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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Moderator)Ava
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Sorry to hear about your accident. Hopefully your recovery is as swift and painless as possible. As for the story I highly enjoyed the latest chapter and Lilah really failed terribly with her first attempt at disgracing the youngest Stark, didn't she? I'm curious as to who the male voice-over person could be because I'm leaning towards Lindsey, but you're don't shy away from twists so I'm not placing any bets. ;)

I do admit that I've reread this story multiple times and each time I find some other tidbit that I missed on a previous pass. Though I do disagree with Fury's thoughts that Buffy would figure out Natasha right away since Angel, Ampata and Ford all managed to trick her in their own right, but he might not be aware of them.

I think it's too soon to tell about pairings though I have a soft spot for Steve so I wouldn't be adverse to the idea. I say let the muse decide on the who and when.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanreaderonetwo
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One thing that occurred to me while rereading this chapter was wondering how a paparazzi was able to photograph Buffy surfing without being spotted by Jarvis. I would have expected that Tony would have his house and property covered tightly covered with cameras, alarms and sensors. A setup so tight that Jarvis could detect, track and scan for threats (snoop gear, explosives, etc) every mouse, squirrel or rabbit, much less a human, that got within 100 meters (or more) of his house's property line.

OTOH maybe Jarvis _did_ spot the photographer shooting Buffy surfing but didn't stop him because he was off Tony's property and couldn't legally be driven away.

I would also expect that Tony's house would routinely have 24/365 protection by _several_ highly trained (nearly secret service level) Stark Corp security guards, so Jarvis wouldn't have to bring in security. Image of the photographer shooting the pictures while is being watched by Jarvis's cameras and one of the guards is nearby keeping an eye on him.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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Great updates! I really love the direction you've taken this. Looking forward to more.

Sorry to hear about your accident!!! :(

I like Steve for her in this.

CT.

ETA: Actually, I've just developed a need for some Buffy/Coulson love... Could you imagine Tony's reaction to Agent dating his daughter?????
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [16 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Mayrose
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So sorry to hear about your accident! As we say here in Holland, veel sterkte!

I really enjoyed this chapter (just as much as the others!). Its an interesting development now that Buffy is in the limelight but i can imagine it can put a lot of pressure on her, especially in her current frame of mind. Luckily she has pepper though! And i find it hilarious that she managed to screw up one of Lilah's plans!

I'm not really one for romance plots, maybe she can meet peter parker in college or something? (Don't know if you're into Spiderman? Or maybe an xmen?) Either way I'm sure it'll be great!

Really glad to read this fic again! Definitely looking forward to reading more!
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Javian
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Great story, I'm enjoying it.
Review By [Javian] • Date [9 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AllenPitt
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Romantic interests, hm. Steve Rogers springs to mind. Younger than her usual but still possible. There are a few possibles at Xavier's, of course....
I wonder how news of this will affect Stark & captors? Hopefully he'll be ready to make his great escape soon.
I think she's kidding herself if she thinks she can hide her abilities for long from the martial arts instructor, that should get interesting...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Chan
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Humm... she might be done with males for the moment considering her last beau went homicidal but if she were look males or females then someone whom might be able to protect themselves might appeal?

Still very interested in how this is going to develop wonders what Tony's going to make of the things that his daughter been up to once he effects his self-rescue.
Review By [Chan] • Date [6 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from kittenpoker
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I am so beyond happy that you're still alive and (mostly) in one piece!!! I hope you get well soon, and not just because I am dying for more of this story. Injuries are the worst - you just want to do things you can't do and patience has never been one of my strong suits (and then injuries amplify that!)! I went back and re-read the whole story and completely fell head-over-heels in love with it again. The way you write these characters - they seem to jump off the page, and your 'verses are blended so fantastically it is the biggest pleasure to find where you put the pieces together. I wasn't sure if for pairings you were playing around with Steve or wanting other ideas? I do love Steve - and I have to admit, ever since the WWII bike belonging to Howard came into play I've been wondering if you were steering us down that road subtly. I adore Steve, and Steve with Buffy seems like it could be nothing but perfect. I do, however, have to admit that my heart is a little set on Buffy and Clint, seeing as how Shield has apparently been intertwined with Buffy this whole time. Whichever way you choose, you are one of the greatest writers, and I have complete faith that it will turn out to become even more of an amazing story than it already is (it's hard to top what you've got, by the way) and I can't wait. Get all healed up, and know that there are some super nerdy people who absolutely love your writing and are eagerly awaiting more (well, at least one super nerdy person, no shame in admitting it). Thank you so, so very much for continuing this remarkable story.
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [6 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from katimaviklindzy
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So glad you plan on continuing this story. As far as romance goes I've always liked the Buffy/Hawkeye pairing.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sahugani
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Stumbled across this story last night. Couldn't put it down until I finished it. Amazing work so far and I can't wait for more.

as for relationship suggestions. I'm starting to get sick of Sif looking like a kicked puppy in the movies and recently on shield. If your open to Femslash maybe she could get a little love? lol :P
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [3 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AnneLilian
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I'm thinking either Steve, or that Declan guy as Buffy's love interest (unless you'd planned for him to just be a friend). I seriously can't wait for this fic to be updated, so please, please, please update soon!
Great job, I can't wait to read more.
Anne

btw: really cool that you're planning on sticking with this all the way up to the Winter Soldier (though, I admit, I'm hoping the Avengers will help each other out with stuff like what happened in the Winter Soldier).
Review By [AnneLilian] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AbigaelRose
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Still an amazing story that I hope to see continued. Steve sounds good but if you Did Clint then you could get a really neat archery scene and a "Don't touch my bow little girl" tone meeting. Steve would be almost typecast as a buffy significant other what with him being timeless, in more than one ways and super tall. I hope to hear more soon
-liza
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Morgomir
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First let me wish you a speedy and full recovery.
Second, great update. Keep up th good work. As for romantic entanglement, I haven't got a clue good luck though.
PS: I'm still curious about how the others in Sunnydale are doing.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Claddagh
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Great chapter. I think Steve would be a good match for her. He is someone she could spar with and not hurt, and he would understand about not not being "normal". Plus, it would drive Tony nuts! Bonus!
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Callista
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Thank you for another wonderful update. I love this story, and I'm always excited whenever you post a new chapter. I'm sorry to hear about your accident, and I hope you'll get better soon.

As for pairings, I'm a big fan of Buffy/Loki or Buffy/Steve, but Buffy/Clint would be good too.
Review By [Callista] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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