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Review of chapter "Ups & Downs" from ThePureOne
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I love this story and the way its going I hope u keep it up
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ups & Downs" from HananeELmokkadem
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Ah-oh. Buffy's in trouble. I hope she'll manage to get out of it without too much difficulty. Then again, I'm not really worried with Rukia-The Memory-Eraser in close distance.
I hope you update soon.
I really love this story.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Storm" from HananeELmokkadem
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Very, very good.
I like it a lot. The lemon was pretty hot too. I kinda thought it was funny Shinji wanted to get rid of the body and man the getaway senkaimon. It really shows how much he cares about Kensei. Anyway, I'm very excited to see what happens next. Buffy and Ichigo in the living world, awesome!!
Update soon please?
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Have Never Seen" from HananeELmokkadem
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What. The actual fuck.
This was seriously unexpected. I knew it had to do something with Kensei but I didn't know he was going to kill her. Awesome!!! Good chapter. Wonder what happens next. Please update soon?

Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Myself Back" from plume
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What timeline are you on? The vizards are not yet hollowfied, yet you mention in the context of the vice-captain, that 'Buffy has to meet Ichigo'. I don't mind strange timelines, but I can't figure out when you are putting the Soul Society at.
Review By [plume] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hide and Seek" from HananeELmokkadem
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Loved this!!
Toshiro Rocks!!!!!!!
Sorry, had to get that out.
I think you chose right when you decided to send Toshiro with Buffy and Grimmjaw.
His little comments were hilarious. Although I have to say that I don't think he would give Buffy permission to call him Toshiro that fast (maybe after a couple of decades) I still like the way you wrote their first (real) meeting. Buffy's powers sound awesome, by the way. I hope she has what it takes to go up against the real First.
It's a shame you won't be able to update until this weekend. I'll be waiting with bated breath until then.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never End" from HananeELmokkadem
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Oh crap! Kensei is in trouble.
Seriously though, Buffy has the right to be a bit angry at him for keeping it from her, especially since she told him everything there was to now about her, but she shouldn't be afraid of him hurting her. She should judge his behaviour on what she's seen in the past, not think about what could happen in the future. I hope she gets over it soon. I loved the chapter though. It was really good. I'm off to read the next one now.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never End" from Nightscream
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And classic Buffy overreaction to not being told something very privet to someone else. But very well written, can't wait to see Kensei get out of this one.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wild" from Nightscream
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Soooo the entity behind "the first" huh? Interesting new villain. Good luck on your new job. I'm starting the search myself.

ACK! You updated as I was leaving a review! must go read! :)
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wild" from HananeELmokkadem
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Bloody hell!!

Buffy's screwed. She better find some kind of hidden power fast, before everyone dies.
Alright, I gotta say, this was one hell of a chapter. I'm very envious of your ability to write 5.000 words in three hours. I'm struggling with writing 200 words in three days. Writers block is kicking my ass!! I've got so many people waiting for updates for my stories and I'm an utter disappointment.

Anyway, on with the review.
Kenpachi's in loovvvveee.
Too bad he had to interrupt at the wrong moment. She and Kensei were just about to get started on the good stuff. I was kinda hoping Buffy would make a stop at the 10th division and give Hitsugaya-Taicho a hand. They can't be together, 'cause that would be way creepy, but they could be friends...or you know, friendly at least. Anyway, too bad you won't have time to update two chapters a day in the near future. I hope your new job works out for you though.
Thanks again for the fast update, and long chapters.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Spotlight" from HananeELmokkadem
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Loved it! Good fight against Sineya. Hisagi was funny and I liked Kensei. I wonder what'll happen next. Really really love this story. You're doing good. Also, love the fast and long updates, can't wait for the next one.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's Go" from HananeELmokkadem
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AWESOME!!!!
This is starting to get very interesting. I'm completely happy with the Buffy/Kensei pairing by the by. Now that you wrote it I can totally see it happen.
The fight between Buffy and Ken-chan left me uneasy. Not because it was a bad fight, or badly written, but because of what happened. Which is a pretty big complement to your writing ability. I keep wondering what'll happen between her and the 11th captain. Yachiru was really scared.
Hope you update soon.
Hanane
P.s It was good to see Ichigo appear, he has been missed.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's Go" from Nightscream
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oh good god....once Kenpachi recovers he'll probably follow her around like a lost puppy! Good chapter and a great and brutal fight scene, loved it. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's Go" from ShadowAlpha
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That. Was. Awsome! What the hell did the PTB do to Buffy? Did the shove a demon into her or something? That fight scene is by far my favorite scene in this entire story!

Also I was wondering, what exactly is your new job?
Review By [ShadowAlpha] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Spotlight" from Nightscream
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Yay new chapter. I really want to know who is behind this and what Espada is being bled for them.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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