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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written gentle build-up developing the characters and storyline.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Nuklear
Review:
Okay, liking the story so far; but please, please, please tell me Willow will get in trouble for this I am sick of Buffy stories that have the gov and military doing things that they would never do... like over look a hacker that committed Espionage by breaking into classified files.

If nothing else let cobra find out about her kidnap her torture or brainwash her to the point she won't breath without permission so she can do all their hacking for them.

Yes it freaking bothers me that much that people seem to think that the gov or military would wave off Buffy and her friends, breaking into classified files, threatening personal, taking weapons and property or running around trying to dictate policy to either... sorry dragged other fics problems into my rant
Comments from author:
I understand your hesitation and sadly I can't promise this will have what you are looking for.
In GI Joe Canon, there are examples of people breaking into Joe HQ not being punished (that girl Quick Kick was sweet on).
I recall a story about a man who kidnapped Lady Jaye to attack Cobra and he wasn't punished either.

If you would like to have a deeper conversation please feel free to send me a private review or an email.
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope to not disappoint
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I knew it had to be either a G. I. Joe crossover or Popeye the Sailor. And Xander doesn't have the forearms for it.
Comments from author:
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Questara
Review:
Is it sad that by just reading that last bit from the chapter, I know exactly where in the gI joe timeline this is? Right before the two part episode with springfield and shipwrecks fake family.
Comments from author:
I wouldn't call it sad... just well informed?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Questara] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yeah, so like I don't know who any of these GI Joe characters are, but so far so good with being able to follow along.
Comments from author:
More joes are coming soon
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
mmm, Mainframe vs RedTree that should shake up the hacker community.
Xander's spotted Cobra...this could be interesting.

Great chapters!
Comments from author:
As I was writing this the thought of poor Mainframe kept running through my head.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I am only just following along with the GI Joe stuff, but I think you're doing a good job at showing a little bit at a time and having Xander not exactly sure what a lot of it is either.
Comments from author:
Which is my goal.
Sunnydale syndrome does not only apply to the nightlife.
Thank you for reviewing
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Whitelantern
Review:
Isn't GI Joe Hasbro's?

Sunbow is just the production company behind the show.
Comments from author:
Oops that would be correct.
Thanks it's fixed.
Review By [Whitelantern] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WolfWriter
Review:
Now how did I know that Shipwreck would end up being Xander's dad after reading the title and the crossover listing???

He was my favorite character on that cartoon, which I watched obsessively until it was rudely cancelled after three or so years.

Can't wait to see where this goes!
Comments from author:
Shipwreck just cried out to be used this way.
I hope I don't disappoint.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh this has quite a bit of potential, I am looking forward to the next bit!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Hopefully you enjoy the story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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