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Volume IV: Our Sighs and Our Tears

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Review of chapter "I Forgot Who I Was" from azulkan
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Just got done reading all of the parts of this story. Absolutely wonderful. Will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Forgot Who I Was" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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yay!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lamplight" from Lyd
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Really enjoying the ride with this story. I let it build up 10 chapters or so and then glut myself on snarky goodness. Daphne has truly shot herself in the foot on this one. And I hope Lavender is not going to be another Veruca. If Oz truly likes her for her, great but not another case of the wolf and man being pulled in two different directions. I like the direction Kasie's story is going, but I worry that she is going to be betrayed sooner rather than later. I just hope it doesn't break her in the process.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lamplight" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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I always enjoy irritable Snape :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There is no Light Without Dark" from Naitch
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Hmm... I think Mike and his girl are gonna get killed for NOT getting the sias. Then Kasie will be all sorts of messed up. Another great- and Long!- chapter. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There is no Light Without Dark" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slipping In Through the Backdoor" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Ruh-roh! Kasie a bad girl....
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slipping In Through the Backdoor" from Naitch
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I hope Kasie doesn't do something that everyone will regret here. This is such a great story, I eagerly check my email everyday doping to see the next installment.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding Parvati" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Bah. Sorry. I know you tried to explain Mac's possessiveness and went out of your way to say each character is okay with it (Neville, Lavender) but it is still annoying to read.

I miss Draco and Luna. :)

EDIT: Of course - I don't expect anything to be written to please a fanbase or even singular person :) No problem guys. Mac being possessive isn't enough to get me to stop reading. I look forward to more, as always.
Comments from author:
Actually, we write ahead, so what you're reading now was written about a month ago. Sorry you don't like that story arc, but it's already been written and shall play out as we planned. We can't please everyone, but hopefully one of the next chapters might be to your taste.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make New Friends But Keep the Old" from DenSorteEngel
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Well.. what can I say, other than WOW? Amazing story, I really love the way you make the characters come to life, sometimes a little TOO much though, as I really really REALLY wanted to strangle Pevensie and start breaking her legs in Mac-style in the beginning.. I mean she is by far the most annoying teenager I have ever heard about LOL. Great job you have done by describing the people and their interactions with each other, especially Draco and Luna, GODDESS I love Luna in that story, great portrait of her :)

The only "but" in this wonderful tale is the spelling I have to say. You have way to many errors, misspellings and even missing words, it's making the story somewhat confusing to read. Also some of your sentences are too short, especially in the beginning of the story, although they have improved a LOT since then.

All that said and done - GREAT story, I love it, and keep updating :)

(If you need a proofreader, I'm volunteering :) )
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you like the story.

As far as the spelling, there are 4 of us, and if you saw the docs BEFORE they got posted.... we're not going to take on a proofreader. Thanks for the offer, but we're writing the story to tell a tale. We're doing this for fun. We try to correct most things before the make it to post, but things slip by. As for the short, abrupt sentences - that's kind of one of the writer's writing style.
Review By [DenSorteEngel] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make New Friends But Keep the Old" from burmafrdnow
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Good chapter for showing Oz and Willow. Willow's inner conflicts and Oz trying to do the right thing with everyone. which just really never works.

Lavender is as always- open mouth insert foot. But then most of the wizarding world when dealing with those outside of it were that way.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Someone Who isn't Seven" from slmncpm
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i really love their relationship. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Other Women" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Hmm. This was dumb. I hate jealous people and don't get why a girl staying over at Neville's house is an issue. Mac lost lots of points here. And what's up with her getting all angry or some other hot emotion about her bro liking Lyra? sigh.

I like Neville okay but Mac is "eh" to me. I mean, she's a cool character, but her Mac centric chapters are usually less interesting to me.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lassie Comes Home" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Enjoying the past few updates :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Whatever" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Spike made a face. He wasn’t sure he liked Buffy’s new beau. All necromancy aside, he seemed to have all the spark of a wet dish towel.
---I agree with Spike. Theo is unremarkable, necromancy aside. I like Buffy having a love interest and that the Council has a HP-world healer, but I think Theo is sooo boring. Theo's chapters tend to bore me; I only get interested because of the other character(s) in it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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