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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from wot
Review:
An absolutely incredible story. I think you really managed to capture something special with your portrayal of Buffy's character over these chapters. I'm really looking forward to where you take this next.
Review By [wot] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, thanks for the update. I've really been looking forward to it. Bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Selonianth
Review:
Not bad, though I expect that Buffy will need an equally fast reacting plane as she does a car for her to be able to fly IT that well.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from TheTurnCoat
Review:
Thank you for the great chapter. New character, nice. are you planning on John being a recurring character?

Also, I'm still really looking forward for the return of Tony. Will having Buffy there have any affect his decision to be Iron Man? and I completely forgot about Obie! Are you...Wow...I'm stopping right there before I go crazy and leave waaay too many questions. Yes, I'm the annoying reviewer that does that:)

Anyway, great chapter and thanks for writing!
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written thawing of Buffy.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awesome update. looking forward to more. Hope you are feeling better. hmm when does Tony get out/into the story?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
I've missed this so much and was super excited to see an update waiting for me. Happy belated birthday. hope you're feeling better. can't wait for more
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Discord
Review:
Thanks for the update :)
Review By [Discord] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Starfox
Review:
Very nice and original take on the "Buffy's father is..." concept. I am waiting for the next part - and hoping Tony shows up soon.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from kittenpoker
Review:
Glad you survived the holidays! And Happy Belated Birthday!! It's always great to read another chapter of this story- I was just wondering yesterday about a new chapter, and then here it was! I've only got one little nitpicky thing, and I know you research your stories Extensively so I am hoping you wont mind me pointing it Out. I've ridden horses since before I could walk, and I'm pretty sure it's a general thing, not just my family, but usually you mount from the left side of a horse- you tack up, stick your left leg in the stirrup, and pretty much fling yourself into the saddle - pulling can loosen or off balance the saddle. I'm pretty sure you're going for a western style ranch, not English riding, but if I'm wrong please ignore me! :) riding a horse is one of the best ways to get your head on straight- especially on a large ranch with little to no other people. Hopefully it can help. As always, it was a treat and I can't wait for the next installment!
Comments from author:
thanks for the review and the saddle thing is all me. I ride but I'm a leftie and stupidly didn't think about the fact that I mount differently than most. Especially since I have my own custom saddle.
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Loved the wonderful FAMILY feel of that 4th of July surf and grill outing on Tony's private beach, even if neither Pepper nor Happy are related to each other or to Buffy by blood (but then, families of choice and circumstance have always figured prominently in the Buffyverse, at least as much as families of blood)..
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CageFire
Review:
Great to see a new chapter. Keep up the awesome work. I'll be really looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from purrfus
Review:
Keeping busy enough not to think and wear out the slayer energy doesn't really leave much time lift for other things so far anyway. Nice to see her a little enthused about something - good balance with the grief.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from thewrongalice
Review:
Oh yay - love the update! And I like the OC - a friend with empathy, not a replacement for Willow or Xander but as well as ('cause both Willow and Xander struck me as a little bit not quite there yet with the empathy - and maybe a bit needy, although that could be my interpretation). Is Tony going to be kidnapped for the whole three months? Or come back sooner? What can I say, I'm really looking forward to see how you write those first few scenes of interaction! Glad Pepper's learning to surf, although is it strange that I miss JARVIS when he's not in a chapter?
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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