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Morgomir Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Morgomir ] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from
CageFire Review:
Okay, nice new chapter. :)
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Thanks for the review.
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CageFire ] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "27" from
Morgomir Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Morgomir ] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from
moringstar Review:
I hope you got some thing nasty planed for Jonathan and heidi or a very good reason for what happened.
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The trouble is the two of the smell 'pack' to one another, so it was largely beyond their control. Thanks for the review.
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moringstar ] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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Fayari Review:
Woah, I read that in one sitting.
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Hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
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Fayari ] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "25" from
CageFire Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
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CageFire ] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "25" from
tchizekReview:
The W&H human crew is asking to attract attention they don't want...which will make the Senior Partners unhappy. When the Senior Partners are unhappy people's souls get removed...that backup plan was a bit unsubtle even for Sunnydale and W&H.
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Yep, I think W&H are probably outta their league. :D Thanks for the review.
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tchizek] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "25" from
SamTurner Review:
WRH will need better help. :)
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They're nothing if not triers! Thanks for the review.
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SamTurner ] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from
Morgomir Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the review.
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Morgomir ] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from
SamTurner Review:
Bye Maggie(you know what,I think she deserved it).
Comments from author:
No argument from me! Thanks for the review.
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SamTurner ] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from
CageFire Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
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Thanks for the review!
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CageFire ] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "23" from
Morgomir Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the review.
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Morgomir ] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from
Morgomir Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the review.
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Morgomir ] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from
CageFire Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
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CageFire ] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from
Deathshead Review:
I'm not going to abandon it. This is still one of the best stories I've ever read. I'm just saying what frustrates me about it. I understand where you're coming from with your response, but is any enemy going to rise above the level of "monster of the week"?
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The last twenty chapters deal with the First's army.
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Deathshead ] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Not Rated