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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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The prisoners are so tied and beaten, that thinking straight might be hard.
The guards have already told them that they're miles from anywhere, so running would be useless.
Dawn tried it; dogs were used to track her down and that was when she was in good shape.
What's the point in running. Break into the hut or at least some of them. There are tools there. If only someone could get a gun.

The reference to slayers; plural. Do the guards know that there are many slayers, assuming season seven happened but without Dawn.
Comments from author:
S7 happened much like it did in canon (really did Dawn make much of an impact to the big picture?).

As I always like to say, Resistance is never futile, niethers trying to escape.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from BrownFinderth
Review:
If'n I remember rightly, Dawn has that green energy in her. For even if the women escape, the guards and dogs will be after them. Will Dawn be able to use that energy to take out the dogs and guards, so the escapees have no one after them?
Comments from author:
Generally I usually write it that after The Gift, Dawn is a normal teenager.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Underestimation of the enemy leads to a looot of kicked butts methinks. That's what they get for not reading the evil overlod list, they gonna get sooo screwed... I hope =S.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Eventually.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from PATM
Review:
Too horrifying to comment. Awesome.
Comments from author:
Wow!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Dragonelf
Review:
I think you have done a good job so far with this story.


::Gives the plot bunny a Carrot Muffin::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Comments from author:
Thank-you again, we do our best.

D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
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It's time to start using brain power, and plan to kick some serious arse!. Go Dawn, ya can do it girl!.
Comments from author:
She can indeed.
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from PATM
Review:
This is like die hard I think, Dawn has to go at it like gang busters. Complacency is a weakness she may be able to exploit.
Comments from author:
Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Those prisoners are getting the #$%& beat out of them! Prison break when??
Comments from author:
Soon,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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I had a feeling that Godfrey was something like a fear demon, but feeding off pain and suffering.
I was just a little wide of the mark. Perhaps Machida's cousin.
I expect there have been very few visitors for the prisoners. Surely, someone would have noticed.
Comments from author:
You'd be surprised how easy it is for people to not notice.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
Holly hell, I hope someone can lend Dawn a few miracles, 'cause only a miracle can save her, and her friends now =S.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Gods help those who help themselves.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from PATM
Review:
You sure know how to draw in the dread.
Comments from author:
Yep, I think I ought to put this one down as 'Horror'.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from BrownFinderth
Review:
So, there's a nut job in charge of the prison! Hopefully, a mass prison break can be accomplished!!!
Comments from author:
Oh I think it goes further than a 'nut job'!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six 'B'." from PATM
Review:
South Mariana, huh, I like it. Certainly an AU. Bummed that Buffy died though. It goes to show that changing the routine never ends the way that authority expects it to. Letting Dawn stay in that routine would have turned out better. But then there would be boredom wouldn't there?
Comments from author:
There would indeed.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six 'B'." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
“What we have here is a failure to communicate,”. It's a long time since I saw the movie, but I could picture the captain and the way he said those words. I can't remember much else. Strange!

A problem about escaping, is Dawn lacks the knowledge of the area.
Comments from author:
The 'failure to communicate' is one of the classic lines from the film, I had to keep it in.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six 'B'." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Hmm they put her in the 'Box' because they thought she might try to run away. That would piss me off. Then when she did run they beat the crap out of her friends. Then they beat her again when they caught her ... I would think she'd be looking for some payback. Maybe some help from the rest of the Scooby gang. Can't remember much about the movie, think the last time I saw it was in the seventies. Looking forward to what she'll do next.
Comments from author:
Actually I think I toned it down from the movie.

I've a feeling that Dawn's on her own with this one, of course she's got Ace and Society.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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