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Review of chapter "2" from PATM
Review:
Does this rock? Yes it rocks!
Comments from author:
Lol, glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Okay Dracula down, very good handling of the brides!
I wonder if Traverse is raising his profile enough to get notice even from the rest of the council over this last little bit.
If not after what the President did last time the council may be raising their profile enough to attract the attention of the world governments in a bad way.
At this rate Xander, Faith and Tara may not have to do anything about the council they may kill themselves.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
I hated the Dracula they created in canon, devoid of any menace or gravitas.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from moringstar
Review:
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I always did like James Woods' performance as a vampire hunter.

That movie's variant vampires were honestly scary, deadly monstrosities which make the sparklies look like punks in comparison..
Comments from author:
In general I prefer the Blade\Vampires\Supernatural mythos which treats vampires as the beasts they are to the BtVS\Anne Rice\Twilight genre that treats them as somehow alluring.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from CageFire
Review:
Good new chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good chapters, thanks!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from demonichellfire
Review:
Any plans involving Season 7 of Buffy or Season 5 of Angel
Comments from author:
The Mass Calling occurs.

Thanks for your review.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Difdi
Review:
I like the story so far, but this chapter is just...bad in places.

> Both officers screamed, blood vomiting from their mouths, as they plummeted to the ground.

While visually dramatic, this is not physically possible. The spewing blood thing is due to the destruction of the lungs and the ensuing massive hemorrhage. Every vocal sound a human can make is the result of the lungs moving air. No lungs, no scream.

> “And afterwards missy is facing some hard time for her part in this, that’s for damn sure.”

There's a lovely attitude. Convicting the victim of a murder attempt for conspiracy to commit murder. By that standard, every cop killed in the line of duty must be a dirty cop, too. For that matter, the line in the earlier chapter about nobody innocent would walk into a gang hangout...cops would walk in, therefore cops are bad guys. So much logic failure in this department. I'm amazed they can manage to fill out paperwork.

> pointing his shotgun at the control panel and firing.

And the bad ideas keep on rolling. A switch works because it has electricity flowing through it. Destroy the switch and the flow stops. Even with purely computerized switches, electrical systems have these things called fuses and circuit breakers, and blowing up a control panel causes those fuses/breakers to trigger, resulting in the lights going off.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Change Of Direction" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Well, Interesting...It will at least slow the Tarakan's down while they rebuild.
I don't know if the Syndicate will actually stop or try harder...later.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Even if you kill off a group as large as the Order, there's bound to be cells etc., left alive.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Change Of Direction" from CageFire
Review:
Another good chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Change Of Direction" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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