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The Courier (First Edition, parts 1 and 2 only)

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Review of chapter "Jewelry" from DofEire
Review:
Very good beginning. Intriguing and not "oh hey, looky, I know what *that* is!" right from the get-go. Have missed your writing here, and I just began re-reading "The Girl with the Tartan Trousers" today, in fact. :) Yay for eternal bookmarks. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Oh, the classics!
Review By [DofEire] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from Runewolf
Review:
Interesting start. I'm very curious.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from Aenea
Review:
Hehe, Lord of the Rings. 38 Symbols to Rule them All, 6 Symbols to find them in the Darkness, and One Symbol to Bind Them. I likes, this IS a fun read.
Review By [Aenea] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from WolfWriter
Review:
Well, you've got me by the intrigue glands. I am hooked on this fic, if only to find out who it is.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Sheppard will love her when he hears what she named the Stargate!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from vampygal
Review:
Nice to see you back on FFN. Interesting start! I'm not guessing who at this point. I have ideas, but.....
I have to admit, I was hoping you would continue the story of Libby the vampire slayer set during colonial days.
Comments from author:
I plan to, eventually. Trying to get my feet wet again....
Review By [vampygal] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from Jbperkins
Review:
This has been a refreshing start. It's not often that you see something different or unexpected in a new story. I'm looking forward to what adventures the courier encounters.
Review By [Jbperkins] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from oldscout
Review:
Very well written. Judging by the descriptive style you're using it looks like this is going to be a long story. It would be such a disappointment if you end it after 3 or 4 chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I plan for that. It's going to take at least five or six just to finish the "setup".
Review By [oldscout] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nice so far. My guess appears to be true... I like that she has a sense of humor about the situation and doesn't automatically go "chapp'ai" like we have some of the scoobies do in some stories.
Comments from author:
That's because (as we will come to find out) she's never heard of it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alone" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like it, and do have my guesses based on the voice and circumstances.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from Xelab
Review:
Hmm so...

- not a slayer
- speculating on the origin of the mountains = better then average education (or well read?)
- mostly a city girl
- Pale blue eyes
- Sunnydale is "home"
- long hair
- daughter of English literature
- tall one in the family

The only one who comes to mind is Dawn
Comments from author:
Plate tectonics. The glories of a California education! Be careful, though... one of those... well...
Review By [Xelab] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jewelry" from Rich
Review:
Aha !! "the tall one in the family", blue eyes, long hair - DAWN !! (right ?)

BTW, another good chapter.
Review By [Rich] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alone" from Rich
Review:
This isn't conclusive evidence, but the heroine has trouble sitting up* while wearing a fifty pound pack - which a slayer could probably do easily if she really wanted to. So, my guess (for now), is that this isn't a slayer.

It's too early to comment on the plot, but I liked the writing here - you did a nice job of setting the scene, and describing the scenery.

* I recently watched a DVD of Victor Borge, in which he asks the question : "why do we sit up at night but sit down in the daytime ?"
Comments from author:
Well spotted. That was one of the two intentional clues I left in the chapter (and the other was a bit more esoteric).
Review By [Rich] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alone" from purrfus
Review:
Tantalizing.
Comments from author:
Already have most of 2 written, stay tuned!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alone" from Oxnate
Review:
You write well. But you seem to be unaware of how annoying it is trying to guess who the main character is.

I'll keep an eye out for this once it reaches 5 or 6 chapters. Or just reply to this comment once you do the big reveal.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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