I always enjoy irritable Snape :)

Hmm... I think Mike and his girl are gonna get killed for NOT getting the sias. Then Kasie will be all sorts of messed up. Another great- and Long!- chapter. Can't wait for more.

Great chapter!

Ruh-roh! Kasie a bad girl....

I hope Kasie doesn't do something that everyone will regret here. This is such a great story, I eagerly check my email everyday doping to see the next installment.

Bah. Sorry. I know you tried to explain Mac's possessiveness and went out of your way to say each character is okay with it (Neville, Lavender) but it is still annoying to read.

I miss Draco and Luna. :)

EDIT: Of course - I don't expect anything to be written to please a fanbase or even singular person :) No problem guys. Mac being possessive isn't enough to get me to stop reading. I look forward to more, as always.

Actually, we write ahead, so what you're reading now was written about a month ago. Sorry you don't like that story arc, but it's already been written and shall play out as we planned. We can't please everyone, but hopefully one of the next chapters might be to your taste.

Well.. what can I say, other than WOW? Amazing story, I really love the way you make the characters come to life, sometimes a little TOO much though, as I really really REALLY wanted to strangle Pevensie and start breaking her legs in Mac-style in the beginning.. I mean she is by far the most annoying teenager I have ever heard about LOL. Great job you have done by describing the people and their interactions with each other, especially Draco and Luna, GODDESS I love Luna in that story, great portrait of her :)

The only "but" in this wonderful tale is the spelling I have to say. You have way to many errors, misspellings and even missing words, it's making the story somewhat confusing to read. Also some of your sentences are too short, especially in the beginning of the story, although they have improved a LOT since then.

All that said and done - GREAT story, I love it, and keep updating :)

(If you need a proofreader, I'm volunteering :) )

Thank you. Glad you like the story.

As far as the spelling, there are 4 of us, and if you saw the docs BEFORE they got posted.... we're not going to take on a proofreader. Thanks for the offer, but we're writing the story to tell a tale. We're doing this for fun. We try to correct most things before the make it to post, but things slip by. As for the short, abrupt sentences - that's kind of one of the writer's writing style.

Good chapter for showing Oz and Willow. Willow's inner conflicts and Oz trying to do the right thing with everyone. which just really never works.

Lavender is as always- open mouth insert foot. But then most of the wizarding world when dealing with those outside of it were that way.

i really love their relationship. *hands you scones*

Hmm. This was dumb. I hate jealous people and don't get why a girl staying over at Neville's house is an issue. Mac lost lots of points here. And what's up with her getting all angry or some other hot emotion about her bro liking Lyra? sigh.

I like Neville okay but Mac is "eh" to me. I mean, she's a cool character, but her Mac centric chapters are usually less interesting to me.

Enjoying the past few updates :)

Spike made a face. He wasn’t sure he liked Buffy’s new beau. All necromancy aside, he seemed to have all the spark of a wet dish towel.
---I agree with Spike. Theo is unremarkable, necromancy aside. I like Buffy having a love interest and that the Council has a HP-world healer, but I think Theo is sooo boring. Theo's chapters tend to bore me; I only get interested because of the other character(s) in it.

Last two chapters were very good
Got details and things with Buffy and company that was important

Yes Buffy was bitchy with Angel and Spike but then they need to realize that she has a lot of responsibility now and that is going to make most people tense

And they finally need to realize that they have to respect HER decisions if she is going to respect theirs

I realy wish Dawn and Connor had come = that would have been perfect

Buffy at thanksgiving was funny- but you made her a little too serious and not manic enough

I suspect the next morning will involve Moody at his most evil producing with his wand while just outside the girls' rooms the musical wake-up call of Reveille in its Scottish form of bagpipes at full blast.

Patil, interesting
Theo and Illyria, interesting as well