Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Fantasymania
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Good God, this is amazing. How will she react to meeting Tony? Or Obidiah? Can't wait!
Review By [Fantasymania] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from CobaltGryphon
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Excellent story, can't wait to see what happens when Tony returns from captivity and starts building the Ironman suit. Will Buffy be involved, and is Pepper going to learn about the Slayer?
Review By [CobaltGryphon] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The setup is good. I still have to wonder what Tony will do when he gets back from Afganistan to find his daughter is both living in his house, is as gifted as he is just kinesthetically, and is as messed up as him as well. They could possible use creating the Iron Tech as a bonding experience since Tony is a Major gear head and Buffy has essentially taken over his workshop as a coping mechanism. Hopefully if he ever finds out what happened to the scourge he won't over react. He will find out that Buffy is the slayer. I look forward to seeing his reaction.
Thank you
Review By [tammin] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from brokenmimir
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I liked that chapter -- it feels like Buffy is slowly coming out of her shell here. She's no longer completely overwhelmed, and the fact she's acknowledging what happened with Angelus, if only to herself, seems like progress. Plus, its nice seeing her doing some martial arts instead of forgetting them. Great fic, looking forward to more!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from deathgeonous
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Thanks for the update, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from wizathogwarts
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Buffy's in a situation that doesn't have an easy resolution, and definitely not a fast one. You've done an excellent job building the situation so that the reader, at least this reader, is more than willing to journey with Buffy to wherever this takes her no matter how long. The other thing that you've done that I really appreciate is treating Buffy like the intelligent, thoughtful person Joss so rarely did. I am really looking forward to Buffy realizing her full potential and you seem to have the same goal. Thank you!
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Go Pepper! I like that. Steamrolling over Buffy. Pepper will be good for Buffy, and hopefully Buffy will be good for Tony. Either way, I look forward to what comes next. Thanks for sharing!
Awesome new chapter. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from MarcusRowland
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Enjoying this still and looking forward to seeing where you take it. The pacing is working very well for me; Buffy needs to come to terms with her new situation before things get more complicated.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from eriktheviking
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Great fun winding up the Analyst and I also liked Buffy's realization of how she has personalized some areas of the house. Well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Hmm, martial arts instructors...that might actually get Buffy's attention. Maybe, possibly, if nothing else it should be interesting. I loved the reaction of the therapist! I wonder what Buffy would have don't if she had gotten one that had an open mind? [grin] That might have been a good thing.
Great chapter!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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