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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from QueenOfFantasy
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Oh i hope your mum's okay and hope you're not over working yourself!!!
I loved how you added Obadiah and Tony- oh Tony at the end was so sweet and sad- in a good way!! I'm just bouncing in my seat imagining Buffy and Tony meeting!! I've never watched the Angel series, so I'm bound to get confused with the wolfram and hart thingy- can you- if it's ok- give me a summary about them and their agenda?
Take care!
Grace
Review By [QueenOfFantasy] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
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Consider this chapter LOVED!

I hope your mother's doing better after her surgery, and that the next week will be considerably less crappy for you! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from brokenmimir
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I'm really happy to see an update -- I love your works, and this one is shaping up to be fantastic. But while I did enjoy it, this chapter felt like it was spinning its wheels a bit -- we saw some of the other players, but Buffy's story didn't really advance much. Still, looking forward to next time.
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from QueenOfFantasy
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WOW! i just went to re-read and the story's updated!!! I LOVE YOU- I'VE BEEN WAITING DAYS FOR SOMEONE- ANYONE TO UPDATE!! Okay i'm going to read it now and review after i've finished reading.
Review By [QueenOfFantasy] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from ranlynn
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Heh, Obadiah and a bunch of other folks are in for a big surprise when they finaly meet Buffy. She's a lot of things but "brain dead" ain't one of them.
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AllenPitt
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Keep doing chapters. The thought of a Slayer with a set of Iron (wo)Man armor. Yeesh. Maybe even on the Avengers ? Got to wonder if Thor knows about slayers.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from kiwi
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ha! I totally agree about that Justin Bieber comment. Cruel and unusual punishment indeed!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from QueenOfFantasy
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I'm absolutely loving this story. Although I admit I am desperate for the inclusion of Tony to happen ASAP, i understand you need to develop it a bit before we dive into the father/daughter situation. The whole reason I signed up to TTH was just so I could review your story and recommend it-and track it :). Standing on an 8/10 but I'm pretty confident that it will lift in future chapters ;).
Review By [QueenOfFantasy] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SpacedCadet
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It started rather slow...but I'm finding it engrossing!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)BuffyCharmed
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Just dropping by to let ya know I finally made a little something for the story over at My Story Art. Hope you like! :)

-Katie
Review By [(Current Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mayrose
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Still loving this story! I am really enjoying the relationship between Buffy and JARVIS. I think you've captured his voice perfectly.

I wonder what Obadiah thinks of Buffy, and vice versa (if he knows about her that is). And Happy too. What his thoughts on her are.

I would like to see her struggle a bit more with the bike though. The fact that her scores are so high coupled with that she reminds Pepper so much of Tony is just a very a big leap for her character. She would feel more Buffy to me if she couldn't follow some of the stuff JARVIS was explaining to her.

I think it's awesome that Fury and Coulson have been watching her for some time. I wonder what those plans are for Howard Stark's granddaughter?

Oooh, a fight between Buffy and Natasha would be awesome. But that would probably be waaay down the line of this story.

Can't wait for Tony to meet her. I'm especially looking forward to the scene where Tony has just come back and Pepper has to tell him that his daughter, that he's never even spoken to, is living in his house.

I wonder what Buffy's reaction is going to be to the fact that Tony basically has a lightbulb in his chest XD
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SilverAndSage
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Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait to read more!
Review By [SilverAndSage] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)BuffyCharmed
Review:
Great update! I loved the bit about Buffy blaring music like Tony, made me smile. I like how you're handling her grief as well; it's a tricky thing, and of course different people react in different ways. Buffy's reaction rings true to her character, all things considered.

Kudos and keep up the amazing work. I'm always checking for a new chapter, I can't get enough of it.

-Katie
Review By [(Current Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
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So--it's been maybe 2 or 3 weeks and Buffy is still upset over this whole "Joyce" thing? . Thanks for the timeline, it puts it in perspective.
I can picture this going in all sorts of weird ways. "Iron Girl" ?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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