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Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review.
Comments from author:
Not a problem. Always glad to hear from people. :)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Rune
Review:
Fun

Wicked Fun

Oh and there is a site on the net with a Tara that is a succubus, not a pron site either.

Thanks for the smiles.
Comments from author:
Story or art? Because Lexi's done art of a succubus-like mutant in the form of Tara...
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Cute! And fun to see Emma and Jean finally working some things out. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
There's more to come. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from scottm
Review:
Please keep up the great writing! I'm a little confused, is this just a side story to Blue Belle? In what way does it fit in to that universe?
Comments from author:
This is stuff that's taking place about a month down the pipeline from the current story, clear on the opposite coast. So I felt there wasn't any harm in releasing it early because... well, it's not like Cordelia or Michelle is going to wander into the scene and spoil all the story events that'll take place in that month.
Review By [scottm] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from skychan
Review:
Of course I'm interested in a Tara in the Center chapter.

(it can hardly be Taracentric with THREE cuckoos)

As for this chapter,

I love the idea of Jean faking it. I also like the idea of her wanting out but being a little afraid to take that final step. It's that little voice crying wolf that doesn't want to be responsible for the final decision even though it has already been made. Good for Emma. I was a little confused, just for a moment over who was speaking beginning with the "tenth grade" line. Maybe it would do better in a fresh paragraph for clarity's sake, maybe not.
Comments from author:
Technically, it'd be Tara-centric. She'd be in the middle of the Cuckoos.

When I go through and clean up the chapters for transfer to Blue Belle, I'm probably going to look at alternative ways of expressing a few things. The bit with Faith at the InterContinental, for one.
Review By [skychan] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from CubsKing
Review:
Well, I appreciate all the hard work you're putting into this series and would absolutely love to read the scene(s) with Tara and the Frosts...
Comments from author:
One Tara scene, coming right up...
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Morgomir
Review:
Great ending for this part of your universe. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Don't worry, Emma and Jean will return. :)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pennsylvania Station" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
Fun chapter, I hope to see some more Tara, Faith and Carol interaction because that sounds like a party!

Cheers~!
Comments from author:
Carol's on her way back to Boston but I've got something almost as good coming: Faith, Tara, and the Spider-Clan.
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
There's never enough Tara fun time, let alone triplet Tara fun time! Fun chapter, I love your writing style.

Cheers~!
Comments from author:
So, yeah, I'm guessing people want to see Tara. Got it. LOL.
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Eureka
Review:
So how many of us want that Tara centered chapter? I know I do!
Comments from author:
Enough so far that I'll write it. :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Meneldur
Review:
Oh, I loved this chapter so much. Emma and Jean have been in this weird holding pattern for forever, and even if Emma was so patient and there was lots of contact and banter, I wanted it to happen already, so this is perfect.

The banter between them was so fun, and I feel like the sexual part of it flows better now that they've acknowledged their relationship, though I doubt that really matters. Heh, Ritt der Walkuren... that may yet happen, though I doubt they'll be delivering babies...

Anyway, there's not much I actually have to say about this chapter. It was just perfect - I loved everything Jean and Emma did. The ending was a bit unexpected, but actually not that surprising considering we're talking about the quints. Man, it's times like this when I really respect Emma, who has to run a company, teach, handle six daughters, begin a relationship with Jean, and occasionally pop in to check/help her pet project in Sunnydale... Can't wait to see the inter-dimensional Girls' Night, and how all the Emmas react to their alternate realities.
Comments from author:
Well, to be fair, it's only been a few days over a month since Jean woke up snuggling Emma in Sunnydale. And she's been with Scott for a decade or so. It's - quite rightfully - taken her some time to figure out what to do with herself and her love life.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from CaptMcIntyre
Review:
I only have one thing to say...Tara, Tara, Tara, TARA, TARA, TARA!!!!! lol

But in all seriousness, yes, I would happily read a Tara chapter, so please!
Comments from author:
Consider it done. Well, in a bit.
Review By [CaptMcIntyre] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Raider
Review:
I for one would enjoy a tara centric chapter.

and very nicely done joe!
Comments from author:
Tara power: coming soon to a fic near you.
Review By [Raider] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from chaosmancer
Review:
i'll read it
Comments from author:
Booyah.
Review By [chaosmancer] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XSfGY - Emma Frost's Suite" from Harry
Review:
I have to admit, Jean could do worse than Emma. I mean, Scott seems to live in his own little universe, and anything that threatens that does not go over well. And I think Emma is right about one other thing: Her girls could do worse than Tara. They could be going with Jubilee!
Comments from author:
I dunno, Jubilee's not so bad once you get used to her. It could be worse: they could be into Willow. Or Laura, once they meet her.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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