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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Luhh
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No Steve! Or Hawkeye! They are too boring for her
Natasha!!! It would be awesome! Just perfect! Pleeeease!
But if you insist on keeping with the het at least put her with someone else. Maybe Loki? Or Bruce?
Review By [Luhh] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from randyzoopurple
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Steve or that hawk guy
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ranlynn
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Welcome back. Great chapter and hope to see more soon.

So Steve huh? Nice guy, not afraid of strong capable women. And she wouldn't have to worry about accidentally breaking him.
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Wrytergrrrl
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I'm so glad you're back! I was just thinking about this story recently. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the day Tony and Buffy finally meet!
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from MarcusRowland
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Nice to see this continuing, looking forward to more.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Willimer
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Glad youre okay after your accident!
Great update, I think its getting us all keyed up for the Tony/Buffy meeting or the possible problems of Tony's captures hearing about Buffy and thinking they could have more leverage...
I have to say im moremofa Buffy/Clint fan myself, I think Buffy would be much better as a little sister to Steve helping him get use to the new world

cant wait for your next chapter, keep up the amazing work
Review By [Willimer] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from larin
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Was pleasently surprised with this new chapter. You've knocked off any rust, imho. Glad you are recovinging.
Review By [larin] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from yrfgd
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Good to see you back in the game with this story. I like this chapter, it give a nice bit of development to Buffy while Tony's in the 'Stan. And her starting to look into protective gear sound's like a lead in to her becoming one of the heros
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from nomanic
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I'm glad you're okay. I really enjoy your writing!
Review By [nomanic] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Sinangeled
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Thrilled to read the new chapter, glad to hear you are doing better after your accident, and continuing to live this story. I am a fan if the Buffy/Steve idea, in case you are counting votes :)
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from macalaarmstrong
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Hello,
I don't review much, because it is hard for me to with my very low vision (I am going blind and am already considered legally blind), but after reading that you are putting in great effort to post chapters I thought it was only fair that I do the same to review (yours is more effort han mine :) ). I want to tell you how sorry I am for whatever happened and it is amazing that you are still worried about getting chapters out for us. You are amazing and I am in awe of you. I love all of your stories, but this one is one of my favorites; my other favorite was Watching Forever and I am eagerly waiting or the sequel to that one. YOu are an amazing writer and obviously an amazing and determined person as well. So, I hope that everything goes good for you from now on. My prayers are with you. Keep up the great worka nd have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from oledocmeth
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Love the story plot so far - will be interesting to see what you do with involving Buffy with bad guys like Ivan Vanko attacking Stark with the whips, dissing Justin Hammer with quip fu, or having fun antagonizing Fury
I hope you have her helping out against the Mandarin too.

But was thinking of possible pairings - If Buffy still has a thing for Bad Boys, then I would go for the Loki or Hulk, not Banner but Hulk. You could have fun with lines like "have you seen the size of his big green schwanstucker" or for Loki with his helmet "are you feeling horny?". LOL
Review By [oledocmeth] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Bears
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Welcome back! Sorry to hear about your accident but I'm glad you're better now. Great new chapter as well. I certainly notice any difference in your writing style. I also liked the different perspectives in this chapter as well. As far as a romantic interest for Buffy, I think I like Clint Barton better than Steve. JMO. Thanks again, Claire
Review By [Bears] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Rich
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I'm glad to see you're back with this story, and sorry to hear about the problems you've been having. Don't worry about being "rusty"; this chapter is very well done. It's good to see Buffy moving on, and I look forward to seeing the "distractions" that Jarvis comes up with. Also, it looks like Bufy might end up with her own version of the Iron Man armor by the time oets out. Maybe Buffy will go and get him ?

On pairings, I think Buffy and Steve might be a good match.
Review By [Rich] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ZippySaboteur
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I favor femslash so I prefer buffy's bi side. maybe someone from xavier's group at that point, though not a mutant, she could identify with one of them and they with her on the whole suddenly empowered, but don't want it thing. Especially rogue, for the femslash side. But honestly I think Steve is overdone to a ridiculous degree, I think mostly because he's Riley without the insecurity, which still makes him as boring as Riley was.
Review By [ZippySaboteur] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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