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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from LNR
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LOVE it!! Keep going More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'd have to say, Clint for Buffy.

Yeah, Cap could match her or beat her, and I can see a lot of inter play and sparing, but he just doesn't have the personality for Buffy I think.
I can't see her really wanting the notoriety that would come with dating Steve.

Clint, is a normal human that can fight his own battles. I think she'd have to chase him a bit though, as hes a but older.

She does like them older, he kinda has the same hair type as Angel too lol.
Review By [LNR] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from jcjade
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Barton should be the love interest... ^_^
Review By [jcjade] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from deathgeonous
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First off, I think that being in an accident and losing the function of both your arms is probably one of the very best excuses on "Why I didn't update' I have ever heard. That said, you did a great job on the update, I'd never have known you were high on painkillers while writing it if you hadn't said so. As to the future pairings? Well, while seeing Tony bust a gasket if she hooked up with Steve, I, sadly, think that Steve is slightly... cliche, as it were. He works, and, as I said, it'd be fun to see Tony's reaction to that, but... let's look at other options, shall we? I think Thor's out, due to Jane, and Loki... overdone, next we have Clint. No, just no. Bruce? He's a maybe. I, sadly, just don't see her with Avenger other then Steve. Well, maybe Natasha IF you were willing to go and do some Femslash, but even then...... probably not. But wait! You said you're bring the X-Men into this! That opens up a whole new can of worms for us to examine. Hmm, Logan, again, overdone. Scott? No, he'd drive her crazy in a week, maybe less. Hmm, lets see...... I know, let's go really out there and see if you can pair her up with Victor. No, I am not kidding. Have you ever seen I Buffy Victor Creed/Sabertooth Pairing, EVER? It could be fun. Just pointing that out. If not, sigh, Steve I guess. Le sigh. Anyways, thanks for writing this, and sorry to hear about your accident, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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Woo Hoo! love the update. So sorry to hear things have been rough for you lately. As far as romantic entanglements go, I love the idea of Cap. and the total hate Tony would have of that union but I am worried Steve would never understand her darkness. Have you thought about Clint at all? He would get her in ways that she doesn't get herself I think. Just a thought. Now if you were into writing a threesome I could totally see Steve Buffy and Clint together LOL Again just a thought. Yes I am evil sometimes. mua ha ha! I love the idea of Steve and Buffy I am just worried about that one thing. But either way I know you will write it beautifully so I will love it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Stratagemini
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With regard to Buffy's Romantic entanglements, Steve seems a bit young for her. She's not even older than America. Now Thor, That's someone more Buffy's preffered age.

I'd agree with either Steve or Thor.

One small mistake.

It's Obadiah Stane, not Obadiah Stain.
Review By [Stratagemini] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from IronOx
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Very sorry to hear of your hurt, very glad you are writing again. This story was on the list of really good stuff that I was hoping would continue.

Not sure were to go for romantic interest. Given her background at this point, Steve would really depend on how he is handled. She is not going to do well with whitebread. And I don't see Clint as mmmm "messy" enough for her either. Logan would work well. And ooh would Tony hate that one.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from dimonyoanghel
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Thank you for the update! Will Tony hear about Buffy being outed to the press while he's in the cave? As for romantic interests I'm pretty fond of Steve too so I'm pushing for him :)
Review By [dimonyoanghel] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Luhh
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No Steve! Or Hawkeye! They are too boring for her
Natasha!!! It would be awesome! Just perfect! Pleeeease!
But if you insist on keeping with the het at least put her with someone else. Maybe Loki? Or Bruce?
Review By [Luhh] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from randyzoopurple
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Steve or that hawk guy
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ranlynn
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Welcome back. Great chapter and hope to see more soon.

So Steve huh? Nice guy, not afraid of strong capable women. And she wouldn't have to worry about accidentally breaking him.
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Wrytergrrrl
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I'm so glad you're back! I was just thinking about this story recently. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the day Tony and Buffy finally meet!
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from MarcusRowland
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Nice to see this continuing, looking forward to more.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Willimer
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Glad youre okay after your accident!
Great update, I think its getting us all keyed up for the Tony/Buffy meeting or the possible problems of Tony's captures hearing about Buffy and thinking they could have more leverage...
I have to say im moremofa Buffy/Clint fan myself, I think Buffy would be much better as a little sister to Steve helping him get use to the new world

cant wait for your next chapter, keep up the amazing work
Review By [Willimer] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from larin
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Was pleasently surprised with this new chapter. You've knocked off any rust, imho. Glad you are recovinging.
Review By [larin] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from yrfgd
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Good to see you back in the game with this story. I like this chapter, it give a nice bit of development to Buffy while Tony's in the 'Stan. And her starting to look into protective gear sound's like a lead in to her becoming one of the heros
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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