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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from randyzoopurple
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yes buffy in power
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from macalaarmstrong
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Hello,
I just wanted to drop a line to let you know how grateful I am that you are still writing this story even though from your notes you've had a hard time lately. I have limited vision so I don't review often, because it takes forever for me to, but I felt you deserved it. I don't know exactly what happened, but it sounded like you have had it hard, and for you to even think about writing for us is amazing. You are an amazing writer, and I have nejoyed the majority of your stories (there is a few that I haven't read I believe, but the ones I have read have rocked). This one Fortune Days and Watching Forever have been my favorites, and I wait eagerly for the updates for this one, and can't wait for the second installment of Watching Forever. So, I wait for your next update eagerly. Keep up teh great work, and have a nice day.

Smiles,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from JinaSolo
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I think Buffy needs to get back at Pepper.

There was no real logical reason to put Buffy in the public eye. That was in the companies best interest, not Buffy's. That was manipulation at it's worst. And Buffy is not healing, she is hiding. Harder to let the mask crack after you have been pretending that you are fine... Buffy needs to heal and do what she needs to do, and not what Pepper wants. Pepper needs to accept that.

Now that Tony is back I think that Buffy needs to put her foot down: Pepper leaves her alone, or she is back in Sunnydale - Buffy is the Slayer... Also, lock Pepper put of the house for at least a month...
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from aspifgnfu
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Ok that was very believable. I absolutely love what you did with this chapter both Tony's interactions with Buffy and her response to the stock price dropping. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Review By [aspifgnfu] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from CindyB
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Awesome'ness! I can't wait to see more Buffy and Tony interaction.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from LNR
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WOO HOO!! Another Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More please SOON!!!
Review By [LNR] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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LOL there was so much I liked about this chapter. Especially it being here to read! awesome, and funny too. I loved Jarvis asking if Tony had advanced beyond picture books. there were a few other things that gave me a good laugh too. I love that Buffy and Tony bonded a little over the motorcycle, but that she was still pulling away. So excited the next chapter is almost done. : ) YES! though I am wondering why Fitz is going to have a nerdgasim LOL looking forward to more Loving it please continue.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from earelen
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I love how Buffy has become so protective of SI's employees. I can't wait to see more Buffy & Tony banter, especially when he stops being an asshole!! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [earelen] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Selonianth
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This is good... but funnily enough unless shit gets even worse for SI than it does in canon her buying up the stock is just going to do one thing... make her even more blindingly rich when Tony says three words.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from eriktheviking
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So easy to see this Tony trying to swallow his foot. Well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from norgco
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Brilliant!

I like the Father/Daughter bonding over engineering scene, and Pepper not getting that this IS a reconciliation scene, at least as far as Tony is concerned. It's a guy thing to get closer to someone over actions taken together rather than talking about feelings. Buffy is enough his daughter - she has flourished in his home/workshop environment notice - to at least be able to be civil while discussing workshop drawings.

Pepper dong the 'you have to talk about your feelings' is very feminine of her and not likely to work, at least until Tony and Buffy already have a working relationship. Some joint projects, or at least firing off ideas at each other concerning their individual projects is about the best bonding experience they are likely to have for a while.

Yes Buffy doesn't want much to do with Tony right now, and she is not going to be talking honestly about her feelings to him until AFTER she saves his life. I am thinking that the Kevlar riding gear she ordered materials for a few chapters back might be a life saver in this regard, not just in avoiding road rash. Sniper on rooftop 80 metres away shoots Buffy off her bike, Buffy throws a rock and takes his head off, Tony has interesting questions, SHIELD steps in...

The stock buying may or may not give Buffy a serious chunk of SI, but it might easily trigger Stane's anger and get him to hire a sniper to eliminate her. See previous paragraph for details.

QUESTION: What about Buffy making a contribution to keeping Stark Industries going by starting a motorcycle division? She has her own designs, her father to help, it would be a potentially profitable Father/Daughter bonding exercise. The three hundred million to buy shares with is one thing, but she can get more with daddy dearest's permission, and what would be more Stark than starting your own business competing head to head with world class competiton before you are old enough to buy a drink?
Review By [norgco] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Gideon
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Great to see another update so soon. I'm glad Buffy didn't run too far away and Tony was able to find her. I'm also glad the fear of Pepper was enough to goad him into actually talking to her. I think the snarky approach was actually what Buffy needed. She wouldn't cope too well with pity in her present state of mind. I wonder how long it will be before Tony asks Jarvis for some info on Buffy and he actually refuses? Won't Tony be surprised that Buffy has gained the loyalty of his AI? And now that Tony knows Buffy likes her motorbikes he knows what to build the secret "keep daughter safe" model of suit into. He can just build an identical motorbike and insert all the stark tech necessary to protect Buffy if something happens. Won't he be surprised by her reaction when something does?
I did notice a couple of errors in this chapter so I hope you do get someone to read it over, such a great story deserves perfect grammar and no mistakes :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Starfox
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Great Chapter! I loved the interaction, snarky on the surface, hurt under it, and the slow way they seem to be feeling their way to or around each other. And Buffy taking responsibility for 2 million people... priceless. Very good dialogue, and plot.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Serenityrose
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Love the story. I like the interaction between Buffy and Tony can't wait to see where this is headed. I hope to see a new chapter soon. thanks
Review By [Serenityrose] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Duquette
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And yet again you provide ample evidence for why this is one of my top five favorite pieces of fanfiction. I loved the entire chapter, but the part where you had Buffy start buying up SI stock was amazing, I cant wait to see how that butterflies.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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