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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from HMaxMarius
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Grrrrrrr.... I'm not so much worried about Fury messing with Buffy... She'll knock him on his backside... he just better leave Willow alone! He messes with her and Buffy might just forget that she wants to forget the Slayer...

Besides... wouldn't it be better if he recruited Redtree??? ;)


and Awwwwwww... Buffy's having fun =D

one last thing... Keystroke error... 'Wol'd'ram and Hart'...

Awesome as always!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Lithie
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Quite an interesting story. I don't remember what got me reading it, I'm generally skeptic about Buffy-centric story, maybe the late hour I started it but you got me hooked.

I like the slow pace you got Buffy to adapt to all the change and loss. JARVIS and Buffy can be quite funny and poor Pepper doesn't have an easy role. But still GO Pepper!

Am I wrong to find Fury & co keeping such close eye on her creepy?

Take your time to bring the Scoobies in, I like it that way and Buffy definitively need time.

Well that's all so, curious to read what you'll come up with next.
Review By [Lithie] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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squee for Iron Man and Squee for this update. Awesome, very much looking forward to more. shouldn't Buffy be contacting her old friends she seems to be doing a lot of healing. don't wanna rush you but it feels wrong to have Buffy just forget about her friends like this. I like to think she would be a good friend and not forget them, though I can understand not wanting to remember certain things about Sunnyhell it seems almost like a betrayal for her to not even think about them from time to time. She should fly them to Malibu for the weekend or something. just a thought. no need to feel any pressure but I feel like they should either do something to make it justifyable for her to just move on or she should show that she is missing them a little
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from alynambered
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Wow, Buffy's almost human, again. Great new chapter
Review By [alynambered] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DigiEmissary
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I really enjoy this story. And yes, I can't wait for Iron Man 3 either! :)
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Maleficuslupus
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*grin* Good to see you're still writing! I really enjoy you're work.

Just a small spelling correction for you though, in the July 7 2010 bit, you misspelled Wolfram and hart as Woldram and Hart.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [Maleficuslupus] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from kiwi
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lovely new addition. thanks for updating! :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Plato
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Great Chapter. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Plato] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from CageFire
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Great to see a new chapter. It's been a while, so I'm glad to see this still going. I'm really looking forward to the father/daughter reunion. I'm imagining something somewhat awkward yet funny.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Starfox
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Ah, the best friend shows up. Nice chapter. I am so waiting for Tony now. It is great how you manage to go from dark and depressing to slowly growing hope.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from jerichoras
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I love the story and am willing to wait for however long it takes you to finish. Also love the "House Rules" mention, it is one of my favorite songs.
Review By [jerichoras] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from bradsan
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To me it always be to short. It doesn't matter how long you made it. I love it that Buffy finally considered that she has a home again. Pepper, Jarvis and even Happy are doing a good job.

Can't wait what you will write next.

Good job and well done.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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There's a new trailer? Yay! Sorry... I mostly watch Disney and Cartoon Network these days. Sad, I know.

Great chapter! I love that Rhodey was introduced to the prospect of Buffy. So, when he finds Tony, will he mention the daughter that now resides at the Stark home in Malibu? I squee'd when I saw you updated. ^.^ Waiting for more!

CT.

ETA: Holy crap on a cracker! I just watched it and am definitely squeeing over it. Thanks for pointing it out!!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Vianca
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Let me gues, the way the armory/laboratory is placed, right?
Looks like a bad setup to me, way to little armor or even structuel support.
At the very least Tony could have added a few fixed point-defences to it all.

You know, that glove energy canon could work as a nice drill.
Tony could have carved a underground/undersea hidout beneed his house, if he really had wanted to.
I´m sure he could have made some automated building drones.
Ground Radar and Sonar should have given a map of how the ground looks on the inside, so digging should be possible, especialy if you start from the sea in order to get rid of any left-over dirt.

Why did Tony not use his Iron Man tech to create a car that could fly like that Delorian from "Back To The Future II"?
Or build his own version of the Shield Helicarrier?
Could have helpt him with the attack on his house, if that was what the new wing really was.

Thunderbirds still rule, especialy in hidding their stuff inside their island.
Maybe the house that covered Thunderbird-3 it´s launch site (old serie or the movie one), could be something for Buffy, with a little alteration to the basic shape.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Gideon
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A couple of threads touched on here. James probably didn't need the extra motivation. I'm sure he is working as hard as he could already on finding Tony. At least now he can break the news to Tony before he actually meets up with his daughter.
Willow is making waves in international espionage rings. Small waves but still interesting waves. Maybe if Fury thinks Buffy needs her friends again he can help them get back in contact. And now we have a name for the martial arts instructor but we have to wait till the next chapter at least to see them in action. Can't wait!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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