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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Seraph
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Thanks for updating, but I'm glad that you're better! Honestly, I don't really fancy anyone as a love interest for Buffy; but if I had to choose, I wouldn't pair her with a big name character. I'd go with Falcon to be honest. Steve has his love and so does Thor and Clint and Bruce. This Buffy you've crafted seems to go for the low key. And we have examples of her with the big names so just on novelty alone, I would prefer something different. So yeah, I would be interested in a Buffy/Falcon pairing.

Anywho, great update and I'm looking forward to more when you can. :)
Review By [Seraph] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SuziJ
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I am really enjoying this story. Definitely something different.

I agree that Steve would be a great choice for Buffy and the reactions from Tony.
Review By [SuziJ] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from TheTurnCoat
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yay! new chapter! Lovely as always :) Looking forward to Obie being all evil and corporate in future chapters.

As long as She never EVER hooks back up with Angel, then I've really got no preferences for Buffy's romantic entanglements. I'm sure I'll like whatever you come up with better than that I would :)

Thanks for writing!
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from BtwnBlackandWhite
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I am so happy to see an update. I have always been a great fan of your fics and especially this one. I very much look forward to reading more.
Review By [BtwnBlackandWhite] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from GraysonPaladin
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Holy Frak you updated... and ouch busted arms... yeah that would do it. So lets see Buffy is out in the open, WRH is gunning for her and Obi is plotting, and Tony is no closer to getting out than before. Boy is he in for a surprise when he gets home.

Nice to see Buffy getting better, though I know that when Tony comes back things will get tense again.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from wot
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Glad to hear that you're recovering from whatever it was that befell you. This was another excellent chapter. As for Buffy's romantic attachments, why not try something that isn't particularly standard? I'm not too knowledgable about the Iron Man universe, but Steve seems a little too... cliche maybe? Anyways, keep up the great work!
Review By [wot] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from PixieInTheDark
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Sorry to hear about your accident. Glad your ok.

Great chapter. Love that Lilah's plan back fired. Never really got into angel but from what episodes i did watch i hated her. Find it awesome that it was a normal pa that foiled her plan lol.

Of pairings i personally prefer Clint/Buffy. I think Steve is a little too straight lace for her (specially with this fic as her life is darker earlier than in the show). I think Clint would understand that part of her life and he'd find her ability to kick ass hot and he wouldn't be threatened by it. I also think Buffy/Natasha friendship would be pretty cool with the whole council/red room deal and that they have both done things that have tainted them.
Review By [PixieInTheDark] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Iceflame
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Well, since your apparently keeping to the movies for inspiration, that limits the pool :).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from LNR
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LOVE it!! Keep going More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'd have to say, Clint for Buffy.

Yeah, Cap could match her or beat her, and I can see a lot of inter play and sparing, but he just doesn't have the personality for Buffy I think.
I can't see her really wanting the notoriety that would come with dating Steve.

Clint, is a normal human that can fight his own battles. I think she'd have to chase him a bit though, as hes a but older.

She does like them older, he kinda has the same hair type as Angel too lol.
Review By [LNR] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from jcjade
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Barton should be the love interest... ^_^
Review By [jcjade] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from deathgeonous
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First off, I think that being in an accident and losing the function of both your arms is probably one of the very best excuses on "Why I didn't update' I have ever heard. That said, you did a great job on the update, I'd never have known you were high on painkillers while writing it if you hadn't said so. As to the future pairings? Well, while seeing Tony bust a gasket if she hooked up with Steve, I, sadly, think that Steve is slightly... cliche, as it were. He works, and, as I said, it'd be fun to see Tony's reaction to that, but... let's look at other options, shall we? I think Thor's out, due to Jane, and Loki... overdone, next we have Clint. No, just no. Bruce? He's a maybe. I, sadly, just don't see her with Avenger other then Steve. Well, maybe Natasha IF you were willing to go and do some Femslash, but even then...... probably not. But wait! You said you're bring the X-Men into this! That opens up a whole new can of worms for us to examine. Hmm, Logan, again, overdone. Scott? No, he'd drive her crazy in a week, maybe less. Hmm, lets see...... I know, let's go really out there and see if you can pair her up with Victor. No, I am not kidding. Have you ever seen I Buffy Victor Creed/Sabertooth Pairing, EVER? It could be fun. Just pointing that out. If not, sigh, Steve I guess. Le sigh. Anyways, thanks for writing this, and sorry to hear about your accident, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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Woo Hoo! love the update. So sorry to hear things have been rough for you lately. As far as romantic entanglements go, I love the idea of Cap. and the total hate Tony would have of that union but I am worried Steve would never understand her darkness. Have you thought about Clint at all? He would get her in ways that she doesn't get herself I think. Just a thought. Now if you were into writing a threesome I could totally see Steve Buffy and Clint together LOL Again just a thought. Yes I am evil sometimes. mua ha ha! I love the idea of Steve and Buffy I am just worried about that one thing. But either way I know you will write it beautifully so I will love it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Stratagemini
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With regard to Buffy's Romantic entanglements, Steve seems a bit young for her. She's not even older than America. Now Thor, That's someone more Buffy's preffered age.

I'd agree with either Steve or Thor.

One small mistake.

It's Obadiah Stane, not Obadiah Stain.
Review By [Stratagemini] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from IronOx
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Very sorry to hear of your hurt, very glad you are writing again. This story was on the list of really good stuff that I was hoping would continue.

Not sure were to go for romantic interest. Given her background at this point, Steve would really depend on how he is handled. She is not going to do well with whitebread. And I don't see Clint as mmmm "messy" enough for her either. Logan would work well. And ooh would Tony hate that one.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from dimonyoanghel
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Thank you for the update! Will Tony hear about Buffy being outed to the press while he's in the cave? As for romantic interests I'm pretty fond of Steve too so I'm pushing for him :)
Review By [dimonyoanghel] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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