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Review of chapter "13" from RHatch
Review:
fricking awesome
Comments from author:
High praise indeed!

Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
[jaw drop, gasp]Mayor[eyes bug out] as US Agent oh my god [takes glasses of, polishes them], one of the Police as Nick Fury (Police Chief? Or Detective Stine?).
Wow, just, wow you love shocking twists don't you!
Great fight with Amara, he got overconfident and forgot that anyone else could know about his gem. It would be hard for a normal opponent to get it off of him, but not impossible if there were many attacking in consent. But Jenny was the right way to do it.
Nice Handling of Quentin, he's not going to give up but maybe he'll back off for a bit.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
The Mayor isn't who you think he is.

Glad you liked the fight scene.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from WolfWriter
Review:
WHOA!!! The Mayor did a 180???

I thought that he went as Palpatine?

Or am I mixing this one up with the other fic?

Either way, that was a shocker!!!
Comments from author:
You're mixing the fics up. The Mayor died in the previous episode, this is the Mayor's deputy whose now the new Mayor.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from CageFire
Review:
Good chapter. I'll be looking forward to future chapters.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good handling of the Sisters of the Jhe episode.
Nice arsenal that Xander has built, he needs to include a IR sensor in the hand print scanner to make sure he can't open it if he is turned. Or maybe he already has that!
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
"Very good handling of the Sisters of the Jhe episode. "

When writing a cannon chapter, you have to make sure it's different, but all differences make sense.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from CageFire
Review:
Great chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11" from SamTurner
Review:
Nice.
Comments from author:
I'll take nice. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Nice, adding Pike as Ghost Rider and taking care of the Hellhounds all in the same chapter.

It looks like Wood and Wesley might be getting along better, interesting.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
There's lots of little groups running around doing their own thing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Very thought provoking chapter. I would expect a little bit more from Mayor Wilkins, so I doubt we have seen the last of him. Xander deliberately taking a life, even if I am right and it is not true, would have considerable repercussions, though.
Comments from author:
On the other hand, the Scoobies are very different Scoobies, and the Mayor was 'just' the old Mayor.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the great work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it, thank you.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, that was too easy. I suspect the Mayor is not dead yet.

Great chapter, good capture of the dichotomy that is Mayor Wilkins, cheerful friendly surface but look deeper and see the psychopathic ugliness.
Comments from author:
He certainly was a whack-job.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow, okay not the fight I expected but a good fight none the less.
Plus Faith gets to learn that her friends can help.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Yep, sometimes you don't get the fight you expect.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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