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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from evilredknight
Review:
Enjoying the story.
I'm a little leery of your already considering pairing up what is a 16 year old girl with a canon marvel character. Even if you wait till she's say...21. That still makes even Captain America(the youngest of the Avengers) 10 years or more her senior not even including the 'frozen' period.
Steve Rogers is in his mid twenties then he goes through the process to become the Captain. He then spends 4 years fighting the Nazi's.
Can that age difference work? Sure. But you sure gonna have to show your work to make me believe it.

And I know you wanted the 'drama' at the end of this chapter, but I find it really, really hard to believe that James - both as a friend and a military officer - who believes in the writ *FULL briefing* - did not tell Tony about such a major life changing event happening and waiting for him at home.

Does it make sense why I find this drama a little artificial?
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Gideon
Review:
So we finally meet the mysterious martial arts trainer. She has a good reason to know about Slayer stuff and to want to work with Buffy. I just hope it is true.
And I expected the first meeting with Tony to be bad, but not that bad! I don't think he could have said anything more hurtful if he tried :(
I hope Buffy doesn't just head straight back to Sunnydale at high speed! Or maybe I do hope that?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Callista
Review:
Thank you so much for yet another great chapter. Love the inclusion of the Cavalry, and Tony's reaction was just so 'Tony'. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [Callista] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from LeChasseur
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Well Tony fucked up. Not something new here, the guy is the poster man for fucking things up.
Now, well, it could go both way : Buffy goes away, Tony fells guilty but does nothing, and Pepper tries to smooth things. Or, Buffy and Tony both blows up, have a raw of epic proportions, with lots of destructive liberation of frustration, and Pepper plays the arbiter.

Nonetheless, I really like what I see.
Review By [LeChasseur] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I understand that killing someone who is undergoing physical therapy is frowned upon. ^.~ This was a superb update, with the exception of the horrific cliffhanger at the end. O.O How could you do this to me???

I hope things go well for you. Waiting for more.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Kateydidnt
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How is it that I have never found this story before?! This is EXCELLENT. Poor Buffy.

Ahhh Tony, should have guessed he'd mangle this without even meaning to.

I hope Buffy contacts the Scoobies soon. They're so worried about her.
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Grovtech
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Oh darn! I ripped through all 15 chapters and I loved it. You really hit on the loss and emotional numbness so very well. Cute how you skipped naming the Agent's boss even though we all know who he is. The bit with being trained by 'The Cavalry' had me snorting my soda pop up my nose!

I'm sure that other references went right by me, but I at least got that one. As for Tony's Foot-in-Mouth moment I can see the look on his face. Just what Buffy is going to do now, I'm clueless, but now Pepper has two temperamental genius to watch out for.

If Buffy isn't careful she's going to be swamped by the tidal wave of 'I'm sorry I wasn't a better friend' cookies from Willow.

Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Nightscream
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Glad to hear your doing better and updating again. Stick with it, your story is fantastic, and I look forward to every new chapter.

Lord Tony is the master at opening his mouth and putting his foot in it. Wonder how you'll have him recover from this mess.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from IronOx
Review:
I don't usually log in from my phone, but am too happy about the new chapter not to say so immediately. First, thank you for continuing this story while recovering, and my best wishes for a speedy and complete recovery. Tony is being as charming and thoughtful as ever in his personal life, suspect there will be a certain amount of irresistable force running into immovable object. I am sure he is going to be enjoying the taste of shoe leather soon, just not sure whose, and how literally.

This story has so many complex interacting aspects, thank you again for continuing it.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from thewrongalice
Review:
Always glad to read a new chapter - thanks for updating! But please, please tell me Tony gets a chance to redeem himself / explain himself next chapter. Because I really like Tony but right now I'd kinda like to kick him... :-)
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Starfox
Review:
Aw... Tony messes up right away. Good chapter, though. Love the training instructor.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from raxadian
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This is my favorite fanfic about smart Buffy ever. And yes, Tony is still a jerk.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from ellf
Review:
Well... That's a rough start for Tony and Buffy, but I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends up panning out. Especially with Tony producing the Iron Man suit upcoming...

I actually see Father and Daughter bonding over their names for the bots.

Feel better, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [ellf] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from locard
Review:
I am so happy you have finally added another chapter to one of my favorite stories.
Review By [locard] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
Yeah!! You are Baack!

I was looking forward to her 1st martial arts lesson, but you faked me out.
Now I'm wondering if the story about Melanie Rong's "ancestor" (more likely a great or g'g aunt) being the Slayer that Spike killed was true, or was it something SHIELD dreamed up to help her make Buffy accept her.....

Wondering when or if Tony will ask Pepper or SHEILD for details on Joyce's "passing", and if so, what info he will receive.
And assuming the info is vaguely accurate, or even merely disturbing, will he ask Buffy for her side of the story?
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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