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Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from Kaosreign
Review:
Good start, hope to see more...will the rest of the cast join in as well?
Comments from author:
Sure you betcha.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
A Very Good Beginning, I am eager for more.
Comments from author:
More to come.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from TAO
Review:
Okay...aside from that one fragmented sentence, a fairly solid fic.

Though I am pissed that you kind of started it off with a bang and now left us hanging...that's mean!

The plus side...Bobbi Morse (aka Mockingbird from Marvel) as a Slayer...a WIN!
Comments from author:
Sorry about that, but still writing the fic. It's still in progress, not finished yet.

Raf
Review By [TAO] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Good start to this so far. I like Faith keeping all the men off balance with her sexuality and Dawn's creative uses of her Key-powers were awesome as well. Hope to hear more about those soon. Loki's thoughts were.. well, hmm. I wonder what he'll think when/if he finds out he wouldn't be the first god the Scoobies have killed before.

In-charge Xander was a great start too. He's keeping his cool but still letting everybody know that he was a big Cap fan. And the little tidbit about his grandpa is interesting as well and I have to wonder if he's any name we'll recognize from the movie. Looking forward to finding out.
Comments from author:
Still doing this on the fly.
I'll have to check with the cap movie for the names.

Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from Taldus
Review:
A good start to the story I think.

Sometimes its nice to see the action start out of nowhere, without all the explanations of how all the characters got to where they are and what's different from canon first.

Though, that being said, I do hope you plan on filling us in a little bit at some point down the line.

Regardless, liking this so far and I can't wait to see what you do with it.
Review By [Taldus] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "This is how it really started..." from Nightscream
Review:
I like it so far, but this:

She stopped when The guy with the wings painted on the side of his blue helmet.

Incomplete sentence.... what did he do to make her stop?


Anywho....please update again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for catching that. I'm still writing and have already corrected it.
If you catch any more please let me know so I fix it as soon as possible.
Thanks again.

Raf
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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