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Review of chapter "33. 2" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapters, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked them, thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "33. 2" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "33. 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Okay wow, very exciting and stress filled chapters.
I had to switch stories several times you had me so stressed.

But it was great, so good I couldn't keep but going back to see what happened next!

Thanks for a great story!
Comments from author:
Lol, Faith got herself in some trouble there didn't she? And the next story, well they're going to wish it was just Obie....

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "33. 2" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I'm unclear if he wanted Casey as a girl to torture and kill, or as bait for Faith. I thought his type was dark hair, casey's blondeness implying Faith was the real target, but she was outside the age range (12-16?) and fully physically developed.

Also, can I ask that when you give credit for some characters, you mention the media - book/comic/game/tv/movie/etc. I remember con air was a movie, but renegades could be anything I kinda want to know more about Reno :)
Comments from author:
Obie is a greedy bastard, he wanted them both. :D Casey because she's the right age for him, and Faith because in my verse, not only is killing a Slayer major status points for a vampire, a Slayer also has the best blood, taste wise.

I hope that clears that up.

Reno Raines was a character played by Lorenzo Lamas in a TV show called Renegade.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "33. 2" from OlBear
Review:
Once again I must congratulate you on your wonderful story. I can only hope that while Xander, Faith and Tara roam around the world destroying demons and forming the Brotherhood you don't forget to show what's happening in Sunnydale.
Comments from author:
Really glad you're enjoying it, however Sunnydale, apart from the occasional Giles cameo, won't be involved. Just not that interested
in Buffy.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "31" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mithras Chronicles Chapter 1" from WolfWriter
Review:
Doom is in for a disappointment....Faith isn't about to dump Xander for a two bit jerk like him.

I don't care if he is the ruler of a nation; he got it by usurpation. That means his rule isn't legitimate; even though his people adore him (and fear him even more.)

If he threatens Xander, all bets are off, and she will kick his armored behind from here to eternity.

C'n we watch?
Comments from author:
I think you're vastly under-estimating old Vic as his friends of which I am one, call him. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "31" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "31" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Yup, I thought the amulet was the trap.
Good chase scene.
Great fight scenes.
Great interaction between X/F.
Great traps.

Great chapters!
Comments from author:
The amulet is a trap, just not this story's. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mithras Chronicles Chapter 1" from Kaosreign
Review:
Any chance you can do something with the mercs from Expendables and the A-Team (the modern ones)?
Comments from author:
Someone from the Expendables does turn up.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "27. Contracted" from TheLandYacht
Review:
Here's a thought for you regarding the Always Pocket.
Your story canon seems to indicate he can place anything he can physically lift into the pocket. ANYTHING at all? What's the "environment" inside the pocket? Air, time dilation, etc? It would be cool if it were like a stasis chamber (time stops for anything placed inside). I get the feeling that's the way it is, as I just read one of your stories where you mention him pulling a stick of dynamite from the Pocket, already lit...only way that happens is if he lit it before putting it in...and it froze that way.

What about...people? A handy way to sneak a huge number of people into a skirmish, one person sneaks into place then magically brings out a whole ass-load of helpers?

Or...bodies? An easy way to get rid of evidence when its needed.
Comments from author:
Interesting comments, thanks for that.

The rule is you have to be able to lift it in one hand, so no people. Actually nothing alive either, the Always Pocket cannot support life, so no using it to slip Faith's pets past quarantine, lol. If Xander puts a gun in the Always Pocket loaded, that's its state when it comes out, the same with lit dynamite, or a full wallet etc. EDIT: You would however be able to fit corpses in it as long as you eh, chopped them up first.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [TheLandYacht] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapters!
Now I can't decide if the Tarakans are being smart and proactive by attacking Xander and Faith first or stupid by sending their agents piecemeal...
Either way it's going to cause Xander and Faith problems!
Comments from author:
Smart and proactive I think's the answer.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Defence" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Arrogant idiots.
They really have lost track of what they are fighting and what they are fighting for.
Great chapter.
Comments from author:
Yep, they certainly have.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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