Wow, very cool. Good cross with DD and Witchblade, nicely done. Sara is a much better leader for the New York branch of the Brotherhood than Frank Castle would have been, he might (maybe possibly) be a good member. But he is too much a loner to be a good leader.
Great chapter, thanks!
Comments from author:
Castle's too much of a loner to join.
Thanks.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from Duchess
Review:
Aw CRAP, that's not fair!
Please tell me Faith will get past this one day? Preferably before she has to face them again?
And what is up with Xander? He KNOWS Master vamps as old as Kakistos leave their bones behind, so why did he not realize their absence meant Kakistos wasn't dead? *curious*
I'm really loving this series.
Comments from author:
I think the All-Seeing Eye really screwed them up there.
Review By [Duchess] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taking A Chance" from RngrThorne
Review:
While I find myself wishing these were all chapters of one story I am still interested in where this is going.
And guessing Victor has the hots for Faith? But then, who doesn't?
Comments from author:
Who doesn't indeed?
There's a word limit to how long stories are allowed to be, and this story would exceed them by at least eight times, hence my hands are tied, it has to be each a seperate story.
Review By [RngrThorne] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Yet more great installments. I don't think I recognize the guy who's after faith now. When I find out I'll probably be facepalming like it should have been obvious, but for right now I can't guess. I'm guessing a marvel villian. The only ones I can think of would maybe be magneto or dr doom, but I don't know if either of those has a remote viewing device. Maybe doom, as I understand his technology is rather close to magic.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Ah yet another being after them, this one wants Faith. Interesting cross with the X-Men.
Great chapter thanks!
Comments from author:
Faith's stalker is so out of the gang's league...
Review By [tchizek] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Old Friends, Good Times" from tchizek
Review:
Great mix of happy and fight scenes! I loved the presents scene! That was so perfect. The fight with the ninja demons was very nicely done as well. Xander needs to reassure his cell commanders more, I like how you have Gunn worried that Xander will drop him. It would be good if Xander picked up on that (not now but in the near future) and did something to reassure his brotherhood commanders.
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
I had to rack my brains for the presents. What do you give billionaires for xmas presents?
Thanks for the review.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Old Friends, Good Times" from DrDamage
Review:
good fic, man
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Over Protective Parenting" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story... they found some new friends and allies ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from ianquest
Review:
Good story, & a great way to resurrect a powerful enemy.
I would like to point out that the spelling is 'Kakistos', confirmed both by canon books & pronunciations in the episode where he appears. In your story, his name was spelled at least three different ways, none of them canon! I'm not sure where the common misspelling of 'Kaktosis' comes from, but it always makes me think of halitosis - which I'm sure is an issue for someone who's been drinking blood for a few thousand years... :)
Looking forward to seeing more of this series.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from Oakheart
Review:
That's the problem with self-cleaning vampire kills - they are an exception (usually) to the 'no body, not dead' rule! And when you see what you expect to see, well...
Good group, good action, good interaction. Well Done.
SD
Comments from author:
I think the key is not 'expect to see' but 'hope to see'.
Thanks.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from CageFire
Review:
More great installments to a great series. I'm really looking forward to reading this until the end. Although with all the things going on, I'm thinking that it'll be a long time.
That's one of two things somewhat bad with mass crossovers. The first I told to another author the other day, is that there's a high probability there going to be one or more series that the reader isn't fluently familiar with. In this instance many of the action/horror movie crossovers for me. I just don't watch horror films, because I hate films where almost all the characters are brutally killed off before the end. I tend to get attached to characters after a while, and I hate seeing them get killed. Heck, I dislike any innocent being killed. Oh well, at least in the few sci-fi/horror movies I've seen, the a-hole who is responsible for the whole thing eventually gets killed by his own creation/actions. Action movies are good, I just haven't seen all of them. Oh well, that's pretty unavoidable, it's not like you can run every series past your readers before adding it, that'd be ridiculous and it would probably ruin the story for the author. And if it's really a problem, that's what wikipedia is for.
The second is that unless the writer has a lot of free time and has a plan for the whole thing, it takes a really long time to write the whole thing. And sadly some authors lose inspiration or time and never finish. Although you seem to be updating regularly so I'm not so afraid of that with this fic.
Sorry, just some general observations of the uhm would genre be the right word? At any rate, keep up the excellent work. :) I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, there's 90 + stories to this plot arc, and it's all planned out to the end (somewhere in 2014)...
Yes, if you don't recognise a character try wikipedia or imdb, that should fill in the holes.
Thanks for your comments!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demons of the Past" from djhardim
Review:
Good
"Hold on," she grabbed hold of Xander and pulled back him back down onto the bed. "We don’t have to get up right now," she winked. "Do we?"
Xander grinned before stroke her hair off her shoulder and kissing her there. "I guess we can spare half an hour."
I wonder how much difference that half an hour would have made.
Comments from author:
Noticed a flaw in the quote, thanks.
And you're right, they might have been ahead of Trick if they'd jumped in half an hour earlier.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated