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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Ramenth
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Romance wise, I would say you should play it slow and see what develops. You're talking about something several years and multiple major events out in terms of the story.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Nightscream
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OMG I didn't know you had been in an accident!? I'm glad to hear that you are doing better and are able to start writing again. Don't push yourself to hard ok, none of this comes before your health.

And this was a good update and a nice way to get back into the "game". I can't wait to read more. I would love to see the Tony "father" reaction to a Buffy/Steve date. LOL I can literally see the steam coming out of his ears. :P

Keep up the good recovery and the updates.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
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Great update. This chapter really lays a lot of ground work to advance the story. I liked the way you described Buffy's reaction to Obidiah, I could easily imagine the left side of her lip lift as her nose crinkled.
Buffy's emotional state has put her in the position of not holding back on using her intelligence to it's fullest for the first time in her life. You've made Buffy's transition very believable.
As for her love life, after what happened with Angel and her mother's death I can't see her being receptive to romance in the near future. You're doing a great job showing how she's doing everything she can to just survive and stay sane. Anything that could develop romantically, I suspect would be very slow in building, likely starting with a friendship. As to who it would be, I can see her finding someone the exact opposite of Angel but having it fail miserably in a short time before finding someone who's right for her.
And don't forget, Joss has shown that Buffy is gender flexible. That opens a lot of possibilities. Maybe she can't decide between Clint or Natasha.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Starfox
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Very good new chapter - more insights into Buffy, and glimpses of Tony. Loved the irony of shoe-hunting Buffy being surprised at an overflowing wardrobe.

As far a romantic entanglements are concerned, I'm not sure about Steve, but he's certainly better than Clint. I'd prefer someone from Buffy, not the Avengers, maybe Faith, but I am not sure if you're going in that direction, or Willow - she certainly would fit in well at Stark Industries given her intelligence, she was scouted by similar corporations in the series after all, before graduating high School.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanreaderonetwo
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Watching work on an "improved" motorcycle suit, two images and a thought come to mind.
The thought, wondering what active or abandoned advance military battle suit or helmet projects Stark Tech has, ala the shelved Wayne Tech battle suit Batman "borrowed" in Batman Begins. Tho I assume that Jarvis would have told her of any such goodies laying around that she could use. OTOH Jarvis might be keeping her busy, while reserving letting her know of such projects later.

Image (1) She designs a suit and Stark Tech sells versions of it, or portions of it, to the military or SHIELD. Later Buffy is looking at SHIELD troops and asking what the hell they were doing wearing _her_ designs, and Jarvis explains.

(2) Buffy is out cycling in her suit and gets attacked. And she is slightly startled to realize just how tough and resistant to bullets, explosions and other threats it is, since she was concerned about accidental damage, not combat. She realizes that it is also _very_ good protection against vampire or demon attacks.

Later image
(3) Sometime after (1) or (2) Faith gets a present of a suit of her own from Buffy, one optimized for use while Slaying, ideally something she could wear openly without being _too_ obvious. This may require Buffy getting a set of Faith's precise physical measurements. OTOH Jarvis may be able to use detailed video images of Faith to develop such measurements.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Kalliza
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I was so excited when this updated! Awesome! I can't wait for her to meet Tony!

As for romantic entanglements, I agree that the whole situation with her and Steve would be simultaneously angsty and hilarious. Really, I'll be pleased as punch to just have a romantic arc for her, so whomever you feel would work best. I'm a big Hawkeye fan, but that's more because I adore the actor than any particular attachment to the character. I'm also a fan of a well done Buffy/Faith pairing.

I'm really looking forward to the next update! Keep up the great writing! (Does she meet Tony soon?)
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RogueAngel
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Sorry I hear what happened, best wishes on your recovery and while your on the mend. Thank you for the update. Steve/Buffy would be good, I was actually going to ask if you would consider doing that pairing lol.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Avaiaal
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Glad to hear you're doing better, look after yourself. Great to see a new chapter, i look forward to seeing where you take this story :D
Review By [Avaiaal] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AsarStar
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Oh, so sorry to hear about what happened. Glad to hear your on the mend, and very glad to see an update. I've missed seeing your postings around the site. Sending lots of good wishes and virtual hugs.
Review By [AsarStar] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Xayian
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As long as Buffy is over 20, a Steve ship would be awesome. (I don't see Steve involved with an 18 or 19 yr old.) Especially if, before that, you throw in a one sided late teen Buffy crushing on ol' Cap.

Anyway, so glad you're feeling better!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Chaoskitten
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Steve or Bucky. Or both.

Or Clint. Clint could work.

Steve because it would really annoy Tony.
Bucky because Buffy knows what it's like to be a weapon.
Clint because I just love Clint ok?
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from danielbuffyfan
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I am so glad to see you updated and you did an amazing job with it to. I am enjoying your story so far and as for romances for Buffy I say either Steve or Clint Barton just to see how Tony reacts to that.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Wiccachic
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I know you said you were fond of Steve but I was thinking perhaps the Falcon, Pietro Maximoff aka Quicksilver, or even Wanda Maximoff with her fabulous creepy self.
Review By [Wiccachic] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Discord
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Thanks for the update. I'm glad you're on the mend. I'm not keen on a Buffy/Steve pairing. Reminds me too much of Riley. I like Bucky and Clint but I'm sure a pairing with either of those would work. Anyway that's just my opinion. Looking forward to the next update. Can we expect your other fics to be updated as well?
Review By [Discord] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from thewrongalice
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Sounds like a really rough time - hope you're feeling 100% soon! Oh and this chapter, like the rest of the story, is excellent!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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