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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from raxadian
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Better Marvel than OC, and this is an AU anyway, so...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from raxadian
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Well, she is starting to recover.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from raxadian
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Riding a horse? Ah, to socialize her.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from raxadian
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Well, Pepper really cares.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from raxadian
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Well, at this rate Buffy will end getting more martial arts training than almost every street level hero.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from raxadian
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Okay, so Buffy is not a genius, but she is still smart. Or she is just undermining herself?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from raxadian
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So Buffy is smart and can command authority like her grandfather... not bad.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from raxadian
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Ah, so she found something to latch into.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from raxadian
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Well, Pepper just has no clue how to deal with someone who just lost their mother and happens to be a teenager girl.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
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So Buffy is broken, uh? But also can boss around like her grandpa?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
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Well, I wonder how Stark will react to his daughter.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Mkay
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Great story thus far. Can't wait to read more. You should definitely do the Buffy/Steve pairing...there aren't enough of those : )
Review By [Mkay] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from etraytin
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I'm so happy to see that this story updated again! Also glad to hear you are recovering from your accident. I think Buffy and Declan are cute together, they should date . :)
Review By [etraytin] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from twlight
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Oh wow! This is an extremely wonderful story so far. I love how Buffy is learning via Jarvis that is wonderful I love that she is learning how smart she really is. I love that S.H.E.A.L.D. was able to stop WRH from destroying Buffy. I do have to wonder how someone got on the privet beach without getting caught though now that I think about it the being could have been from WRH and not human but then I would have thought that Buffy would have sensed it, but that also depended on how far away they were from her. I do have to wonder how long it will take before Buffy comes clean about her abilities as it will be hard to hide if monsters start coming after her because she is still a slayer even though she is letting Kendra be on the Hellmouth. I do hope that your shoulder gets better soon so that you are no longer in pain and you are able to do normal stuff and then be able to find the time to update this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [23 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Lilkitsu
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Was very happy to see this updated. Hope you're doing well. Loved the new chapter. I'm intrigued by how wolfram and hart are going to play in this. While political, financial, etc. Cat and mouse games are now expected, I like your style, so I don't expect future chapters to be bogged down with meticulous planners planning their long game schemes, detailing who's going to do what and when. (Personally preference, those stories bore me... just sharing) never watched Angel the series before, so I have no idea what could happen with Lilah and her adversary, hoping that the building just plain gets hit with a Jericho to be honest. Evil lawyers? Too cliche for me.
Sorry to rant. Thought this latest chapter was great. Really love how Buffy plans to get back at Pepper. Perhaps she'll have Declan slap Her horse after goading her onto one, eh?
I've put a bit of thought into the idea of Steve. Steve does appreciate strong women that can kick his ass. According to what I saw in the movie anyway. (Of course there's more to it... but I wont get into that.) Though Buffy is still pretty young. She'll be what, twenty by the the time of the Avengers? If that? Something to consider, though Steve would still be in early twenties, mind wise. Its not like he joined at thirty, he was pretty eager. I digress again.
I wonder if Faith will eventually make an appearance. I liked her. But one story can only take so much angst, yeah? Anyway, Brilliant story, great chapter, I'm greatly anticipating Tony's return, and how Buffy actually affects the Iron Man plot.
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [22 May 14] • Not Rated
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