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The Courier (First Edition, parts 1 and 2 only)

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Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from Zealot
Review:
Interesting. Thank you for a great story.
Although I think you should have written the few more chapters necessary to describe the reactions of SGA to her gatejumping ability. It seems unfinished as it is right now.
Comments from author:
If, in fact, there is a sequel, I'm sure that would come up near the beginning of the story.
Review By [Zealot] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from wickedwit
Review:
So sorry to see The Courier end! This was an incredibly creative premise, and was excellently written. There is a lot of sequel room left, so I hope to see these characters back!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if/when there may be any more Courier fics - I'm holding off on a decision for now, letting the dust settle, and then I'm going to read through all the reviews for ideas in a few weeks. For now, I'm working on backstory research for a totally unrelated fic (well, not totally, as it is Key-related) in a crossover I haven't previously written.
Review By [wickedwit] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from Glasbruch
Review:
Awww, please make a sequel! I want to see Rodney explode when her hears that Dawn not even opens the Gate^^
Review By [Glasbruch] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from Banditcat
Review:
A great well written story. It seems to me that the other reviewers have so far missed what could be the most interesting revalation, if true of course. That everyone seems to be obessed with the wrong Dr's questions.

Dawn seems not to be ageing!

If true, it would not be long before people (some or many) begin to notice.
Also Her uncanny ability to learn new languages impossibly fast.

Dawn, with her gate ability could be a great scout for the SGA crew. Nothing gives away surprise faster then an actavating gate. Dawn could sneek onto a world (at night most problably) unoticed and slip back. Could she take someone else this way?

I would LOOOOOOOOOOVE to see a new story with the Courier.

And again I enjoyed this story sooooooooo much.

Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Some good ideas there!
Review By [Banditcat] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from joshlamont
Review:
Thanks for and that was a fantastic story, and I dearly hope you put up a sequel. It was the highlight of my day, getting an update email for the Courier!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if/when there may be any more Courier fics - I'm holding off on a decision for now, letting the dust settle, and then I'm going to read through all the reviews for ideas in a few weeks. For now, I'm working on backstory research for a totally unrelated fic (well, not totally, as it is Key-related) in a crossover I haven't previously written.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from alynambered
Review:
Yes, we know how you like to end chapters.



This was a very interesting, intriguing and entertaining story. I hope you do return to this universe at some point. Gotta see Rodney's reaction to Tong's report.

Found one error at the end of Ch 71:
what Tolarin would have for her to eat for for dinner - lose third 'for'
Comments from author:
Thanks on the error; fixed now. Actually, thanks for all the ones you've pointed out.

I've got a few ideas tumbling around, and if I come up with a plot, there might be a sequel. For now, I'm turning to other projects - I've spent a large chunk of this evening doing research on a universe I haven't written before, for my next story.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from xman
Review:
At the rate this story is going I well be checking your other work, but I hope you go back to faith manages. but I'm enjoying this one very much.
Comments from author:
I very well might; I remember it being popular and fairly close to a conclusion. It might need a little reworking toward the (current) end...

The current project I'm working on, though, is a new story in a fandom I haven't written before.
Review By [xman] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from bucksavage
Review:
You ended it there?!?!?! NO!!!! *laughs*

I can see the humour and the shock value of ending it as you have but still.............

you really do like the evil cliffhangers, don't you?
Comments from author:
*ding ding ding* This is review number one thousand! Shocking, isn't it?

And... I prefer to think of it more as 'riding off into the sunset', and possibly setting the stage for a sequel...
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Departure and Delivery" from bucksavage
Review:
Well....not much to say for this chapter, cause nothing much happened....yet. But Rodney's obsessive nature again is rearing its curious little head.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Casablanca" from bucksavage
Review:
Not bad for a rather short chapter, really sets the tone for what is to come.
Comments from author:
It may *seem* short, but actually, pretty much all the chapters are the same length, give or take a couple hundred words.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from grd
Review:
I would have liked one more chapter with Rodney's reaction to this last chapter. Magic?!
Comments from author:
I decided to leave it up to the readers - at least for now, until and unless there's a sequel.
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from CageFire
Review:
Hehe, great chapter. I really do hope there's something that picks up after this, because I will be somewhat upset if you leave me hanging like this.
Comments from author:
There may be; I haven't decided yet. At the moment, I'm working on prep research for something completely unrelated, but after the dust settles, I plan to datamine the reviews and see if I come up with something useful...
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from FireWolfe
Review:
This needs a sequel leaving it hanging is cruel. I love t his work and have enjoyed the ride. I love to see more. Maybe have the Scoobies actively looking for Dawn and having them bounce around differing realities to do so.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Ending on a cliffhanger after 72 chapters? That's almost like WRAITH-level evil, there -- you know that, right? :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's Not About the Bike" from clei
Review:
Too bad there weren't any SFX like we saw with a certain DeLorean when Dawn and the bike vanished at the gate.....
Comments from author:
Flaming tire tracks?
Review By [clei] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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