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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from melferd
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just found this little jem. what an amazing story. I love how you simply brought Buffy out of the 90s into today. Thank you for this.
Review By [melferd] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from deathgeonous
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Ah, I just had to reread this again. It's great, if not a little too much of an angst fest at start, but that fit so... Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from SpacedCadet
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The beginning was slow and depressing and even then, I couldn't wait for more.

It's still kind of slow but no longer depressing...and I really wish you'd write faster!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from unicornzvi
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Very nice, I would have sworn there's no way to have Buffy change into someone who restores motorcycles for fun in a believable way (not at least without several decades backstory). But you made it work.
I didn't really like the start of the story with Buffy going on about fire and ashes, but I suspect I would have liked it even less if you hadn't had her react that way.
One thing I can't figure out if did deliberately or if it was a mistake - according to Jarvis Buffy is almost a year ahead of what even top rank universities would expect of her, but Pepper acts as is that means Buffy is behind in her schooling. Also why does Buffy think she needs to wait for her 18th birthday to start university?

I hope we'll see Xander, Willow and Giles soon. While having Buffy leave the way she did made perfect sense, and having her not contact her friends so far was somewhat plausible with Buffy recovering somewhat it is becoming less plausible.

About Buffy's upcoming martial arts lessons - I'm picturing the teacher's reaction when they meet Buffy and realize that not only is she stronger than someone her size should be, and one of the fastest people they've met, she's holding back!
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from MarieKnight
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I like it a lot!! Very funny and well written...
Review By [MarieKnight] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Weaver
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"But he did know for certain that the only other Stark that could pose a threat to him in any way was still alive, and in Malibu under the care of Pepper. What kind of teenage girl isn't at home in the middle of the night on a weekday?"

Does that mean what I think it means?
Review By [Weaver] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Scathach
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I truly love this story! I can't wait for Buffy to meet Tony.
Review By [Scathach] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Scathach
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I really, REALLY, love this!! Jarvis has always been one of my favorite characters.
Review By [Scathach] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from cazbar
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I just found this story. Its absolutely awesome. This is one of the few Buffy/Ironman crossovers that I actually liked. I've read it through three times now and it's still good. I would love to read more. I can't wait to see how she interacts with more people in this new life she has been dropped into as she comes out of her grief. And Tony's reaction to finding out Joyce is dead, Buffy is now in his custody, on top of everything else he has gone through, yep, can't wait to read that one.
Review By [cazbar] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from yrfgd
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OK, interesting point in this chapter; yes Fury's the Uberspook, but really remote cameras in Tony's Lab. That's a little hard to believe.

Interesting where the story's going, but I'm glad that you've cut down on the angsty introspection from the beginning. I found that a bit hard to get through.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from yrfgd
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OK, if the motorcycle puts that kind of smile on her face, I can just imagine what The Suit would do. Bonding with Dad over iron man tech ~ could be good.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from ShyBob
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I was holding off on this until it was finished, but... Great job with the dialogue and character interactions. Your mix of dialogue, introspection, and narrative is just right (or I wouldn't have made it past the second chapter). This is the longest non-action story I've read since school, which is saying a lot. I'm hoping to see the Stark family reunion some day. You'll get a big shiny rec for it (see, a little praise now, and hint of a bigger reward when the job is done). I've obviously got to go and read some of your fics that I skipped because I didn't watch the crossover shows.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from QueenOfFantasy
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No intention of irritating- just supporting or encouraging- or whatever term you prefer.
I really can't wait for the next chapter- especially since i'm back in the iron man mood ever since watching im3 even though that was a month ago.
Yeah but i really can't wait for the interactions between tony and buffy- which we're getting really close to- which is why you can't leave us high and dry now!
Also, i know it's important to get background story stuff done before we get to the big plot- but let's be honest- did it take Harry Potter 13 chapters to get to hogwarts. Did it take Bella 13 chapters to find out edwards secret (i swear i only read it once because my older sister insisted :P). So don't worry about getting all the details in- some people actually hate it when a story takes note of every single tiny thing, and it's not like you can't keep developing the plot when tony's back home.
I don't say this to be mean, i'm just trying help you improve. Not saying I'm right and your wrong- or i'm a genius on the area of writing- i'm babbling, i'll stop now.
Can't wait for the next chapter- i'm going to re-read this story again right now though :D
Review By [QueenOfFantasy] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from IdgeyDarling
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Love this! Couldn't stop reading it till the end. Can't wait for a new chapter.
Review By [IdgeyDarling] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Vorax
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Just found this and am really liking this one. I can't believe I didn't find this before now. The worst part of this is that I reached the end of what you have written so far.
Review By [Vorax] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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