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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from FireWolfe
Review:
Normally I am not a fan of Xander centered fics. This one however works and I actually like the character of Xander in the fic. Well done. I do hope you consider a sequel it has a lot of potential as a series. It might make a good avenger cross as well maybe bringing in family for one of the other slayers or even a minor character. I would love to see GI Joe and SHIELD go at it over the slayers. It be a fun fight to watch. Anyway good fic.
Comments from author:
Thank you...
If anything I MIGHT do some one shots, but I'm not sure about a full on fic.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from clei
Review:
Ah, Cobra. A world leader in Stupid Evil for thirty consecutive years... so incompetent at leadership that they had to build robot and synthoid troops, because the human ones aim ten feet to one side and surrender as soon as they have a plausible chance. Still hung up on the 'one strike, you're dead' motivational program, I see.>
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Are the Joes any better?

Hell no.

Pretty much the only reason they win is that Cobra couldn't be allowed to for plot reasons....

Go back and watch the original TV series from the 80's and you'll see what I mean. (Actually the live action movie is just as bad.)
Comments from author:
Nothing better than a villian who is designed to lose, though IF, and that is a BIG IF, I write a sequel I think the Commander might be slightly better than he'd been portrayed.
Review By [clei] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Eureka
Review:
What the frack???
This is Xander's story, you can't kill the main character! Plus Wills has enough witchy power that she can heal him!
Comments from author:
I can't?? Are you sure??
And does she?

~grins evilly~
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Ah, Cobra. A world leader in Stupid Evil for thirty consecutive years... so incompetent at leadership that they had to build robot and synthoid troops, because the human ones aim ten feet to one side and surrender as soon as they have a plausible chance. Still hung up on the 'one strike, you're dead' motivational program, I see.
Comments from author:
I would call this more fumbling the ball in your own endzone type of penalty.
Thank you for the review.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from wereknight
Review:
I think I understand of not doing a joe and cobra fight part hard to tell what weapon they are using since this is base off the cartoon a helpful ideal would be to use Nerf n-strike guns or star wars the old republic guns.

Xander better not die because I got a feeling Hawk might give him,Faith,Williow an offer.
Comments from author:
I spent the better part of a week trying to figure out a plausible fight with the Joes and kept failing.
Still not happy with my slayer fight either but wanted to get this posted.
Review By [wereknight] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from eriktheviking
Review:
Yes, yes you are a stinker.

A rather anti-climatic battle when Willow gets angry and ends it.
Comments from author:
Combat is hard for me to write that is one thing I need assistance with in future stories.
Thank you for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Bad, bad Tanaxanth, you leave us thinking you are killing off Xander!
Oh you evil author you, darn cliffhangers.

Anyway, that's out of the way.
Good fight scene, just a bit light on detail but enough to visualize it. Maybe a bit dramatic with Willows line there at the end, but since it is a GI Joe crossover that actually fits with their dialog.

Thanks for a good chapter!
Comments from author:
Cliffies are fun especially that type.
I freely admit to being evil though, it's so much more fun.
Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from WolfWriter
Review:
Are the guys from COBRA the same kind of inbred idiots that the Wizarding World produces???

They seem to have the same level of stupidity that the Imperial Stormtroopers possess, and that's saying something!!!

I liked the part where one of the twins got a broken finger for his stupidity. I bet that hurt like a bitch.

Uh, is your Cobra Commander a human or the deformed snake guy that was in that last TV movie?

I preferred the human one more than the snake. But if he's a snake demon, then Buffy has the right to kill the dope.
Comments from author:
Serpos is NOT Cobra Commander

And minions have a union to act this way didn't you know?

Thank you for the review.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Ah, things get somewhat clearer. Boy the big-bad doesn't do much research if they thought kidnapping two of Xander's girls was a good idea.
But then they were probably aiming at the Joes rather than Xander...bad idea really bad.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
big bads never seem to do research....

Thanks for the review(s)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written brutality as Xander's reaction.
Comments from author:
Thank you, it took a couple drafts to get it written the way I wanted.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Eureka
Review:
DAAAAAAAAAAANG!!!!!!!!! Xander went apesh!t on that vamp! Don't blame him though. So are the gals going to let the boys have all the fun?
Comments from author:
Oh its coming...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Eureka
Review:
Angel bought the hotel years ago. It was on Angel.

Loving the story, but other half is kinda like WHAT do they have in common? Last cartoon they unmasked Cobra and he had the head of a cobra, they are into the sciencey stuff and Buff has had to fight against sciencey stuff..TEDD for example.. LOL
Comments from author:
Thank you for the info and the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Nuklear
Review:
Okay a few things, one: Does Angel even actually legally own the Hyperion if not then by throwing the Dreadnoks out the slayer could get in some decent legal trouble, two: why would general hawk send alpine or bazooka on a mission like this?
Comments from author:
one: The Dreadnoks aren't exactly bright... and just wait... legality will rear its unwelcome head soon enough

two: Comic Relief and they always seemed to be paired with Flint and Lady Jaye in a few episodes.
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow, mini-slayers kick butt!

Now why would Cobra what the Hyperion...
Comments from author:
Hrmmm I don't know... ;)

Thanks for the review
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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