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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ShalaDakiri
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Personally, I like the pacing of the story. Granted, I like character-driven stories, especially when it clearly shows both growth and resistance to change, which I think you do very well.

For the people irritated that Buffy is still dwelling on the events at the beginning... It's only been a month since Joyce died. It took three months for her to heal enough between seasons 2 and 3 to return to Sunnydale and there she hadn't watched her home explode with her mother inside, hadn't tortured Angelus in retaliation, hadn't had her entire identity ripped away. And in case you didn't notice, the angsting has been dwindling as Buffy finds activities to keep her occupied. At least here, she has someone trying to help her cope.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
Review:
I see some reviewers don't appreciate any realism in the story. I found reading their ridiculous comments almost as much fun as reading the story (but not quite).
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Arselbengt
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The story started out fine but the angst is getting old.
Review By [Arselbengt] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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I'm glad she's found a reason to really smile.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from burmafrdnow
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her continually going over it again and again is boring. And frankly not in charactor for her.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
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I don't know if Buffy has really accepted much of anything in her new life but she sure has tried really hard to reject everything from her old life :( And she still gets saddled with responsibilities she doesn't want. Millions of people who will be relying on her. She seems to like the bike though!
As for the other subplots - Lilah smiling is a bit worrying. Was it SHIELD that wiped Buffy's record? I'm not sure even Fury could have got at Wolfram and Hart's records. And Willow will get a surprise if she keeps trying to Hack into Jarvis :) That might get Fury's attention on her and it will draw some response from Jarvis, maybe not much until Tony returns though.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
So she is finally starting to put it together, her life and name.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from brokenmimir
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Fantastic! I'd been waiting for that chapter for a while -- Buffy finally putting her motorcycle, and thus herself, back into working order. She's never going to be the same, but she's no longer completely shattered. Great chapter all around, can't wait for more!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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A quick correction first: Wolfram and Heart should be Wolfram and Hart.

As for looking up Slayer history to figure out where you might be going with this, no thanks! ^.^ I like the anticipation of waiting. Except for the whole 'waiting for Tony and Buffy to meet' thing. That one I don't like waiting for. Err... anyway. It was a great update and I'm glad you made her realize that a motorcycle wasn't as easy to ride as it looks. Just because you can build it doesn't mean you can work it right away. Thanks so much for the fabulous update! I wonder, the smile that stayed, does it make Pepper not ream her for taking the Indian out? Waiting for more. Glad to see we're that much closer to Tony coming home, too.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from thewrongalice
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This is great, thanks for updating! But can Tony be far away? So good.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from kiwi
Review:
nice chapter! :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AllenPitt
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Lilah smiling. I'd think the most evil thing she could do would be to use that scroll to bring Angel back... as a human, get the old romance going again, then have him re-vamped... just a thought! .
Nice job on the Buffy file-wipe. Have I missed a chapter where that was explained? I would think Jarvis, maybe....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Elissiaro
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This is a seriously awesome story and I wish there was more of it to read. Even though it's like 2am right now and I really should be sleeping...

Recc'd and tracked.
Review By [Elissiaro] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
"Let's face it; this isn't the worst thing you've caught me doing."
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from dwnstr
Review:
can't wait to see what Buffy makes Pepper do
Review By [dwnstr] • Date [28 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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