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Review of chapter "40" from SamDragon
Review:
Ah Travers is disappointed, we all feel so bad for him. (A lot of sarcasm there).
Comments from author:
He can't catch a break. Lol.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "39" from banditdoz
Review:
wow what a cliffhanger ;D
Comments from author:
That's what it was meant to be.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [13 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "39" from Ghostrider
Review:
So, I guess Warren and his gang have taken their shot. I do hope Faith survives this. You are really ratcheting up the pressure. Wesley's baiting of the Irish was fun and harkens back to his days with Angel.

With regards to the reviewer who points out that Xander as the Punisher is underpowered in comparison to his friends, I'd like to direct them to the fact that Frank Castle has tangled numerous times with various superheroes, from Daredevil to Spiderman and many others in between. All those fights, have ended in stalemates. One thing you need to remember is that The Punisher is Marvel's answer to The Batman, only much more lethal. The Bat lives by the old saying "Keep your enemies close and your friends closer" aka he has multiple plans in the event his fellow superheroes turn into enemies. Frank, due to his modus operandi, knows that at any one time, he could be facing one or more superheroes, so he has to have ways of dealing with them. There is even a storyline where he actually takes out permanently, all the Marvel heroes. So, underpowered with regards to strength or superpowers, true, but tactically and strategically? Not so much.

PS: Political Correctness is a bane on humanity. Best to get rid of it, as it is in direct opposition of the truth.
Comments from author:
Your argument about the Punisher is exactly correct and pretty much mine, I think I'd choose Moon Knight as Marvel's Batman's, but otherwise yeah. As for Wes, for me, it was more a throwback to his pre-Sunnydale superiority complex days.

PS: You noticed the review that criticised me for describing Gunn as 'black', huh? Yeah, some people shouldn't be let out on their own.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
Review:
when you're describing characters of color, specifically those of African descent, I suggest you don't use the term "black" or "african-american" the way you have. when you were describing the three people, other than the potentials, to be moved to sunnydale--"the half-demon, the [something, forgot] and the african-american"--why did you use a racial term to describe Gunn rather than a title, class, employment, etc.? and then, toward the end, you again describe him [and his sister] as simply "black". you can't call him by anything else? how about dark-skinned, if you must use a colorful term, pardon my pun. or former gangbanger [which, i admit, has it's own problematic reasons for not using it] or vampire hunter or, hell, just hunter would be fine.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the politically correct review.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Seagul
Review:
Wait wait wait Giles knows what a hat-trick is???? Giles knows hockey????
Comments from author:
Lol. No it's been a footie (what yanks call soccer) term since it began in the 19th century.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Seagul] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "38" from banditdoz
Review:
kick arse :D
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from semaxxx
Review:
I like Xander as a Punisher, against vampires and other remotely normal characters he is awesome. On the other hand in this story where most are persons with godlike or at least very powerful abilities having him as Punisher makes him completely underpowered.
Comments from author:
He's still very much weaker than the rest, but knowledge why he has a vaster skill-set.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [semaxxx] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "36" from banditdoz
Review:
Wow you gave me goose bumps Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Bringing those vamps back to life was pretty dumb, huh?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "35" from Ghostrider
Review:
Quite a lot happening.

The group is still fragmented after the relationship struggles. Will they ever be able to patch things up? Especially now that the Aurelius group is about to appear.

Have we seen the last of the Chaos church? Or are they the usual one hit wonder?

Will we find out in the next episode?

Don't change that dial, folks!
Comments from author:
Lol.

And btw all the chars who came back with Aurelius were cannon chars (I just
added a name for the one-armed claw man of the Mantis episode), I just
figured Angelus' group on its own weren't enough to be a threat.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "34" from Ghostrider
Review:
Crimson Carnage?

Would that be the crazy red-suited symbiote of Spiderman, by any chance?

Still loving the story.
Comments from author:
Nah, just the name of a nutty cult.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [3 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "33" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Love that you made a version of the alternate reality episode fit into your story. And such a great chapter too! Terrific work. Looking forward to seeing what you've got planned next for the Hellmouth Heroes.
Comments from author:
I didn't love Anya as a character, but the power of a wish demon is an interesting one to play around with (which is essentially what fanfic writers do anyway).

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "32" from SamDragon
Review:
Relationships can mess things up.
Comments from author:
No arguments there.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "32" from banditdoz
Review:
Yay update ;D love your take on Jack frost and Santa
Comments from author:
Jack Frost is one evil mofo.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "31" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from RedCalypso
Review:
Wait a minute. Faith is heartbroken because of being betrayed by Jonathan, so she's going to turn around and do the same thing to Alonna? And Xander is just going to throw his girlfriend over because of one kiss? Right now, Xander and Faith both seem like sorry excuses for human beings.
Comments from author:
They certainly aren't perfect.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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