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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CadenceCascade
Review:
This looks amazing. Buffy is so Tony's daughter here, much much more comfortable with Jarvis than anyone, even Pepper.
Review By [CadenceCascade] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DawnieWrites
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Wondering how Tony will react to Buffy. It'll be interesting to see.

Also, "computers don't lie"?
One word: Brainiac (DC comics.)
Review By [DawnieWrites] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Well, Buffy gets a look at Tony's workshop (aka playroom), and realizes how boring the big house is with nothing to do.

Great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from chrysanthemum
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Your Jarvis is awesome. And I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story as it comes. I hope you do a scene where Buffy and Ironman face off, whether for fun or not. And maybe they'll fight together? That would be amazing
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Katt
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Nice! I can't wait for more. Loving dark creepy Buffy and can't wait for Tony to come back and the sparks to fly hehe.

Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Goddessa
Review:
Really like this but apparently I am already recommending the max 87 fics. I mean, 87? Who picked that number?

So Buffy is all fuzzy in her grief? Cool and understandable. Hope she learns a little more to hold on to what she has and get used to the jensons house.
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AtotheM
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Hmm... very dark Buffy.

I do love that she is relating so well to Jarvis, probably the best way to illustrate that Tony is her father.
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Destrark
Review:
Good and interesting idea, not sure where your going with it or how far you'll go with it but very good concept, I like the way peppers trying to cope with tony's teenage daughter and how Buffy ends up talking more to JARVIS than any actual people.
Review By [Destrark] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RafMereC
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Looks like JARVIS is slowly pulling Buffy out of her shell.

Any idea in the timeline when Tony was captured and he should be back?

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RafMereC
Review:
Looks like JARVIS is slowly pulling Buffy out of her shell.

Any idea in the timeline when Tony was captured and he should be back?

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from imperailjadefox
Review:
just found this and loving it so far. was wondering if you would have
Buffy eventually go back to Sunnydale to visit Willow & Xander and
maybe bring Giles back into Buffy's life as a mentor for her. It would
be fun to watch an interaction between Tony when he's back and Giles
about what she does and doesn't do. Anyway, can't wait for your next
chapter. Thanks!
Review By [imperailjadefox] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Lilkitsu
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just found it, read it, love it. sad there's only so much to read, but excited knowing there's more in the future. At least i hope there is. I absolutely love how Buffy's mindset is portrayed. The way the scoobies are cut out makes a lot of sense, i can easily see Buffy doing things this way. I'm also atwitter with anticipation over the motorcycle, and what possible tinkering a bored Buffy might do, or be inspired to learn. Its also a very intriguing time to introduce both characters to each other, though i wonder if jenny calender was dead before buffy left? likely not, i dont recall a mentioning of it, tho it would be interesting to see her and tony bond over nonfamilial death. though that isnt needed, since tonys dad died when he was the same age as buffy... but i digress. one of the most interesting stories i've seen in a while, and i haven't been this excited for a potential update since christmas. really hope to see more of this story soon.
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
I don't think it is surprising that Buffy is more comfortable talking to Jarvis than to real people. He is not a person so she doesn't have to worry about what he thinks of her. She doesn't have to worry about his agenda or if he will try to force her to do something that she doesn't want to do.
I wonder where Jarvis's loyalties lie though? If Buffy snuck out at night and told him not to tell, would he? If she told him something in confidence, would he keep her secrets? If so he would be a pretty good therapist and he wouldn't think Buffy was nuts if she told him part of the truth.
I'm glad Buffy is taking an interest in the house too, it shows she is not completely disengaged from the world, even if she wishes she was. I hope she is able to get back in contact with Xander and Willow, not right away, but soon.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from shazamfan
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Another rich chapter. I too want to know the story behind the bike. Hope that Buffy and Pepper will bond on something and have to say I can sooooooooo picture Happy's face after a driving lesson. Wonder if one of Tony's bimbos might pop up at the house and Buffy not be too pleased with that meeting.

Hoping for a call back to SunnyD from Buffy to Willow as this story builds.

-j-
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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