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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from ShalaDakiri
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I have to admit, I like how you're handling Buffy. She's not ok and she knows she's not ok. Pepper really does have her hands full with trying to resocialize Buffy. I suspect Tony returning will help. Even if they don't connect as family right away, it'll still be one more person for her to interact with regularly.

I do find it kind of interesting the things Buffy latched onto, the motorcycle and the surf shop, were things that Tony had more or less abandoned.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RevDorothyL
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I'm loving this, and particularly the fact that Pepper is able to see through Buffy's 'mask of okay-ness' (a mask that even Giles and her friends and her mom were apparently able to accept as reality most of the time) because Pepper knows Tony and his own masking capability better than anyone else on earth. I'm also glad that Tony's not willing to leave Buffy to deal with the treachery in his company, even though he's operating under the perfectly understandable but mistaken assumption that Buffy has Joyce to help her make it through what's to come.

About the instructors, I'm just worried that Buffy's reaction will be painful (to her), when confronted with instructors whom she'd love to learn from, but whom she daren't trust with the secret of her Slayer physical abilities. Either she'll crack, or she'll close up more, but either way I worry that she'll suffer more, reminded of what she's lost in her separating from Giles and lost to Slaying in general. Of course, that may give Pepper the opening she's looking for to really connect, but until Pepper's somehow let in on the secret of Buffy's Calling, I don't see any way for a real connection or real understanding to progress. And I can't help thinking that the ice skating will be particularly trigger-worthy, since the last time we know that Buffy went skating was with Angel, just before they were attacked by the first Order of Terraka assassin.

All of this makes me wonder if somehow Fury needs to take a hand, since he seems to be the only one who's (sort of) in Tony's world and knows about Buffy's Calling.

But whatever you do, and wherever this goes, I'll continue to be addicted.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from kiwi
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This line sums it up:

“So don't. Maybe faking it is what she needs. Maybe pretending to be ok will remind her what being ok is like.”

Can't wait for more of this well-written piece. :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Hecatonchires
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I think I'd like her to shame a couple of the instructors, and then have one recommend their grandfather/uncle who is persnickety, but a great teacher
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Lilkitsu
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really good so far, had a much longer review planned, but my phone hates the spellchecker, so it was deleted. i was wondering how tony was doing, if he thinks about buffy while in the cave, and how when he sees her again and hears what happened, how much of a bungling overprotective fellow he might be. ( i would imagine iron mans new cover story being a bodyguard to buffy, and tony actually sticking with that story for his daughter, though buffy would prolly be annoyed.) also, buffy seems to be a genius to me, from how you described it, she just needs something physical to focus on while her brain processes other information and she'd be done with schooling just as fast as Tony was. not sure how martial arts tutors could help buffy, i guess its just for the social interaction. well, looking forward to more!
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Willimer
Review:
Loving this story so far
I think you've captured Buffy perfectly
Looking forward to what happens next
Keep up the great updates
Review By [Willimer] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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Very interesting. Tony is going to flip over the 'mess' when he gets back. And Buffy learning to ride should prove entertaining.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from JimmX
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Bit dark, obviously, but very interesting.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from sarbear
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Wow! I can't believe I didn't see this story earlier. It's amazing just like all of your other stories of course and I am currently working on a pic as we speak ;)
Review By [sarbear] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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More, please. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from deusexsububi
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Not gonna lie, I'm generally not big on solo Buffy fics, emo or otherwise but this is really good. Keep it up!
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from wraithrune
Review:
This whole story, is a great piece of work :) I love it. Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RafMereC
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Was the therapist a watcher?

I couldn't tell from the reaction.

She had to be someone who's heard the slayer spiel before.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic. Love it.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RevDorothyL
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Pepper may've hit on a winning tack by deciding to 'do a Tony' on Buffy . . . even if her idea of getting Buffy martial arts tutors is possibly/probably doomed to fail (anybody good enough to really teach Buffy something new and useful to her as the Slayer would surely be hard to get and difficult to persuade to sign a full nondisclosure agreement, surely? Even if Buffy agrees to be tutored by anyone without being reminded too much of Giles and everything she's lost?).

I continue to hope for the best for Buffy as well as for Tony and Pepper, and look forward to your next update, whenever.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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