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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from danielbuffyfan
I am so glad to see that Hotch won. I think he and Buffy will balance each other out. The reaction from the rest of the BAU people should be fun. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Hotch has to be a better choice for her than Spike! Of course, I pretty much would choose anyone on the list over Spike...or Angel...or almost anyone from BtVS/AtS (with the exception of maybe Wes). Normally Giles would be a possibility, but not when he's running away from his duties and somebody he claims to care about.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from Harry
I NEVER would have thought it would be Aaron from Criminal Minds. NEVER! But this should be a interesting little tale, considering the age difference between him and Buffy.
Comments from author:
I think I might have to put something in about the age issue. There's no way that everyone would be so accepting of a relationship between them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from clarityfades
Great update! Dawn as a baby will likely be less annoying than Teen!Dawn, so points for that one. Bad Giles for still planning to leave! & nice cliffie...I'd write more but baby calls. lol
Comments from author:
Doesn't it just make you want to spank Giles. Ooo, that's going off in a direction that would up the rating. *wink*
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
sweet torture. I wanna know who he is. Please don't keep us waiting for very long.
Comments from author:
Nope, just about to post the next chapter today.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from Harry
A BABY Dawn but with a teenagers brain? OH MY! Now, next chapter we have the MAIN EVENT: We find out who the gentleman is. And you had some great candidates to choose from. Now, lets see who it is. And Xander: BE very careful, if it turns out you caused this. You WILL be in the Doghouse for a considerable amount of time!
Comments from author:
Well, in the respect that he summoned Sweet, Xander's to blame. However, the problems aren't finished piling up for the de-aged girl.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from bradsan
Giles is very easy to defend Xander now is he. Why can Xander and Willow always get away with their actions even when their actions bring other people in danger or killed people. The only thing Buffy ever did was sleeping with Angel and she didn't know that it would make Angel lose his soul. Oh and her departing Sunnydale after killing Angel. She went away because she was kicked out by her mom, on the wanted list for murder, felt guilty and emotional broken because of Angelus stalking and killing Angel. One "mistake" and she can't be trusted of make her own decisions. She never did what Willow and Xander did and she always trusted them. I never get that.

So to me, Go Buffy. It's a good thing calling Xander on his actions about time.

Oh I love that Dawn is a baby again and with the mind of a teenager. Dawn will hate it but a plus Buffy smiled again so it can be a good thing to get Buffy quicker back on her feet again. And really she is so cute a baby-face glaring/snapping like a teenager.
Giles is really a jerk isn't he leaving while knowing Buffy didn't spend her time in hell. She needs him even more now than before, stupid man.

Can't wait for the next chapter I'm so curious who it is.
Comments from author:
Surprised at how many people like the younger Dawn. There's a lot of times when I want to redeem Giles for the choice of leaving, but in this story, I think I want to explore the feelings of hating him for it and having it ruin his relationship with Buffy for good.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from VillageOrchid
Very wacky. And the reason I didn't pick Daniel Jackson is because his friends *would* believe that something like this could happen to him, and you had the mystery man thinking it would be so unlikely as to be embarrassing.
Looking forward to seeing how you go!

EDIT: If it does turn out to be Daniel or someone like him who gets into wacky trouble, it could still be in character if *he* believes it. It's just his friends or family that might point out that it totally sounds like something that would happen to him.
Comments from author:
LOL, that's so true of Daniel! I will say that the winner is so not the kind of guy to do this that it made it a little hard to write him with Buffy. I had to make him OOC.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from RevDorothyL
Well, THIS will certainly put a different spin on the conclusions Buffy will be forced to jump to when she wakes up with no memory, but in close proximity to a good-looking guy AND a baby girl! :)
Comments from author:
Yummy conclusions, in my mind.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
WHAT THE FRONT DOOR!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ENDED THERE!!!!!! OMG! You have always been so mean, as Taylor swift would say, why you gotta be so mean. Uhm is it she that sings that song. hmmmm I can't remember. oh back to the subject urrgggh, update soon. lol. Baby Dawn love it, had me laughing my ass off.

What I will do next is entirely your fault mmooch. lol
Comments from author:
No clue on the Taylor Swift thing, but glad you liked the chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from QueenCA
A suit, huh? Guess that rules out a few of the suggestions/votes. And a teaser at the end... nicely played.

Not Giles-friendly? Aw...sad. But I'll deal with it. Nice confrontations between Buffy and co.

Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm guessing Buffy might think she's Dawn's mother now that Willow's spell has struck. And the 'surprise' as the dad, possibly?

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Had to give a tiny hint, didn't I?

A few somebodies pointed out that I always forgive Giles, despite him being worse than Willow/Xander at times, so this is a chance to fully vent my anger at him.

You'll see...*wink*
Review By [QueenCA] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
ahh so when do we find out who the guy is? I hope he had a wallet in his pocket. LOL
Comments from author:
Next chapter and he probably goes to the shower with his wallet. Okay, not that bad, but still...
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from bsams
Fortunately, Xander still has a lot less blood on his hands than Necrophiliac-Buffy.
Edit: If all you're ever going to do is bash Scoobies, maybe you shouldn't write them. I don't bash Buffy, but I will defend the others even if they aren't saints. Buffy is a Hero but not perfect. She summoned Angelus by engaging in necrophilia, and started Willow on the road to Darkness by encouraging her to cast a soul Curse. So, unintentionally, Buffy has a lot of blood on her hands. Still a hero, not perfect. So are the others. So how about a little more respect for the others in your stories and a little less bash.

Have a nice Day!
Comments from author:
We actually don't know that, and if all you're going to do is bash Buffy, I'd prefer you don't review my stories.

EDIT: Hey, I try to leave the others out of my stories, but then all I hear is 'Where's Willow and Xander?' Even when I have them die, it's not enough. But I warn people when a story is bashing, so it's on their heads if they decide to read it anyway.
Review By [bsams] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Haven't Met Her Yet" from VillageOrchid
11th Doctor Mr. Smoochies.
Tony DiNozzo
Comments from author:
Appreciate the vote, but I already have the winner.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Haven't Met Her Yet" from SariLane
methos, hotch, Bruce (from batman begins)
don't forget this one.
Comments from author:
Cool votes. I have the winner in chapter 4...coming in the next week or so.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Haven't Met Her Yet" from DrPepper
1. Steve Rogers (Captain America/Avengers)
2. Tony Stark (Iron Man/Avengers)
3. Methos (Highlander)

As to my reasoning, Steve's first question probably *would* be "Was she the cause or another victim?" Tony would definitely think "...he had the tape and other ‘resources’ he could use to track her down if he decided to take a risk on her." and Methos would fit either, though not as well. If I can't nominate Bruce Banner, who was my first thought, then *definitely* Steve or Tony.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the votes. I'm hoping that life will slow down enough so I can get back to writing on a regular basis and update all my open this one. Between the two sites, there's almost 100 votes stacked up.
Review By [DrPepper] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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