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Review of chapter "The Birthday Bug" from FireWolfe
Review:
Wish this would be updated
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mini Chaos Two" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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I keep getting more and more pissed off every time you expand "Ginny" to "Virginia" rather than "Ginevra" but, aside from that, an excellent sequel so far.

(Deviation from canon aside, to me, it feels like a mix of "this author is either too lazy to spend half a minute checking their facts or too arrogant to accept a basic, inarguable detail of the material they're trying to adapt" and "this author is unintentionally poisoning the immersiveness of the story with a subtle Americanism". No insult intended... it's just one of my pet peeves.)

EDIT: Fair enough. I try not to take fanfiction TOO seriously, but getting names right is one thing that has always grated on me, regardless of the medium. (whether it's people assuming Harry Potter is short for Harold Potter or something in professional work where the author/screenwriter/etc. did know but felt it was their perogative to mislead the world to fit their view of what their source material should've been)
Comments from author:
Criticism accepted. Please keep in mind this story was started A) many many moons ago before it was revealed in canon what Ginny's actual name was and B) when I was a much worse writer. I think I have made great strides in writing ability since this. Perhaps one day when I am less busy I will clean it up with a re-write, but life and my muse aren't allowing that. Plus, I'm not all that concerned with it. Maybe I have the wrong attitude about fanfiction in general because it was always something I did for fun. Like a hobby. It's an exercise in creativity, a way to keep my writing skills fresh. I never took it that seriously, and people who do often don't like my work because of this. I'm much more detail-oriented about my own work, and fanfic was always just a stepping stone for me.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Birthday Bug" from FireWolfe
Review:
Wish this would be updated
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Will Be" from Obsidian
Review:
awesome story. Would love to see it continued.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Will Be" from boothfan
Review:
i really like this story but you really really need to finish it soon or at least add another chapter or two...
Review By [boothfan] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Will Be" from bliss
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Oh, please tell me you will be finishing this one of these days. It was fabulous, though a bit more serious than A Drop in the Ocean. I love the fact Connor and Lily joined Harry and the gang. And I adore the relationship between Draco and Ginny and that Dru and Spike are now together again, both with a soul.

Oh yes, if you ever have the opportunity, please finish it.
Review By [bliss] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Birthday Bug" from FireWolfe
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I am guessing this is abandoned?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Birthday Bug" from FireWolfe
Review:
4 years is a long time to wait for an update. Please think about coming back and finishing this work. It is actually a lot more real the RK books and more enjoyable. Who cares if it is a bit AU. form the books and movies.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Will Be" from btvsatsbones
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Wow.. This is one of the best ff I've read..and trust me I've read a lot. I understand that you're probably never going to finish this story, :(, but I still
Review By [btvsatsbones] • Date [6 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boys Will Be" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Bite me, Malfoy."

"Been there. Done that."

Ron cringed. "Oh gross."
*snicker*
-The crazy sisters. Loony and Tunes—nice one

So. The end. Has been reached.

Its been a lovely journey, both with A Drop in the Ocean and this one. You are bloody brilliant, I hope you know. Loved all the plot twists and many pairings; not to mention how amazingly you brought everyone together.

Willow/Snape- so lovely to seee them grow. Dawn/Harry- very cute. Draco/Ginny- effing adorable and I loved watching Draco grow. Lily/Connor- fun, good match actually; Lily in general was a fantastic quasi-OC. Sirius/Tara- I love Sirius pairings and this one was quite good, although I was bummed he left but I could see that being very in character. Tonks/Wes- unexplored fully but nice fun idea. Remus/Anya- ahh, not quite but *so* close; would have loved to see that one pan out. Faith/Oliver- great! Glad Ollie went all around to liking all the girls but chose Faith, she always needs someone.

I’m assuming you are probably never continuing this story, and that is a wee bit disheartening – it is so wonderful – but I get that you have RL and other projects. I am so glad I read this story and I’m hopin’ against hope that a Snake Charming plot bunny will attack you ;)

Thanks sooooo much!
Luna
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Return to Cinder" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Just like Draco, I assumed it was Cissa at first. When it wasn't her I was almost sure it had to be Tonks. Why? Well, because she's a metamorphagas (sp?) and I figured you would throw in someone from the New Generation Order (of the Phoenix) for all the matching fun. Plus, I could totally see Tonks crushing on Wesley :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You Have to Believe We Are Magic" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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“Must I?”

“Poppy…”

“Just as well. He’s in my path.”----OH POPPYYYYYYY, so funny!

Actually, Miss Summers, I think Severus was honestly baffled by your subterfuge.- LOL

SO good. Love this story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hogsmeade" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Dumbledore sighed and hurried after them. He really didn't think he wanted a slayer not known for keeping her fists in check, a man who used to go by the nickname Ripper, and a former Death Eater questioning people who had hurt those they cared for.
---hahahahaha

I LOVE your Anya. Love how she jumped in front of Tara and all the Harry-penis comments. Not to mention, I LOVE your Willow.

Ok, really I just love all your characters, but those 2 just stand out the most.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Love Is Only a Feeling" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"Ah, Miss Rosenberg, Mister Angel, how good of you to investigate this broom closet. Mr. Filch informed me that there were moaning and slurping sounds coming from inside here. I am quite sure it was just Peeves playing a joke, would the two of you agree?"
---*snort*snicker*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Court This Disaster" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"Anya!" Willow snapped. "You know full and well that I only play naughty teacher with Severus."

This, and so many other comments, made this one of the funniest chapters!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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