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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from HMaxMarius
Review:
And this is why one should always ignore those who say you were too dark and too introspective for too long...

Buffy's smile on the Indian... is the type that brings tears to the reader's eyes...

BECAUSE of all the work you did to set it up.

While I'm not saying you should, you could end this story right here. (Please only do this if you're following with a sequel.)


ps... I am breaking a personal rule and recommending an unfinished story!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Sinangeled
Review:
I really enjoyed the chapter and am excited to see where this story ends up going. I can't wait to read a tony/buffy reunion, but am also enjoying the exposition.
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from kittenpoker
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Love it. As always! Thanks for another wonderful chapter. You do a wonderful job of blending the worlds together into one, and its always an adventure to read more. I absolutely loved Buffy on the bike, and I can't wait for her to drive back up and have Pepper waiting on her!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Kalliza
Review:
I just have to say, this is my absolute favorite Iron Man/Buffy crossover fic. I'm really looking forward to finding out how Buffy and post-imprisonment Tony get along. I imagine this Buffy would have absolutely despised pre-imprisonment Tony, but with the growing up Tony was forced to experience during his captivity, I think they'll find they have more in common than either of them could have imagined.

I actually recently re-watched the Iron Man movies, and can completely see them bonding over snark and mechanics and mutual silence about all the stuff that's recently hurt them so badly. With Tony shutting down the weapons manufacturing of Stark Industries, I see Buffy liking him better, or at least respecting him a little more.

I'm also very much looking forward to seeing what Tony does with her suit after he finds out she's a Slayer, because a) I can't imagine he won't find out at some point--though he might just assume she's a mutant-- and b) I also can't imagine that he won't build her a suit. Hell, I can completely see him enlisting her to help him build it. However, it'd have to be rather different than his to fully take advantage of and enhance her inherent Slayer abilities.

Can't wait to read more, and thanks for the regular updates! I hope they don't slow down too much because of the holidays, but those are hectic for everyone.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Keshkreature
Review:
Oh, how I would love to recommend your story a second time! I'm glad to see that you aren't writing off the SunnyD crew, and that Buffy and Pepper really do get along well (considering the circumstances). This really makes me miss my motorcycle, although my lack of Slayer skills saw that one totaled. Good luck with all the cookie baking, and hopefully finding time to write, 'cause seeing your updates always makes me merry :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from deathgeonous
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Great update, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RevDorothyL
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Love that Buffy has finally found something to genuinely smile about again, riding her paternal grandfather's motorcycle that she'd restored herself. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from CageFire
Review:
Another awesome chapter, keep up the excellent work. :) Good to see that buffy isn't as drowning in grief as before.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Personally, I like the pacing of the story. Granted, I like character-driven stories, especially when it clearly shows both growth and resistance to change, which I think you do very well.

For the people irritated that Buffy is still dwelling on the events at the beginning... It's only been a month since Joyce died. It took three months for her to heal enough between seasons 2 and 3 to return to Sunnydale and there she hadn't watched her home explode with her mother inside, hadn't tortured Angelus in retaliation, hadn't had her entire identity ripped away. And in case you didn't notice, the angsting has been dwindling as Buffy finds activities to keep her occupied. At least here, she has someone trying to help her cope.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
Review:
I see some reviewers don't appreciate any realism in the story. I found reading their ridiculous comments almost as much fun as reading the story (but not quite).
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Arselbengt
Review:
The story started out fine but the angst is getting old.
Review By [Arselbengt] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I'm glad she's found a reason to really smile.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from burmafrdnow
Review:
her continually going over it again and again is boring. And frankly not in charactor for her.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
Review:
I don't know if Buffy has really accepted much of anything in her new life but she sure has tried really hard to reject everything from her old life :( And she still gets saddled with responsibilities she doesn't want. Millions of people who will be relying on her. She seems to like the bike though!
As for the other subplots - Lilah smiling is a bit worrying. Was it SHIELD that wiped Buffy's record? I'm not sure even Fury could have got at Wolfram and Hart's records. And Willow will get a surprise if she keeps trying to Hack into Jarvis :) That might get Fury's attention on her and it will draw some response from Jarvis, maybe not much until Tony returns though.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
So she is finally starting to put it together, her life and name.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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