good folks at Marvel had included in the films. Anyhow... nice chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Raf
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Frank Castle would be getting in on the action, and he would be a good one for this kind of fight.
Thanks for a great chapter!
Comments from author:
Can't have a proper war in NY without Frank.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [tchizek] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yet More Friends are Called in..." from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work, I hope you will add more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Raf
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yet More Friends are Called in..." from Bobboky
Review:
Very cool
Comments from author:
Thank you Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yet More Friends are Called in..." from shadowstorm
Review:
Awesome! I am so glad that you made sure to include all if not most of the New York superheroes in the fight. That was the one thing that annoyed me about the movie because there is no way that Spider-man, The Fantastic Four, Daredevil, Luke Cage, or any of the other New York situated heroes would not be helping and a good number of the villains would totally not like the idea of someone messing around and blowing things up on their turf. Can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
It just made more sense to me to have Marvel romp.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [shadowstorm] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yet More Friends are Called in..." from tchizek
Review:
Yea! Faith and Bruce/Hulk are together! Oh that wacky Rune weapon, such a kidder! You kept the best/funniest scene in the movie - "Puny God" - thank you!
Very good chapter, thanks!
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Raf.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yet More Friends are Called in..." from JonnyNapalm
Review:
You're right...this latest chapter did clear up some of the questions I was having with the dynamic of the previous chapters. It'll be interesting to see how all the cosmic energies that have connected with all the players will end up affecting them. By my count...Xan, Clint, all the Slayers through Xander's connection to their line, Dawn, and Coulson should all be seeing effects. That's not including whatever modifications the spear made to both Faith and Xander. Those are going to be really interesting story points later.
Comments from author:
Should hit most of those points in the next book.
Raf
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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