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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Serious mistermeaners of the rules; a night in The Box. At least they're not mean, no day in The Box.
Comments from author:
Actually fairly minor misdeeds gets you a night in the box...and you can't work if you stay in the box during the day.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Really like this story. Please keep posting. I think it is such a great idea. Cool Hand Luke is a great movie, and the idea of inserting Dawn into it is wonderful (just hope that Dawn doesn't meet the same sad fate that Luke did in the movie!)
Comments from author:
Thank-you and yes I'll post this through to the bitter end!

I watched Cool Hand Luke on TV donkey's years ago and it sort of stuck in the back of my mind for years and years. It was only about eighteen months ago that I got the DVD and the idea of this story wormed its way into my mind.

It won't end like the film.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Well this story is interesting to me ... an outlaw Dawn. Cool hand Dawn -- will she be eating a butt load of eggs? Ace and Dawn teaming up has possibilities. Dawn might need help with the local bad ass.
I never drop tracking on a story unless I've read at least three chapters. Only dropped tracking once that I can remember ... a BtVS xover with Harry Potter, that was all Draco Malfoy, just not my cup of tea.
This looks like it cold be a good story and I haven't disliked any of yours so far and I've read just about all of them.
Comments from author:
Well thank-you muchly for your vote of confidence, and yes eggs could well feature in an up and coming chapter.

As usual I tried to stay true to the film until I fly off at a wild tangent and then all bets are off!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
Dawn and Ace, guess those two are gonna be quite the team, ohh yes indeed.
Cool set of chapters dude, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, as always.
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from BrownFinderth
Review:
So, Ace and Cool Hand Dawn co-heads of their own gang?!! Is the plan for Dawn to serve out her sentence, or, perhaps, get sprung?
Comments from author:
Dawn will have her little group of friends, but as for the other comment all I'm saying is that there'll be a 'sort of' happy ending.

I don't think that gives too much away!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from shazamfan
Review:
A nice surprise hit for me. As a fan of Cool Hand Luke it fills me with giddy pride to see that tale adapted to using characters from another 'universe' so to speak. Dawn's past crimes are a hoot to read, but got to say the reason for her arrest is a riot and a half.

Really looking forward to seeing how this story flows, where Dawn ends up at in the end and if this arrest might toss up a red flag for Willow to pin point the Slayer's kid sister or not.

-J-
Comments from author:
Cheers,

D.
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Nah, don't delete it - I want to see how it ends.
Comments from author:
I am so conflicted about this story...however at least now I've got a bit more reaction so we'll see how it goes for another couple of chapters.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
"Hmmm, don't seem to have caught many people with this one!"

Might be the crossover. I happen to like Cool Hand Luke, though, so I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Kinda hoping Dawn gets a better ending, though.
Comments from author:
You're probably right...

To be honest I've had my doubts about posting this story for some time. I wrote this over a year ago and its been sitting in my computer ever since. Its one of those stories that 'seemed like a good idea at the time'.

I'm not sure that TTH is quite the right place to post this and I'm seriously considering deleting it, making some alterations to it and using it else where.

And yes Dawn gets a much better ending.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Mcspender
Review:
At least some of Spike's street smarts helped Dawn with her time in skid row.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Sure did!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Wow, just left Spike, Willow, Tara etc? Ouch I was going to say it's strange Willow didn't track her down, but maybe W. went off the deep end shortly after? Even if everything happened as in the season minus Dawn, Willow went to England & maybe didn't come back? Without Dawn there, Buffy might not have snapped out of it.
Comments from author:
Very much so, actually I'm surprised that in canon Dawn didn't react worse than she did to all the things happening around her.

As this story is seen very much from Dawn's POV we/she don't find out much of what happened after she left SunnyD although she does discover some stuff later.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alynambered
Review:
Intriguing, but more interested in seeing how you incorporate demons into the Southern chain gang mystique.
Comments from author:
Well, I hope you stick with it and find out.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Review:
While the "Dawn runs away and gets arrested" is an interesting premise, it's not interesting enough. Sorry, going to drop tracking.
Comments from author:
That's your choice of course, you can't please all the people all the time; but maybe you might give it another go after I've posted a few more chapters...just a thought.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Wow, Dawn is in for a very hard time, indeed.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, don't seem to have caught many people with this one! I'll keep posting of course (the stories written so I might as well), and we'll see how it goes.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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