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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ZippySaboteur
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I favor femslash so I prefer buffy's bi side. maybe someone from xavier's group at that point, though not a mutant, she could identify with one of them and they with her on the whole suddenly empowered, but don't want it thing. Especially rogue, for the femslash side. But honestly I think Steve is overdone to a ridiculous degree, I think mostly because he's Riley without the insecurity, which still makes him as boring as Riley was.
Review By [ZippySaboteur] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Cainan
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HI,
I am so glad to see more of this story. I hope you are feeling better, and I wish you much luck in your recovery.
In terms of the parings for this story, Buffy is very very damaged. So if you could delay the final ship as much as possible, I feel like that would be for the best.

Maybe she eventually ends up with clint or bruce. Someone who knows where she comes from?

You are an amazing writer. Thank you for coming back.
Review By [Cainan] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from magicalbookworm
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so glad to see another chapter on this. Can't wait to read more
Review By [magicalbookworm] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ThePowerPanda
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I'm voting for Steve. I think Buffy's modern sensibilities would be a good match for Steve's old fashioned ideals. And just so you know, California doesn't have any private beaches.
Review By [ThePowerPanda] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from deliza
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Glad to see an update. I'd prefer Buffy/Hawkeye. I just don't like Steve for her. He's too hero-ish.
Review By [deliza] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DianeCastle
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I'm glad to see you're back, and I'm sorry to hear why you went on hiatus. Just remember that Real Life is more important. Take care of yourself.

And I look forward to more of this story and a subsequent series. Steve seems like the best fit for a teen Buffy, but hasn't everyone done that already? How about someone closer to Buffy's age, who Tony could have more fun threatening, say... Peter Parker? They're both really strong and quick, they're both really smart, they both really inventive, they're both good with the quips particularly in battle, they both understand what it's like to lose someone close to you...
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from grd
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Happy to see more. Funny that Buffy has started exploring body armor. Pairing with Steve would be fun. His old sensibilities to her modern quirks. Hope she picks up weapons training to go along with her martial arts. That would be one way to mask her Slayerness. Looking forward to when Buffy and Stane clash over something. Or will it be Tony to handle that.
Review By [grd] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SpikesSlayer
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Welcome back. I'm so glad to know you'll be continuing this story. I think the Buffy/Steve pairing would be great, especially the training matches that could occur.

I look forward to the next update.
Review By [SpikesSlayer] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from CageFire
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It's really awesome to see a new chapter after so long. It seems like we're getting real close to the point where they find Tony. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from HMaxMarius
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Glad to see you back. And my sympathies on the injuries. From the sound of things, we're lucky you're still with us. *gently hugs*

Hmmm... As to romantic interest, my advice is always 'don't force anything'. Unless the romance is integral to where the story's going, let the characters work it out themselves instead of 'scripting' it initially. Once you see the chemistry between them, then you script it.

Regarding Steve and Buffy... I'm not sure I could see it. Steve's a bit old fashioned and Buffy's about 17 1/2 at this point while Steve is about 25(ish), leaving out the decades frozen. Unless you're going to give Buffy a couple years to grow before thawing the 'Capsicle'. I could see 'Buffy' pursuing Steve, but I'm not sure about the 'Elizabeth' persona she has built for herself. Elizabeth would need a common passion to draw them together for it to work... maybe the motorcycles.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Recent Donor)tammin
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Welcome back, I enjoyed this chapter, particularly the way that Pepper totally shut down Lila's sabotage of Buffy's life. As for romance it is currently a tossup between Steve and Bruce, however Steve reminds me more of a cross between Xander and Riley, and Bruce actually reminds me more of souled Spike.

Well I hope that rehab isn't too much of a pain and I look forward to your next chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from NutsContract
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Who should Buffy be paired with? I think out of the Avengers, Steve would make the most sense. Also, the awkwardness between Steve and Tony would be AWESOME!! But, especially after Cap2, I'm so partial to Bucky, it's not even funny. And considering Buffy's tastes in men run more Bad Boy than Boy Scout (Angel vs. Riley) I think Buffy would absolutely adore Bucky's puppy eyes.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Estherra
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I’m happy to see you back. For romantic entanglements I’d go with Kitty Pryde from the X-Men. Joss Whedon based Buffy off of Kitty, I think it’d be kind of funny Buffy falling in love with the character she’s based on. You know I’m going to look and see if anyone else thought of this.
Review By [Estherra] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Tatsu
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Glad to see your alive.
Fun chapter.

Think Stain was hydra? Could explain why he was backdoor dealing to terrorists.

the Wolf the Ram and the Hart official law firm of HYDRA. ^_~

Hope your recuperation goes well.
Review By [Tatsu] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Honestly? With the way you've set this up, I'm thinking Bruce Banner wouldn't be such a bad choice for love interest...assuming he can talk to normal people and not just other science geniuses.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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